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                                    Zira
                         You bring me peace
                    With your head on my lap
                 I gently stroke your wavy hair
            Lovingly I bend to kiss your forehead
                Thanking God for giving me you
                    You have become my calm
                            My loyal friend 
                                    Zira


Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
Used my Path Number 9
09.15.2014
For Contest: Tell me your Number
Andrea Dietrich
3rd

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/6/2014 5:59:00 PM
Lovely...sweet ... and gentle......and it flows. I assume this is a pet dog or cat. Congrats on a merited win, Brenda! // paul
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/6/2014 8:22:00 PM
Thank you Paul. She's my 4 year old Dog.
Date: 10/5/2014 6:55:00 PM
Lovely piece,Brenda...Congrats on your well deserved win..
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/5/2014 10:37:00 PM
Thanks Olusegun
Date: 10/5/2014 6:01:00 AM
What a great subject to write about! Congratulations, loved it!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/5/2014 12:53:00 PM
Thanks Roy.
Date: 10/5/2014 5:39:00 AM
Brenda, your poem is soft, warm, and beautiful.. Congrats on a much deserved win!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/5/2014 12:52:00 PM
Thank you Dave
Date: 10/5/2014 5:30:00 AM
aww this is a heart warming one, about a beloved pet, I gather - congrats on your win in the contest :)
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/5/2014 12:51:00 PM
Thank you Charlotte.
Date: 10/4/2014 4:17:00 PM
Congrats, Brenda; I love the love I feel in this poem. Hope you are doing well.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/4/2014 5:19:00 PM
Thanks Faye, all is well.
Date: 10/4/2014 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning piece, Brenda, enjoyed reading it again.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/4/2014 12:58:00 PM
Thanks Reason.
Date: 10/4/2014 12:12:00 PM
A beautiful piece about unrequited love...hugs Tim
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/4/2014 12:57:00 PM
Oh, mama loves her baby.
Date: 10/4/2014 11:01:00 AM
Congratulations, Brenda!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/4/2014 12:56:00 PM
Thanks Hija
Date: 10/4/2014 10:55:00 AM
Great tribute n a brilliant write Brenda! Congrats on ur awesome win my good friend!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/4/2014 12:56:00 PM
Thanks so much Dr. Sharma
Date: 10/4/2014 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations on this beneficial win that might expose this gem to more readers. !CONGRATULATIONS BRENDA!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/4/2014 10:19:00 AM
Thanks Maurice, I'm glad you enjoyed reading this.
Date: 10/4/2014 8:21:00 AM
This poem pays homage to pets. They use animals in hospitals because of all the benefits they provide. I love, love, love this poem.
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Date: 10/4/2014 5:52:00 AM
Nice write on pet, congrats on the win, Brenda
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Date: 10/4/2014 4:09:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Brenda:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/4/2014 1:52:00 AM
Who could not fall in love with this one? It's sweet as can be. Congrats in my contest, number 9.
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Date: 9/25/2014 11:17:00 PM
Would like to meet your Zira, pets can be like children in many ways. A lovely rictameter to honor him/her. Wishing you the best in the contest to a friend who shares my number - 9.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/26/2014 8:25:00 AM
Thanks Reason. She is my baby. :-).
Date: 9/16/2014 3:33:00 PM
such a tender write about a loyal pet Brenda. I do hope you place well in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/17/2014 9:00:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan.
Date: 9/16/2014 12:26:00 PM
- Beautiful, Brenda! - Wishing you good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/16/2014 2:09:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise
Date: 9/16/2014 1:38:00 AM
Tenderness flows throughout the poem with the purity of your heart! Wonderfully done! Good luck in the contest, dear Brenda!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/16/2014 9:10:00 AM
Thank you Demetrius For stopping by and your kind comment.