Winged Warrior Poet Sonnet

Spiralling Stardust Sight

Spiralling Stardust Sight



Chasing clusters of dust and Venus vapid lust
We sail and we sway throughout the Milky Way
In a thrust, we land on a planet of candescent crust
And with dynamic display spiralling star dust spray

Jupiter and its moon Callisto a calamitous cocoon
With craters of ice, the shivering silence shall suffice
Off to Mars by noon on a botanical baronial balloon
It has paid the price with scars that scabrously splice

And lest we not forget Pluto a throw away or asset
A tiny pinhole within the cosmic super galactic bowl
On the night we met the stars shining as we sweat
The love that you stole along with my heart and soul

All this on a spontaneous starry narcotising night
Within a spiralling stardust spraying sensuous sight.




Oct.11.2017
The Cosmos
Sponsored by: Thvia Shetley 



First submitted on May.07.2017
Resurrected for this entry

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John Hamilton November 2, 2017 at 5:29 PM Hey WW hope you are well, this is a mesmerizing write, loved your internal rhymes, yes that's right, I don't get bored of saying that. I told Maria on your collab poem you sound like a rapper the way your mono rhymes popped, you are one of the best rhymers on this site!

Leon Enriquez October 26, 2017 at 10:24 AM Dear Winged Warrior: Interesting write you have here. Leon

Susan Ashley October 12, 2017 at 7:01 PM A sumptuous write Winged Warrior. Beautiful rhyme and imagery and reads as smooth and delicious as melted chocolate. A yummy delight of a write! Good luck in the contest!

Vijay Pandit October 12, 2017 at 5:50 AM A journey through the cosmos--well written, as always--best for a win WW!

Arturo Michael October 12, 2017 at 4:20 AM Good morning Winged Warrior...You're out in space... Safe journey my friend... I enjoyed your poem....

Maria Williams October 11, 2017 at 11:58 PM My My, what can I say!! This is truly a Masterpiece. An amazing write my friend. You've set the standard high, and I think this in my opinion is a Winner, with capitals WW all over it...Maria oh and a fave