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Date: 10/6/2015 4:27:00 PM
Rereading these beautiful lines. hugs xx
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Date: 5/28/2015 10:56:00 PM
Super thoughts...Brilliant note...Your note is a great poem "I always wished to be a domesticated Rose,but somehow I know I will always be a daisy".... Best to you from my heart dear....
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Date: 5/28/2015 10:21:00 AM
Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!
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Date: 5/23/2015 12:26:00 PM
A well composed poem with an emotional release finding its way into our hearts. Emile. #7
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Date: 5/20/2015 3:42:00 PM
A beautiful write from a beautiful soul....your verse does amaze Charmaine; faving this! Keith:-)
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Date: 5/15/2015 9:36:00 AM
This write gives hope for the daisy. In a field of roses, I think one will always go for the daisy. Nicely written.
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Date: 5/14/2015 9:24:00 AM
Another beauty from you Charma, have to admit you made me smile throughout this gem ;) love and hugs Wilma
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Date: 5/14/2015 6:51:00 AM
I prefer Daisies over Roses. You can't look at a daisy and not break out in a smile. Great poem Charmaine.
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Date: 5/12/2015 9:13:00 AM
Your soft mellow write....gentle and sweet...signature you. Don't change, Charmaine. Your writing is so beautiful. Hugs
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Date: 5/8/2015 10:44:00 PM
Beautiful!!!
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Date: 5/7/2015 8:15:00 AM
That was REALLY cool! I came over to wish you a belated birthday... and found the origional Daisy... herself!... I'm more like a lilac... Me and my menagerie stay clumped in a group of little parts... We're not much to look at alone... But gain momentum when together... Happy Belated Birthday!
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Date: 5/8/2015 4:38:00 AM
Awawaw!!!Thanks for the lovely greetings..A big hug x
Date: 5/6/2015 12:45:00 PM
you are a rare daisy!.. enchanted by your picturesque words, charms.. ohh, please join the contest.. huggs
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Date: 5/6/2015 5:30:00 AM
Wow, this poem flows like hot butter across sauteing mushooms. Beautifully done.
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Date: 5/5/2015 5:02:00 PM
This is really lovely, Charm!! This unpretentious margarita could so easily be a romantic and contest winner! // Thank you for reading and commenting on my senryu "Love is Free". // paul
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Date: 5/5/2015 12:30:00 PM
A delightful read shame you are not submitting it to the contest:-( Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 5/5/2015 9:21:00 AM
A delightful read! I remember, years ago, picking the petals of the daisy. He loves me, he loves me not.
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Date: 5/4/2015 6:28:00 PM
The Margarita daisy does describe you well...Your dawn will glow once more Charma....hugs Tim
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