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Twas the Night Before Christmas -Slightly Revised

‘Twas the night before Christmas, and once in my bed, no visions of anything danced in my head. The night – uneventful - no kids bothered me. No sound of small feet rushing out to the tree! My husband lay snoring at least until ten. I put on some TV just waiting for when my daughter, her spouse, and their kids (older now) would show up for dinner - the meat from a cow! No turkey, no ham. I much prefer beef. My son-in-law’s vegan. I’d feed him a leaf. There’s not much unwrapping of gifts any more. It’s more likely gift cards that teens all adore. Gift cards for movies or things at some store and inside of envelops, money galore. Gone are the days of wrapping all night toys for the kiddies, and I guess that’s all right. It sure took forever to have to exert energy wrapping. . . it made my back hurt! But in a few years, wee girls and wee boys (great-grand-kids) I’ll see ripping wrapping off toys! Dec. 2, 2019 for Joseph May's the 'The Night Before 2' Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/15/2019 3:41:00 PM
A wonderful twist on the original, Andrea, and a well-deserved win. Kept me rapt to the end! Many thanks for your kind comments re my entry in the contest. Merry Christmas to you and your family. Looking mighty Christmassy in Col Springs today - just started snowing and more to come! Bob H
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Date: 12/14/2019 9:25:00 PM
Vegans get a leaf, I love that line, Congrats on your win Andrea..
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Date: 12/14/2019 2:32:00 PM
Great. That just about described our gifting experience etc. Congrats
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Date: 12/14/2019 1:25:00 PM
I loved this Andrea. "My son-in-law’s vegan. I’d feed him a leaf." This is so funny. Congratulations on your deserving second place win! Mele Kalikimaka! xxoo
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Date: 12/14/2019 1:04:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea. Well spun.
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Date: 12/14/2019 12:53:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Andrea
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Date: 12/14/2019 8:59:00 AM
So nice to have a personal connection to such a classic.
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Date: 12/14/2019 7:56:00 AM
This is SO GOOD--especially the part about feeding him a leaf! LOL! Congrats on your win Andrea! Janice
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Date: 12/4/2019 8:42:00 PM
This is truly incredible. You did an awesome job on this.
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Date: 12/4/2019 1:51:00 PM
Made me smile, laugh and miss those days with children around.
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Date: 12/2/2019 4:50:00 PM
You should win just for, "My son-in-law's vegan. I'd feed him a leaf!" Thanks for the laugh! Aloha! Rico
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/2/2019 6:01:00 PM
thank you very much. I do believe that is the first time you paid one of my lines a compliment. It was my favorite line in the poem as well.
Date: 12/2/2019 2:40:00 PM
Very well done! Ideas for this one have seeded in my brain but not yet bloomed. You did a great job delivering smiles with factual information. I have to rush - Tim and I have places to go and people to annoy but I want to read at least one more. I truly enjoyed this. Love, CayCay
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Date: 12/2/2019 1:59:00 PM
Hi Andrea very festive and warm hearted. Yes times have changed. We no longer gather with a large part of the family. Just my wife, daughter and I and we are happy with that. Miss the old Christmas`s though. Best of luck in the contest
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Date: 12/2/2019 11:24:00 AM
Brilliant Andrea, you're right it's all gift cards for the Apple store now, expensive time now. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 12/2/2019 11:00:00 AM
Andrea, I love this poem, though miss the days of wrapped presents piled around the Christmas tree. Memories of a rotating color filled light shining on tinsel bright. My how things have changed. But family is still the most important part of your marvelous poem. And all that matters in the end. -Richard
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Date: 12/2/2019 9:42:00 AM
Enjoyed the glimpse of night before, Andrea--true to life.
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