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Red Barchettadrive

Date: 10/25/2015 12:36:00 AM

He'd be a fool not to! 7+ Charmaine!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/10/2015 10:36:00 PM

Wow Charmaine, that first line, set the scene right there, and still makes us wonder! Loved this!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/10/2015 9:11:00 AM

I enjoyed rereading this one Charmaine.

James Inman

Date: 10/7/2015 3:54:00 AM

Lovely, Charmaine.

Kevin Leake

Date: 10/5/2015 10:28:00 AM

What can I say Charma, You blew me away with this piece!!! Lovely Kevin

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/5/2015 7:58:00 AM

Wow! This is hot Charmaine, with a sandman like this women will be flocking to their beds.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/1/2015 3:48:00 PM

one dream i'd like to have again and again, charms... majestic work, charms.. enticed!.. huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2015 2:41:00 AM

this is so enchanting. You are magic with your pen!

The Grahamburglar

Date: 9/30/2015 8:04:00 PM

I really liked this. It was romantic and elegantly worded. I read through it a few times just for good measure. I think the softly flowing style fits the piece well. I am particularly fond of the line: "Their hearts have touched lightly but thoughts mingled deep..." what a beautiful and concise way of expressing a connection beyond the superficial emotions of early love. You got a 7 from this guy. =)

Tim Smith

Date: 9/30/2015 3:37:00 PM

I love the picture. It accentuates the poem. : )

Miraj Raha

Date: 9/30/2015 9:32:00 AM

What a pretty girl in the pic,those lines suited her and her undying love for him.

Eric Boddie

Date: 9/30/2015 7:43:00 AM

as someone with insomnia I will say....these words provide a Beautiful display....they make me think of my Beautiful little great niece....as I see her slumber, I feel the greatest peace....;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/30/2015 5:04:00 AM

- A lovely poem, Charmaine ! (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/30/2015 2:55:00 AM

How sweetly you slumber in touches of love as your heart breathes gently for the one you love...this poem just makes me want to nibble on your heart Charma. "Their hearts have touched lightly but thoughts mingled deep..." that's romantic...J.A.B.