Best Nitpick Poems

I grump, I slump, I scowl, I'm in a mood
To judge, nitpick and be abruptly rude.

Skies heavy under clouds of concrete gray
Lost are the pinks...

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4/25/22

Started before last October
Going beyond Passover
Pettiness and greed always gave off a bad odor

I don't know if I'll ever have closure
Rarely ever am I that...

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8/12/16


Little by little
Bodies of water start to trickle
Because of there being no drizzle
And the sun continuing to sizzle

Droughts
Making it difficult for plants to sprout

Give others...

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4/10/22

I don't care if god forbids it
All day and night long I fidget
Alcoholic drinks I sip it
THC I smoke, another habit have yet to kick...

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death rattle brings crows
ready to nitpick my bones—
no distractions here...

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3/23/21


On a decline or on the rise
Food left out, quickly will oxidize
Experienced a lot of negative, but am putting out positive vibes
When needed, turning into...

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God do you see me for who I am?
Why do I have to constantly prove myself
To you?
Why do you nitpick so much?
Why do you correct...

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5/30/22
"Not Adding Up"
A lot just yap and bluff
Electricity I can conduct
Even though it all is not adding up
At times I had enough
Yet couldn't stop myself...

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We would never know what God wants of us
We know how He wants us to be
We want good things and on our terms
We balk at...

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Moral Decay
(A Tom Wright opinion)
1-3-2020

Our country is now mired in moral decay,
By the actions of many, being coddled today.
Attitudes are bad and our skins are...

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he was looking for a new enemy
for it was the man he hated before 
which defined his very being &
in that respect, there was no...

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By the way.
I'm not doing anything later.
If you don't have any plans, why don't you throw on some sweats.
Your favorite ponytail and we'll find something...

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April 19th 2020 - just an ordinary and typical...
clothes washing Sunday courtesy the missus

Ah... the highlight of our supposed, linkedin,
designated day of respite after a...

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How do I drown out
The dimwitted stupidity
Of your foolhardy rants
The halfwitted folly of your absurdity
The madness of your lunacy
Who in heaven’s name
Do you think you’re...

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I am weak always
Away from blame he sashays
Faults to nitpick
So who is the one sick

It takes all sorts
All with their own torts
Forgiveness is His to...

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