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Spiralling Stardust Sight

Spiralling Stardust Sight Chasing clusters of dust and Venus vapid lust We sail and we sway throughout the Milky Way In a thrust, we land on a planet of candescent crust And with dynamic display spiralling star dust spray Jupiter and its moon Callisto a calamitous cocoon With craters of ice, the shivering silence shall suffice Off to Mars by noon on a botanical baronial balloon It has paid the price with scars that scabrously splice And lest we not forget Pluto a throw away or asset A tiny pinhole within the cosmic super galactic bowl On the night we met the stars shining as we sweat The love that you stole along with my heart and soul All this on a spontaneous starry narcotising night Within a spiralling stardust spraying sensuous sight. Oct.11.2017 The Cosmos Sponsored by: Thvia Shetley First submitted on May.07.2017 Resurrected for this entry

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Date: 11/2/2017 5:29:00 PM
Hey WW hope you are well, this is a mesmerizing write, loved your internal rhymes, yes that's right, I don't get bored of saying that. I told Maria on your collab poem you sound like a rapper the way your mono rhymes popped, you are one of the best rhymers on this site!
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Date: 10/26/2017 10:24:00 AM
Dear Winged Warrior: Interesting write you have here. Leon
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Date: 10/12/2017 7:01:00 PM
A sumptuous write Winged Warrior. Beautiful rhyme and imagery and reads as smooth and delicious as melted chocolate. A yummy delight of a write! Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 10/12/2017 5:50:00 AM
A journey through the cosmos--well written, as always--best for a win WW!
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Date: 10/12/2017 4:20:00 AM
Good morning Winged Warrior...You're out in space... Safe journey my friend... I enjoyed your poem....
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Date: 10/11/2017 11:58:00 PM
My My, what can I say!! This is truly a Masterpiece. An amazing write my friend. You've set the standard high, and I think this in my opinion is a Winner, with capitals WW all over it...Maria oh and a fave
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