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As Sharp As a Razor

Me barber’s still one of them blokes who lives the school of old,
using methods quite old fashioned to what modern trends unfold,
so with scissors, clippers, hot towel, then lathered with a brush,
he’ll shave you with a cutthroat, though never in a rush.

And he offers further benefits, if you’re that way inclined,
for just a couple of extra bob, you get your shoes well shined,
and while waiting for your turn, you can read a magazine,
or tune in on conversation, while his razors shaving clean.

He sells those huge cigars as well. I think the Cuban brand!
And there’s Californian Poppy that the young won’t understand.
Wafting through his barber shop is the smell of after shave…
And today there is one customer, who wants to misbehave.

He’ll be in the chair before me; I have to put up with his rot,
his voice is loud and won’t shut up, intimidating all us lot,
so when his time had come, we hoped he’d give us all a spell,
then he demands a shave and haircut and to shine his shoes as well.

I watched the barber lathering, before he beckoned with a call…
then this beautiful young woman came and stood in front of all.
The barber mentioned “Here’s a customer, wanting you to shine his shoes”
and when she bent down to do the job she gave some awesome views.

The loudmouth couldn’t help himself; he had to open up his gob.
He mentioned to the pretty lass, that when she finishes her job,
they ought to sneak away together, and book themselves a motel room,
but from the lass who shone his shoes, a shock’s about to loom!

She smiled into his soaped up face, and gave his shoe a pat,
“I’m sorry sir, I’m married and my husband wouldn’t like that.”
“Your husband!” Scoffed the loudmouth, “Use your commonsense!
Tell him you’re working overtime and I’ll pay you the difference.”

The lass raised her brow and gave a grin, then his shoe a final wipe.
She stood up and took a deep breath before replying to his hype,
“Your offers pretty good” she said, “I’ll go and get my hat and coat,
but you can tell him if you like… he’s got the razor at your throat.”

©2005 Lindsay Laurie
Categories: soaped, humor,
Form: Rhyme

Say You Love Me

Don't say you love me with a rose, your generic  lines of poetry reading off like a gift card from the dollar store, your hurried scrambled lines of apology jotted down with a dying pen, Promises of going out for a treat later the next morning. Don't say you love me with a rose.

If you loved me you would know, that being greeted with my favorite flowers was a first, and the smell would be so sweet tears would spring into my garden eyes, you would know that five minutes of careful thought, written on a plain piece of paper would be cherished more than a dollar fifty seven card, and your changing actions and regret filled eyes would speak more words than your scribbled apology of meaningless words.

You would know I would rather be greeted in bed with a kiss good morning beautiful, and the ability to curl up warm against your body again, than risen from my sleep to get a seven dollar breakfast meal at a diner, coffee never sweet enough and a five dollar tip to our waitress, who can't seem to take her eyes off you. 

You would know that the way you wash my hair and run your soaped hands over my body beneath the warm water would slip me into a heaven so heated I would not feel when the shower went cold, and that your gentle touch and the growl in your throat would distract me from all earthly things. You would know I'd much rather that, in our cramped little shower, than spend a day at the spa for a treat. 

You would know, lying asleep in your lap, my legs dangling from the couch, the overbearing heat of the blanket tucking me in to peaceful dreams, and the ability to kiss your brow and brush your cheek when you were haunted by your dreams, would be much preferred to me sleeping alone on the couch,  and you on the floor looking to make me comfortable. 

You would know, by my eyes, that I looked at you, like you were all the light in the universe, and without you, I was just an empty abyss. And that you couldn't possibly look down on someone you loved like that. You would know that I deserved more than a generic rose, and store bought card, an apology and a broken heart.
Categories: soaped, heartbroken, i love you,
Form: Free verse

The Old Hand Saw

...for Ted Kooser

A reminder of my father; 
more antique than useful it was tucked 
inside my tool box ever ready to be used.
Soaped and sharpened many times 
the blade was keen and hungry.
I took it with me everywhere 
'til pure gave way to power,
and through the years it waited,
I could never give it up. 
The skilsaw superseded; a cold, 
efficient implement that did as it was told,
never a slip. As my effectiveness 
fell short, my eyes became unsure,
my hands bore witness to the times
I slipped and sliced until I bled 
when choosing my old friend. 
Museum pieces, he and I, 
both worn and put away; 
I still recall the touch, the feel, 
the smell of yesterday.
Categories: soaped, tribute, writing,
Form: Verse

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Premium Member Halloween Two Oh One Nine

Halloween Two Oh One Nine 
By Franklin Price
10/31/2019

Halloween two-oh-one-nine
Not what it used to be
As when I trick or treated
And the candy was for me

There were no giant super stores
With costumes by the score
No internet, no Amazon
For delivery to my door

I wore a sheet, went as a ghost
For candy took a sack
Did not have an I-phone
That my parents then could track

When young, my siblings took me
Was the youngest of them all
They were too old to trick or treat
So they took me to the ball

They wore masks, just to please me,
To show me how to play the game
When doors were opened, with the candy,
They held their sacks to get the same

No one would refuse them
For they had a tyke in hand
And did not want soaped windows
Or a place for eggs to land

Today is so much different
Trick-or-treaters very few
Might be taken by a pervert
Maybe even poisoned too

Trust is there no longer
To trick or treat from door to door
Back in the day, when we got home,
Dumped our candy on the floor

Was not put there for inspection
But to see how we had fared
From the trick-or-treat providers
Who gave us goodies 'cause they cared
Categories: soaped, halloween,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member canon service



"canon service"

“We follow the rules here”, he said incorruptibly
like he was untainted as holy water 
from the incorruptible font,
he had an upward inflection in his voice 
at the end of every punctuated point,
delivered like a canon service
his gun and bullets were larger
apparently...he was high, the pulpit lofty
far above the soaped-up sinners
some of us inside were grinning

too much alter wine
he was probably juiced,
then unctuously he shared his fat sermon 
as if to convey to the congregated
a good and proper sluicing, 
the service was poetic
no hymns in this church
salvation tamborines 
to beat the devils out,
some of us inside were grinning



Candide Diderot. ‘23








canon.
cannon.
Categories: soaped, dark, humor, muse,
Form: Free verse

A Game of Snakes and Ladders

"A Game of Snakes and Ladders"

It’s like a game,
a game of 
Snakes
and Ladders,

some spend their lives
climbing ladders
up the corporate sticks
sliding all the way 
back down on their sore
sweet and sorry revelations
soap boxes thrown and burnt
like needles lost in hay
we all become 
redundant at some point
on some slippery soaped-up stage
greeted by the Dickinson himself 
holding all the horses’ reins...





“She parked Silver Lady by The Road's side, 
placed the keys in Her pocket 
Her hands were warm Her eyes were cold 
She smiled a tight smile 
You know, full of passion, full of ire - 
Her heart was an inferno, 
inside her was a Wicker Man 
Her heart was burning up, on fire 

Ferociously She slammed the car door 
and walked into the Woods ...” 



(LadyLabyrinth / 2023)








“We slowly drove – He knew no haste
And I had put away
My labor and my leisure too,
For His Civility –

Since then – 'tis Centuries – and yet
Feels shorter than the Day
I first surmised the Horses' Heads
Were toward Eternity – “
Categories: soaped, journey, muse, mystery,
Form: Narrative


Cats Are Funny

Although you don't mean to be,
you're funny to behold
and when you pull those faux-pas,
my laughter can't be controlled.

First you tie yourself in knots 
and then climb up the wall.
I find you in the laundry	
or in the shower stall.

Once you rolled across the bed
and then fell on your head.
Looked at me as if to say
"If you laugh at me, you're dead."

Tried to jump to sit by me
and you missed the chair.
You just turned and stared at me
like you didn't have a care.

You perched on the curtain rod,
the queen of all you see.
but when you lost your footing
you got up and glared at me.  

When you tried to get a drink
and in the toilet fell,
almost choked, so not to laugh,
but I knew that you could tell.

When you find a paper bag,
you think that it's your house;
crawl inside and try to hide,
like you were a tiny mouse.

When it's time to have a bath,
you howl and scratch and scream.
When you're soaped and soaking wet,
your eye takes on dang'rous gleam

You play with bathroom tissue
and really make a mess,
but I just put up with you,
'cause I couldn't love you less.

When you make funny faces,
I really want to laugh,
but I do restrain myself,
because you don't get the gaffe.

All in all, I have to say
that cats are comical,
but all their crazy antics
make life so wonderful.
Categories: soaped, cat, funny, humor, humorous,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Twins

Of whooshy bottoms I do speak,
     Across the tub they do squeak.
     Cheek to cheek over tub and tile,
     My little girl likes to slide in style.
     She invites folks over two at a time,
     Splits their quarters,
     And keeps a dime.
     Sets her friends up at the tubs far end,
     Makes sure bottoms are soaped for a slide to the end.
     Speed trials have always been fun,
     Until the soap holder came to an end.
© Kim Stone  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: soaped, 3rd grade, fun,
Form: Rhyme

By Any Other Name

BY  ANY  OTHER  NAME


Turned-down petals ready for kissing. Her glove
So velveteen;  and with unseen love
A teardrop of silver dews on her gentle curve nigh
In hope that  a lover may pass close by.
I hesitate to touch so fragile a creature
For she may be the last of summer,
In a once jostling garden proud and crowded within.
Her bouquet is subtle, is freshly-washed skin: 
I feel the perfume of her soaped damask
On the  warm air of evening.  She does not ask
As the sun withdraws his glowing approval,
But here I remain  -  her only admirer and thrall.

. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Entered in  Poet ~ Destroyer’s  Contest  “ any rose will do. ....... (poems of roses contest)”
Categories: soaped, love, may,
Form: Couplet

This Crazy Non Rich Caucasian Baby Boomer

Albeit cold shower with sudden zoo
ming onset of
brisk fallen temperatures
may not be amenable to you
dear reader, but after Matthew
sets to washing
creating substantial lather,

visited with healthy slew
of frothed shampooed hair do
(cuz - jest like
Spongebobsquarepants,
I like abundant suds),
which initial shock
     of cold water jolts mine
     body inducing "Whew"

to escape soaped over mouth
     (here, lemme lean in
     so yukon get a whiff)
     this self proscribed
     quasi (very diluted off the
     Peco boo grid) deprivation
     of hot H2O tolerance,
     qua minimal self

     elected survivalist
     modus operandi value
bull electric kool aid acid test
     undertaken in the
     event devastating adversity
     (mainly an electricity
     power outage) doth render
     livingsocial uncomfortably

     cold to the bone and sinew,
where mind over matter decides
     riches superfluous,
     especially if parvenu,
when scads of back up
     generators conk out
     total unbelievable wreckage,
     sans the overnight

     natural germane Blitzkrieg
     imposes savage apocalyptic
     devastating hellacious milieu
     (on account of a mega disaster
     such as hurricane Michael), who
doth not indiscriminate
     toward gentile or Jew
obliterating entire infra

     structure super glue
equalizing economic disparity hew
wing fair playing field reducing
     whether disposable wealth harkens
     from "old" money, and/or nouveau
riche, this sudden
     catastrophic event brew

till lee decrees indeterminate
     penury, and trappings
     of theoretical leisure class
     bon voyage every stitch of cloth,
and other material goods
     forcibly bade i.e. adieu.
Categories: soaped, 11th grade, 12th grade,
Form: Free verse

Hail Mother

Hail Mother full of beauty and graces
Give us this day our butter and white bread
Hear our chorus, our cherubic faces
Without thee our bellies would sing instead


While in tears and in fears we still moped
Our heads bowed, for all that we have transgressed
With her hair this dirty floor she has soaped
We shall spend the day in corners recessed


Shall we plead our case until thee will deign
And Mother may thy hymns sing of thy home
Our sin thee forgive, we hail thee again
Without thine voice, forever we shall roam


We bend our knees low to thee, our wishes
That thee would heal our harms with thy kisses

------
Happy Mother's Day
Categories: soaped, children, mother, mothers day,
Form: Sonnet

Animal Antics

Although you don't mean to be,
you're funny to behold
and when you pull those faux-pas,
my laughter can't be controlled.

First you tie yourself in knots 
and then climb up the wall.
I find you in the laundry	
or in the shower stall.

Once you rolled across the bed
and then fell on your head.
Looked at me as if to say
"If you laugh at me, you're dead."

Tried to jump to sit by me
and you missed the chair.
You just turned and stared at me
like you didn't have a care.

You perched on the curtain rod,
the queen of all you see.
but when you lost your footing
you got up and glared at me.  

When you tried to get a drink
and in the toilet fell,
almost choked, so not to laugh,
but I knew that you could tell.

When you find a paper bag,
you think that it's your house;
crawl inside and try to hide,
like you were a tiny mouse.

When it's time to have a bath,
you howl and scratch and scream.
When you're soaped and soaking wet,
your eye takes on dang'rous gleam

You play with bathroom tissue
and really make a mess,
but I just put up with you,
'cause I couldn't love you less.

When you make funny faces,
I really want to laugh,
but I do restrain myself,
because you don't get the gaffe.

All in all, I have to say
that cats are comical,
but all their crazy antics
make life so wonderful.

Written 9/9/16
Categories: soaped, cat, humor,
Form: Rhyme

The Old Hand Saw

...for Ted Kooser

 
A reminder of my father; 
more antique than useful it was tucked 
inside my tool box ever ready to be used.
Soaped and sharpened many times 
the blade was keen and hungry.
I took it with me everywhere 
'til pure gave way to power,
and through the years it waited,
I could never give it up. 
The skilsaw superseded; a cold, 
efficient implement that did as it was told,
never a slip. As my effectiveness
fell short, my eyes became unsure,
my hands bore witness to the times
I slipped and sliced until I bled 
when choosing my old friend. 
Museum pieces, he and I, 
both worn and put away; 
I still recall the touch, the feel,
the smell of yesterday.
Categories: soaped, dedication, devotion, friendship,
Form: Verse

Spin Cycle -It's a Wash

My thoughts are laundered,
       all soaped up and soaking;
  cold and hot water rushed
       round and round in bubbles. 
Dirty and clean blend in the soup
       swirling in the mixed myriad of dreams;
  lost to its original form and use intent
       faded colors mixing in the froth.
A word spoken, taken back again, slips and slides
       mesmerized by the true reality guides
  of wash and rinse, dry wrinkles unhinged
      as life adheres to the cyclic spin.
© DM Babbit  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: soaped, analogy, appreciation, life,
Form: Rhyme

The Old Hand Saw

...for Ted Kooser


A reminder of my father; 
more antique than useful it was tucked 
inside my tool box ever ready to be used.
Soaped and sharpened many times 
the blade was keen and hungry.
I took it with me everywhere 
'til pure gave way to power,
and through the years it waited,
I could never give it up. 
The skilsaw superseded; a cold, 
efficient implement that did as it was told,
never a slip. As my effectiveness 
fell short, my eyes became unsure,
my hands bore witness to the times
I slipped and sliced until I bled 
when choosing my old friend. 
Museum pieces, he and I, 
both worn and put away; 
I still recall the touch, the feel, 
the smell of yesterday.
Categories: soaped, inspirational, uplifting,
Form: Verse
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