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"canon service" “We follow the rules here”, he said incorruptibly like he was untainted as holy water from the incorruptible font, he had an upward inflection in his voice at the end of every punctuated point, delivered like a canon service his gun and bullets were larger apparently...he was high, the pulpit lofty far above the soaped-up sinners some of us inside were grinning too much alter wine he was probably juiced, then unctuously he shared his fat sermon as if to convey to the congregated a good and proper sluicing, the service was poetic no hymns in this church salvation tamborines to beat the devils out, some of us inside were grinning Candide Diderot. ‘23 canon. cannon.

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Date: 6/6/2024 3:40:00 PM
No canonisation of the canon here, I’ve seen many of these guys in a past life, gotta say just the right amount of irreverence shown for the reverend, so well written Candide, I’d never manage such a well polished piece of poetry, yes I was one of the terrified but also grinning too! Cheers David Cheers
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Date: 6/7/2024 12:43:00 AM
Merci.
Date: 5/27/2024 5:45:00 PM
Lilith.
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Date: 5/27/2024 5:46:00 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_deconstructed_lilith_1185651
Date: 5/27/2024 4:40:00 AM
She Rise Up.
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Candide Diderot
Date: 5/27/2024 4:41:00 AM
LYRICS/ She Rise Up/Lynch (Crazy Clown Time). https://genius.com/David-lynch-she-rise-up-lyrics
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Candide Diderot
Date: 5/27/2024 4:41:00 AM
https://youtu.be/sRno8J4byjs?si=11GrhZfX_APReMDw

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