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I grump, I slump, I scowl, I'm in a mood To judge, nitpick and be abruptly rude. Skies heavy under clouds of concrete gray Lost are the pinks and lavenders of May. This winter has worn down my sunny cheer A season's rain lasting throughout a year. Manners abandoned as passive and prim The strain on kinder spirits running grim. I swallowed full this bitter appetite Too eager for the apple's poisoned bite. An ice stone lodges where my heart once bled Frozen where human charity has fled. Like princesses asleep in frosty tombs I wait on kisses dropped from rosy blooms. At last, a crack, a ringlet of green thaw Renewal, like clover, fragile and raw. A rise in warming skies by shifting blues Outlines the sun's return in heathered hues. The promise within rainbow spring relies Upon the wings of snow white butterflies. 05/06/21 Rhyming Couplets contest Sponsor: Janice Canerdy The syllable count was verified on howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 1/23/2022 9:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful first placement Michelle. Sorry this is so belated. I was off to say goodbye to my son who was declared brain dead and my world fell apart. I couldn’t deal with poetry for many months. It is helping me to be back here at PS reading poetry again. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/2/2021 10:44:00 AM
Sorry Michelle told you I wasn't myself today - Congrats on your win my friend. Jennifer
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Date: 6/2/2021 10:43:00 AM
I am in one of those moods today Michelle, I grump, I slump, I scowl, maybe it is because we have had two horribly cold days in Sunny South Africa. I think this poem is brilliant and wish you all the best in the contest. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/1/2021 7:41:00 PM
I love the visions you penned! This is fantastic. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/31/2021 1:04:00 PM
Wonderful write. I enjoyed this... Ann
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Date: 5/30/2021 8:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your big win in the contest with this set of piercing, penetrating couplets, Michelle! ~ Best wishes, gw
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Date: 5/27/2021 9:15:00 PM
The seasons and the affects of the virus has left a lot of us in terrible moods, Michelle. Congratulations in Janice Canerdy's couplets contest.
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Date: 5/27/2021 1:38:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! So delightful and delighting from the start till the end. Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 5/26/2021 11:08:00 AM
So beautifully written my friend with your signature creativity of phrases -"ringlet of green thaw," "apple's poisoned bite," just a few that ring with your master's hand of imagery. Congratulations on your win! All the best.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/26/2021 8:22:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely comment, Sam, I greatly appreciate it!
Date: 5/26/2021 12:25:00 AM
seasons can affect our moods so much i adore spring after winter's dull dreariness, many congrats on your win Michelle:-) hugs jan xx
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/26/2021 8:23:00 PM
Yes those long winter months can make me quite grumpy, glad we are having warm weather again!
Date: 5/25/2021 10:35:00 PM
A big CONGRATS on your win in my contest, Michelle. Thanks for entering! Janice
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/26/2021 8:23:00 PM
Thank you for placing me in your contest, Janice!
Date: 5/17/2021 2:38:00 PM
this is really cool writing in rhyming couplets. Hope you get a win . VERY nicely done.
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Date: 5/10/2021 5:18:00 PM
Lovely couplets... glad they started looking up at the end. Love to you and blessings too. Love, Gina
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Date: 5/7/2021 11:47:00 PM
Couplets were the right choice for this delightful poem! Nicely done, Michelle :)
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Date: 5/7/2021 12:02:00 PM
Really well done, but snow white butterflies are "cabbage" butterflies, so lettuce prey! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 5/6/2021 5:13:00 PM
Interesting how seasons can effect moods. You reflected that well in your transition from glum to one of hope. I love your line "Like princesses asleep in frosty tombs I wait on kisses dropped from rosy blooms."
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Date: 5/6/2021 3:02:00 PM
Well-done, Michelle! Reflecting on things, it's just amazing how we let the weather and/or the 'situation' dominate us. I know that I'm all smiles on a sunny day, even in harshest winter. When there's a slate-gray sky, I ... I... ay, ay, ay! lol. Happiness and Joy, Gershon
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