Brenda Meier-Hans Poet Rictameter

I'M a 9 Revised

Zira
                         You bring me peace
                    With your head on my lap
                 I gently stroke your wavy hair
            Lovingly I bend to kiss your forehead
                Thanking God for giving me you
                    You have become my calm
                            My loyal friend 
                                    Zira


Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
Used my Path Number 9
09.15.2014
For Contest: Tell me your Number
Andrea Dietrich
3rd

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Paul Callus October 6, 2014 at 5:59 PM Lovely...sweet ... and gentle......and it flows. I assume this is a pet dog or cat. Congrats on a merited win, Brenda! // paul Brenda Meier-Hans October 6, 2014 at 8:22 PM Thank you Paul. She's my 4 year old Dog.

Olusegun Arowolo October 5, 2014 at 6:55 PM Lovely piece,Brenda...Congrats on your well deserved win.. Brenda Meier-Hans October 5, 2014 at 10:37 PM Thanks Olusegun

Roy Jerden October 5, 2014 at 6:01 AM What a great subject to write about! Congratulations, loved it! Brenda Meier-Hans October 5, 2014 at 12:53 PM Thanks Roy.

Charlotte Puddifoot October 5, 2014 at 5:30 AM aww this is a heart warming one, about a beloved pet, I gather - congrats on your win in the contest :) Brenda Meier-Hans October 5, 2014 at 12:51 PM Thank you Charlotte.

Faye Gibson October 4, 2014 at 4:17 PM Congrats, Brenda; I love the love I feel in this poem. Hope you are doing well. Brenda Meier-Hans October 4, 2014 at 5:19 PM Thanks Faye, all is well.

Reason A. Poteet October 4, 2014 at 12:39 PM Congratulations on your winning piece, Brenda, enjoyed reading it again. Brenda Meier-Hans October 4, 2014 at 12:58 PM Thanks Reason.

Tim Smith October 4, 2014 at 12:12 PM A beautiful piece about unrequited love...hugs Tim Brenda Meier-Hans October 4, 2014 at 12:57 PM Oh, mama loves her baby.

Hija De La Luna October 4, 2014 at 11:01 AM Congratulations, Brenda! Brenda Meier-Hans October 4, 2014 at 12:56 PM Thanks Hija

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 4, 2014 at 10:55 AM Great tribute n a brilliant write Brenda! Congrats on ur awesome win my good friend! Brenda Meier-Hans October 4, 2014 at 12:56 PM Thanks so much Dr. Sharma

Maurice Yvonne October 4, 2014 at 8:23 AM Congratulations on this beneficial win that might expose this gem to more readers. !CONGRATULATIONS BRENDA! Brenda Meier-Hans October 4, 2014 at 10:19 AM Thanks Maurice, I'm glad you enjoyed reading this.

Maurice Yvonne October 4, 2014 at 8:21 AM This poem pays homage to pets. They use animals in hospitals because of all the benefits they provide. I love, love, love this poem.

Dr.Ram Mehta October 4, 2014 at 5:52 AM Nice write on pet, congrats on the win, Brenda

Jan Allison October 4, 2014 at 4:09 AM Dropping back with my congratulations Brenda:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich October 4, 2014 at 1:52 AM Who could not fall in love with this one? It's sweet as can be. Congrats in my contest, number 9.

Reason A. Poteet September 25, 2014 at 11:17 PM Would like to meet your Zira, pets can be like children in many ways. A lovely rictameter to honor him/her. Wishing you the best in the contest to a friend who shares my number - 9. Brenda Meier-Hans September 26, 2014 at 8:25 AM Thanks Reason. She is my baby. :-).

Jan Allison September 16, 2014 at 3:33 PM such a tender write about a loyal pet Brenda. I do hope you place well in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx Brenda Meier-Hans September 17, 2014 at 9:00 PM Thanks so much Jan.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 16, 2014 at 12:26 PM - Beautiful, Brenda! - Wishing you good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Brenda Meier-Hans September 16, 2014 at 2:09 PM Thank you Anne Lise

Demetrios Trifiatis September 16, 2014 at 1:38 AM Tenderness flows throughout the poem with the purity of your heart! Wonderfully done! Good luck in the contest, dear Brenda! Brenda Meier-Hans September 16, 2014 at 9:10 AM Thank you Demetrius For stopping by and your kind comment.