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Premium Member The Final Stand

And I witness
Your deplorable “glory”
Hunching over my tattered spine,
So we can have something in common

You walk with glorified shell-shock,
Another sentient tongue, 
Straddling on the Eros of vindication

Your sandpaper hands
Reach for an assaulted tenderness
Embracing lambasted lyric

Another tenor’s proclamation
That their oxidized octaves
Are legitimately sound

…

Nobody is listening.

…

So, you try to rectify your ill-erect
Compass
Only heading south
Bound
By meandering prophecies,
Unwritten
Undeclared

Just another pre-historic fool
Believing the Jamaican grass is greener on
The other side

Puff your corrupted beliefs
Toward laundered Benjamins
While I soak in the bloodied joy,
That I remain priceless

…

Approach me
While you suffer tiny warden syndrome
In High Definition

Be the insignificant syllable that 
Becomes, you, a fragmented figment
Of your re-imagination

Call in your slobbering pinchers and
Convince them why dethroning my smile
Will be that change you conspire,
Because I stood taller than the arrogant
Umbilical c(h)ord that breastfeeds your high horse

For I am you
I am you
Every kick, every punch, every verbal attack
Every overcompensating, born-again glare
You blasphemously portray

But, it is not me you scar.
IT IS NOT ME THAT YOU SCAR!

…

Your one-night stand with perception
Succumbs your third-eye

Keep drinking from your bloodied, rustic w(h)ine glass,
As you drown in your declarations of dependence
Screaming to be louder than love
Louder than your ordained intentions
To become a speck of importance

To be worth something,
Something more,
Than the lunging foot you believe
Will keep me down

©D.J.E.

Premium Member Xenophobia

A bsurd and foolish it might be
B ut it’s my nature, you’ll agree;
C annot ignore what I go through
D espite the help I get from you. 
E ach time a stranger comes in sight
F ragile emotions turn to fright
G et me excited at one glance
H opelessly standing in a trance. 
I ndeed I tremble, break in sweat
J ittery feelings that I get 
K nocking together both my knees
L ord, I go thinking, save me please!
M aybe the problem can be solved
N eeding a pro to get involved
O ut of the groove I have to move
P erhaps in time I will improve. 
Q uestions and answers are at hand
R eally I want to understand
S ome of the things that haunt my mind
T he doubts that I have to unwind.
U nless I act before it’s late
V enom of thought will seal my fate.
W ish that the phobia will now end
X eno reverting to a friend.  
Y earning to welcome all mankind
Z ealous to foster peace of mind.

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This poetic form is called “Abecedarian”.
This is an Acrostic where all the consecutive
letters of the alphabet are used. 
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30th Aug 2014
Contest: Abecedarian
Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton
Placing: 1st

Plea of David

David was an artist - before you and me
A Jewish psalmist - famous for Ps. 23
Various prayers had been sung, by Moses
In particular, psalm 90: before Time itself
David's God had been our Provider
Showing us faithfulness, generation by generation


Prove me, said David, but with Mercy
LORD, I sin against You when I sin at all
Ever pleaded thus: All sin is rebellion 
Against father-creator? He takes sin personally

NOTES: Psalm 51: 11- "Do not cast me from your Presence or take your Holy Spirit from me," cried David. Wash me, and I'll be whiter than snow!

DAVID was restored by God, now called 'a man after God's own heart,' and David became Israel's most beloved king. 'Beloved' is the meaning of David's name, too. Shalom, shalom. Ps.51 is changing me, hallelujah

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© Anil Deo  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Acrostic


Premium Member Liar

That’s how she saw me

A lying jerk
Filled with mal-intent
And inebriated twist of the devil’s tongue

She removed my smile
My patience
My need for her

She was a professor
with a Masters Degree in Investigative Drama

Drinking shots of animosity and scorn
From half-empty glass
Layered in a syllable abused tint

Sucking accountability, dry

She removed my smile
My patience
My want for her

Vials of sadness
Broken over mattress
Where I entered her
Into innocence realm

She begged for more
She begged me to stay

But, I was already marked from argument’s first revelation 

Because even when I held her hand
Even when I welcomed her into my arms
After being beaten for being her diamond ring’s shadow

Even when I brought her closer to peace
It wouldn’t ever be enough

My smallest mistakes would become Armageddon’s cry

My apologies
The tissue

She removed my smile
My patience
My trust for her

Because I
Was a piece of crap

An irregular painting titled: “The Bad Guy”

Messages of sangre coated angst
Going to wrong number

Her errors
Still made me see her as a precious woman
Waiting to regain her peace
Her identity

But I
Was a liar

A screw up

Our finish line had no ribbons
For she had already cut my c(h)ord

Silence
Cold shoulder
My only way to hold this peace

She thought she could leave me

But I
Was already gone

Her tears’ contempt made me let go
Fears’ discontent helped me confirm my Western sunsets

To
Fly

Fly
High

Fly
HIGH

For serenity’s wing behooves me to sway
Towards these winds of change
Solace will hold me on palm
 
As I wish with final prayer
That Karma
Goes easy on her

© Drake J. Eszes

A Victim of the War

A Victim of the war 
 * 
 Steve L. Siegel 
 December 2, 2014 
Once there lived a fine young city boy, 
once so brave, true and Restless, filled with 
energy And somewhat foolish too He went to join 
the US Army Adventure filled his mind He knew that 
for a soldier's life, all of this he was destined. 

He did his training in a camp at Ft. Ord Calif. 
Than on to Ft Benning GA, home of the jump school. 
Where he became a member of the 101 First Airborne 
Oh, man did he ever wear those silver jump wings proud 
and the Wings of the 101 First, Screaming Eagles. 
He did not know it at the time, but maybe he did, 
for he was destiny was Vietnam. 

They stole his feelings, taught him how to kill 
and walk those jungle trails And taught him 
that the enemy were the evil men 
Then he went off to fight a war that he might not 
of believed in but the call went out, now 
he'll serve his country's need; just as his dad 
had done in the last great war. 

Now the old young man of what was, 
Only now he's a shell of a man, 
A victim of the war now too. 
He can't seem to find himself in this world. 
His own nation has turned against him, 
the nightmares never seem to go away. 
His next door neighbor that he knew forever 
called him a baby-killer. Don't that beat all? 

Now he is on his fourth marriage, and they wonder 
why he can not stay put, his wife wonders why 
she end up going to bed alone most nights? 
It's because he has to make sure that 
everything is in place before 
he goes to bed; Yes, 
It's hell being a Victim of the damn war... 

For my bother who was killed in May of 68 and 
myself who I think sometimes part of me died 
at Albany with the 120 brothers of mine who 
did answer the roll call the next day in Oct of 65.
Form: Prose

Premium Member All the Hearts of Man Belong To God

ALL THE HEARTS OF MAN BELONG TO GOD

All the hearts of man
Belong to God and
Cicrumspects
Doing ones best
Evolving nothing less
For in His will, God’s will
God wants everyone to be healed
Heaven helps us all
In beneath our crawls
Jesus is the man
King of all these lands
Lord of Lords heaven and earth
Merciful, true and kind
Never ending banter
Oimpotent defender
Praise we shall be giving forever and ever


12/20/21
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2021©
Form: ABC


Premium Member Grace Worth

God with His grace*
Reaches down to me
Assuring His presence
Compassion-braced
Enriching my spirit.

Word of the Lord 
Opens to me grace-wonders
Rejuvenating faith with
Treasures of divine wisdom
Helpful for blessed service.

*Psalm 84:11 …The LORD will give grace and glory: no good thing will he withhold from them that walk uprightly.

March 27, 2019
Edited on April 24, 2021
1st place, "ALL YOURS (Apr 24)" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 4/24/2021.
Form: Acrostic

Premium Member Lord of My Life

Lord of my life is God Who reigns with majesty
Ordering my steps toward eternal grandeur
Restraining me from temptations’ infirmity 
Driving me, as by His grace-filled faith, I endure!

Optimized power for servant's heart He does grant
Fortitude He bestows to me, His called steward
Mercy and love He pours, making me jubilant
Yielded gladly am I to Him, now and onward!

Life with my Master is blissfully the greatest
In Him, I can surpass every test's turbulence
Forever He deserves my thanks and praises' best
Exalting His name I’ll  do by His providence!

Acrostic, Quatrain
August 18, 2018

4th place, "Honourable Mentions worth mentioning" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Richard Lamoureux; judged on 5/12/2019.
Form: Acrostic

Premium Member Lord, I Live For Your Glory

Lord, I live for Your glory; such is my commitment;

Obeying Your commands props my service-assignment

Reaching Your standards sets my heavenly attainment

Delighting in Your love* settles my faith-fulfillment!

*Romans 8:35 Who shall separate us from the love of Christ? shall tribulation, or distress, or persecution, or famine, or nakedness, or peril, or sword? Romans 8:39 Nor height, nor depth, nor any other creature, shall be able to separate us from the love of God, which is in Christ Jesus our Lord.

June 7, 2018
3rd Place, "When a Fourth Line Helps It to Rhyme" Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Silent One; judged on 6/13/2018.
Form: Quatrain

Canary In a Coal Mine

C-anary in a coal mine 
H-as kept you from peril; 
R-emain fully vigilant 
I-n the coming coldest chill. 
S-ee the canary in a coal mine, 
T-o be safe from any harm; 
I-f you are always aware, 
N-o way will wound touch your arm. 
E-arly warning of danger, 
J-eopardy's display of caution; 
O-n the thirtieth of July, 
Y-ou have God's protection. 

P-repare for the threat, 
A-n alarm sounds so loud; 
L-ord God will burn all things, 
M-aking them perish into the cloud. 
O-pen your eyes to menace, 
N-ever ignore the scupper's sign; 
E-vade the detrimental risk, 
S-ay the canary in a coal mine.
Form: Acrostic

Premium Member Lord God of My Life

Lord of my life is God*, granting me genuine liberty
Endowing me blessings to share and give earnestly
Imparting to me divine nature of spiritual impact
Loving me so much; guiding me through His leading
Assured am I of His presence, affirmatively available.

Lifter of my soul --- Jesus Christ deserves my loyalty
Almighty is He, my breath-Source and faith’s Author
Cheering me constantly by His compassion and care
Satisfying my spirit with His abundant sustenance
Instilling in my heart His Word toward godly influence
Nurturing me by His grace and mercy’s nourishment
Affirmed with His goodness, I am grateful to Him always.

*Psalm 18:2 The LORD is my rock, and my fortress, and my deliverer; my God, my strength, in whom I will trust; my buckler, and the horn of my salvation, and my high tower.

Dear Leila,
God be praised for granting you another year to experience His goodness, graciousness, and greatness in your life. A very blessed birthday to you. Thanks for being a blessing. I love you in the Lord.

December 21, 2021
Form: Acrostic

The Big Sky Part Two

It didn't take long
every manager there
tried signing both men.
Looking out for there
interest, calling making 
arrangements. Both men
were advised of what
they were getting involved
With. They choose a manager
and signed the contract.
A meddling Scooter Bainez
Came down and involved
himself, told both men
He looked forward to weaseling
his way into contention, and told
whoever lost should be made to
leave; cause didn't feel like hearing
no whiney helper licking his wounds
like a whiny brat!
The match went on.
At 22:19 " Meaty" Morehead of Ord
Came down to ringside and 
Apache Chopped  "The Kruel"Cast Guilder
allowing The Big sky , to gain the fall
at 30:01. The Big sky became the new
World's champion!
Form: Bio

Premium Member Chile

C herish and maintain 
H ope and faith
I n God our Father
L ord of all creation who rules
E ternally in every situation

FOR THE PEOPLE OF CHILE- hold on to your faith, regardless!
Form: Acrostic

Ppc

Name of Crime    Under Section
1.Murder	                   302
2.Death by negligence,303/304/308/312/319/321/322
3.Attempt to Murder / Suicide,324/325 
4.Thug / Exposure of Child / Concealment of Birth,327/328/329
5.Itlaf-i-udw/salahiyyat-i-udw,334/336 
6.Causing hurt with/blunt/sharp weapon,337(A - N) 
7.Isqat-i-hamal with consent/without consent/janin,338(A - C)
8.Wrongful restraint/confinement of person, 341/342/343/344/345/346/347/348
9.Criminal Assault / Violating Modesty of Women,352/358/354-A 
10.Kidnapping & Abduction,363/364/365/365-A /366/367/369
11.Rape,375/376
12.Un-Natural Offence,377 
13.Zina Sec 10 (i)(ii)(iii) Zina-Ord,79,279	
14.Theft 379/382/401/411 
15.Robbery/Dacoity,392/394/395/396
16.Criminal Assault / Violence,427/448/452/453/506
17.Cheating/Forgery/Fraud,406/409/417/420/430/477
18.Lurking House Tresspass,442-460
19.Wandering,55/109 
20.Dishonestly recev.Stolen property,411/412/413/414
21.Arms Ord / 65 / SIA Act, 1991,13/20/65,7/21/91
22.Military Deserters	54 Cr. PC	17
23.Bogus / Bouncing of Cheque,489-F
24.Gambling,4-GO 5/7/78
25.Breach of peace,107/151 Cr.
Form: List

Rendering Real Worship

A-im to 
P-lease the Father, 
R-endering real worship 
I-nside the temple of the true 
L-ord God. 

Topic: Birthday of April Jane Elico (April 24) 
Form: Acrostic Cinquain
Form: Cinquain

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