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Premium Member Fast Times At Ridgemont High


A movie, oh wow, when one need not be Woke!
A girl was a girl, a bloke was a bloke.

I forget I was born when times were free.
Not under pressure of societal perversity.

We had jobs, were not weird and went to school.
We had nothing free, we were not governments’ 
tools.

Remember when schools were open and all stores, too.
We were not Covid,freaked-out-masked fools?

Nor were our teachers the government’s tools!
Our parents taught us ethics and rules!

We did not live on cold social platforms.
We lived and loved in freedom, that was the norm!

One could tell clearly, who was a girl or boy.
There were no “man- buns”,a welcomed joy!

Hope America returns to that sense of joy.
When it’s acceptable to be the sex you were born,
either girl or boy!



Notes: Ideas from the movie.
“Fast Times at Ridgemont High”, 1982
Sean Penn, Phoebe Cates, Jennifer Jason
Leigh.
Categories: freaked, emotions, funny, high school,
Form: Couplet

Premium Member Don'T Poke the Bear

He'd had a bad day, he was snapping and snarling.
His behavior,  it was anything but darling.

But I couldn't shut up, be compassionate and care.
Oh, hell no, not me.  I had to poke the bear.

His eyes were red coals.  He sputtered and shrieked.
Sure I'd just made it worse and now he  had freaked.

sigh.....

Off to the store for ice cream for his highness
and to keep my rabid tongue from some of it's wryness.

In the line before me someone was hunting for money.
My ice cream was melting, my disposition, not sunny.

Instead of patience and a rational aire,
oh no, not me, I had to poke that bear.

"Hey Lady !, we're waiting, you could let us go through"
She threw down her coins and started counting anew.

sigh...

With running ice cream, home I now went,
where old grumpy-pants temper tantrum seemed spent.

I scooped out his ice-cream, delivered it to his side.
He glanced at it , then me, and made a comment quite snide.

I could have said "sorry, it melted somewhat"
but oh no, not me, I had a different thought.

I couldn't be contrite, compassionate and fair.
That just isn't me. I had to poke that bear.

After some comments about ice cream and his weight
I bit my tongue but I bit it too late.

sigh...

So heed my advice and just be aware
when things are going bad, just don't poke the bear
Categories: freaked, funny,
Form: Rhyme

Johnny Depp

My favorite actor I can easily say would have to be Johnny Depp,
When he has a new movie coming out, it puts a spring in my step;

My husband thinks that he’s insane, but that adds to his allure,
Has there ever been another actor that can play in rolls so obscure;

Take Edward Scissorhands for example, who else could pull that off,
There’s not another actor that could, but still my husband scoffs;

So versatile in playing roles from Cry-Baby to Sleepy Hollow,
And I’ll admit while watching scenes in Chocolat, I found it hard to swallow;

I have yet to see another actor who could match Depp in his whit,
Although Alice in Wonderland kind of freaked me out a bit;

The Pirates of the Caribbean movies all had me on my toes,
But Charlie and the Chocolate Factory was a little weird, I suppose;

That having been said, he’s brilliant, No other can compare,
And when I see his picture posted, I can’t help but stop and stare!

~For Amy Green's Choose One, Have Fun Contest~
-My Subject is Johnny Depp-
Categories: freaked, dedication, funny, peoplehusband, husband,
Form: Couplet

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Weird Mathematical Knots (A Phone-Call Poem)

so last night I was just sittin there, right?
and outta nowhere this huge, like, 
demonic-millipede devil-thing
was right there on my computer desk, like wriggling towards me - 

- ...well not nearly as bad as YOUR desk always was - oh my! 
that thing was a pile of travesty!

- yeah yeah.  anyway, 
the thing about it was how random it was,
ya know, like, both of us were just doin’ our own thing,
then BAM!,
we were staring at each other.

- I just sat there really still.
I wanted a peaceful resolution to the whole thing-

- ...but yeah, I guess I knew that wasn't going to happen.

So at some point it just freaked out,
weaving around the dishes
and papers or whatever.
So I waited for a clear shot
and when it was near the side-edge, near the book-
            
-  yep, your old bookcase, 
which, I might add, you NEVER USED…

- so ok, I eyed it up, ya know,
built my courage, slipper in hand, 
and when I attacked
it was a direct hit
and this thing just went nuts, 
like spazzed out, twisting around on itself
and, get this, it actually JUMPED across the gap and went somewhere in there...

- I know!  and I was NOT about to go poking around
for some vengeful godzilla bug! 
melt me with laser eyes or something…

- …but, yeah, isn’t that just a horrible feeling?  like, 
is it still out there?  
is it alive?
it's gonna come and get me when I'm sleeping or something, ugh.

- …but the thing is, ya know, devil bug or not,
I actually hope that it didn’t suffer.

- …Yeah, I mean, did it deserve it?  No.
It was just this unfortunate situation that neither of us could control. 

- ...you know what it reminded me of when it jumped?
remember those mathematical knots we were so into? - ...

…yes.  Before you left.
Categories: freaked, lost love, loveme, me,
Form: Dramatic Monologue

Crucified Clown

Blue velvet caged
Behind rusty bars.
Soul within chars.
Fervent flames raged.

Mighty door creaked
Black-veiled phantoms
Chanting the anthems
Thus the dusts freaked.

All the phantoms read
The holy pages.
The pious sages
For repentance plead.

Life’s last drops
Time’s burning tears.
Soaked deep in fears,
Crushed by crops,

The soul crumples.
Satan’s oracle
Tempting manacle
On heart tramples.

Towers of flesh
Drag my weary bones
As the axe-man hones
His blade afresh

Heard the Devil's voice:
"Crimson Cross!"
My dice to toss
Fate's generous choice!

"Kneel by the altar
Take my rosary,
Or God's pillory.
You have to falter?"

Succumbing feet tread
On scaffold's heart
As the moments part
What's there that they dread?

Nails of Divine love
Prick my palms
Grope for balms
Wails a benign dove

Mocking herd of sheep
Ignorant vultures
The gaze tortures
The wound doth weep.

The Fallen Prince 
Roars with laughter:
"The hereafter!?!
Who else to convince?"

"O thou Holy, hark
The Forsaken Son
Has thy Father won?"
All the rest is dark…?
Categories: freaked, death, devotion, faith, life,
Form: Narrative

Unfinished Business

He rose
She watched
He paused
She gazed
He twitched
She sighed
He packed
She froze
He waited
She turned
He glanced
She shivered
He moved
She whispered
He paced
She sobbed
He freaked
She called
He frowned
She pleaded
He kissed
She wept
He turned
She knew
He left
Categories: freaked, girlfriend-boyfriend, life, loss,
Form: List


Do I Still Dream

Do I Still Dream

dreams !
do i still dream?
not without tears in my big brown watered eyes
not without a blindside heavy blacked heart
and not without thinking I've lost
the best years of my life
that I never had

what a waste of time
to cry over time that
has been stolen

but it is my time
and
I soak the time away
in my own tears of
lost unknown could
have been moments

and I push it back
and it pushes up over
my cracked
soul
moving up over my head
inching slowly
seconds by slow second
stretching over my pined shoulders
on its way to crushing my chest
with all my freaked out fears
till I'm caved over in some
out in out mind dance
and tears are raining
all over my feet
that if my chest wasn't in the way!

and I thing
what the hell
I am great
at least in my
could have been dreams

and maybe someday
someone will know
it too

maybe it will someday be you
Categories: freaked, abuse, age, community, desire,
Form:

Premium Member The Poetry Contest

The Poetry Contest
I'll tell you a tale, I'm sure you'll agree 
It'll interest those who write poetry
A poets contest 
To find one who's best 
To go down in historic anthology.

For the contest a massive hall was found
Poets arrived in droves from miles around 
Some flew in by plane 
By boat others came 
With great expectations of being crowned. 

The first prize was a case of finest wine 
Poets revised their work so they'd sound fine 
Some went weak and freaked 
Others loudly shrieked 
All coveting the prize - juice of the vine.

 First up was a Scot with the name of McNee 
He'd supped too much beer 'cos it was cost free 
Then his beer he spilt
Wind blew off his kilt
Thus his ‘endowment' the whole world could see.

Next came Pam, like a glam model she dressed
She breathed deeply and out popped her huge breast 
With thunderous roar 
Guys yelled out for more
With an eyewink she said 'I am the best'.
28th December 2020
Categories: freaked, courage, mother, poets, son,
Form: Limerick

Instrumental Knocks

Surrender to rhythmic initiations,
Moan and groan with accusations,
In foreplay rushes see passion release;
Intoned rumble in her fermented pleas.

Fulcrum strokes in the crazy display,
Freaked-out embedded techniques?
Rapture tunes these percussion beats,
Anticipation bolts in delight of thrill meets.

Love squeals in her ecstasy shrieks,
Quivers torment the resonating geeks,  
Smitten desire bitten and tweaked,
Brimming lust probes petals sweet.

"G" flows on high in the heated pitch, 
Pulse and quakes in the drum stick glitch,  
Bewitching thump and the hard kicks
Drum-rolls tenderness to my tricks:
© Jai Garg  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: freaked, love
Form: Free verse

Beware the Living Dead

From my window, darkness was quickly descending.
Costumed creatures were walking about, pretending
to be goblins and ghosts, expecting me to be scared
and totally freaked out, for which I was not prepared.

I'd been warned about evil spirts on Halloween night,
and vampires rising from coffins to give my neck a bite,
but no one had cautioned me, "Beware the living dead!" 
I laughed it off and scoffed at a zombie's decayed head.

Around me creepy crawlers slithered. I felt an eerie chill.
but I was trick-or-treating for candy; my bag I'd yet to fill.
Across the blood red moon, flew witches in pointed hats.
Their dark silhouettes joined by a flock of shrieking bats!

I saw a man dressed as a baby, but he looked like a brute.
He growled at me, so I ran as he chased me in hot pursuit.
I thought I'd be attacked when suddenly there appeared
skeletons whose clicking bones pointed at me and jeered.

With worry I started thinking, Could these things be real?
Something nibbled on my hair. How horrid it made me feel!
I went to a house with a porch light, hoping for Tootsie Rolls,
but screamed when in the open door stood sneering Trolls.

I tried to convince myself that this was just some silly hoax,
by friends trying to make me cower with their wicked jokes.
With a bit of bravado, I rang another doorbell, undaunted,
but fled again when I saw signs that the house was haunted.

How I wished for the power to fly away on a witch's broom
and escape the macabre apparitions on this night of gloom.
Now filled with trepidation and dread, I darn near fainted
wondering if the sweet treats I'd collected were all tainted.

Somehow, I managed to make it home but could not sleep.
Snarls from under my bed gave me goosebumps, skin-deep.



October 22, 2022   ~   Halloween Poetry Contest
             Sponsored by Emile Pinet
Categories: freaked, halloween,
Form: Rhyme

My Friend Jim Beam

My Friend Jim Bean

The highway signs go by so fast.
The whole damn night had been a blast.
There's a red light chasing behind me
and wouldn't you know it I could barely see.
Driving blind drunk and all over the road.
It's amazing how much your skills erode.
I was drinking all night at the local bar.
Should have called a taxi but I was driving my car.
I was dancing with a girl who had a perfect ass.
When I thought about her it made me step on the gas.
At first I thought this must be a bad dream.
But there between my legs was my friend Jim Beam.
I grabbed that bottle and took a big swig
and ole Jim convinced me I could ditch this pig.
Took a quick turn down a one way street
when I saw something ahead I didn't want to meet.
Right in front of me someone turned on the brights.
It was an 18 wheeler and I was in his headlights.
Right before we hit I made the car swerve.
Barely got around him when I hit a hair-pin curve.
Slammed on the brakes and started spinning around.
Must have looked like my car was a merry-go-round.
Didn't hit a thing and when I came to a stop.
My thoughts once again returned to ditching that cop.
I even yelled something stupid like you'll never catch me copper.
But I almost gave up when I thought I saw a helicopter.
The cop chasing me must have freaked when he saw that truck.
Probably thought he was dead but you wouldn't believe his luck.
He drove right into a ditch and got launched into the air
and I felt so helpless all I could do was stare.
It looked like a helicopter his car in the sky.
The way it looked to me was he was gonna die.
I thought about his family and got real upset.
If he died I knew God wouldn't let me forget.
Only a miracle could keep him from harm.
Then I noticed his car was headed straight for this barn.
Right up in the hayloft is where his car went
and it landed real nice without a scratch or a dent.
Cop was hooting and hollering when he got out of his car.
Screaming something about being a shooting star.
Before I pulled out I gave him a honk and a wave.
Thanking the Lord I didn't have to put flowers on his grave.
Categories: freaked, imagination, life, urbancar, me,
Form:

The Proposal

she freaked out
gladiolus and ring
he on his knees

~~~~~~~~
2016-01-22
Categories: freaked, happiness, i love you,
Form: Senryu

Courtroom Capers

In the witness box
pathologist Cox 
a seasoned witness quick on the draw
the lawyer, no rookie
a rather tough cookie
with a weak defense was clutching at straw

As a last resort:
"Your post-mortem report 
shows the deceased resisted attack."
"Surprisingly, M'Lord
he looked rather bored
and certainly gave me no flak.

"His eyes were closed
he pretended to doze
or already in Dead People's Land."
As laughter erupted
the judge interrupted
amused, he held up his hand:

"Devoid of breath
he still feigned death
you must have freaked him with scalpel in hand
for due corroboration 
and a full explanation 
should not we call the corpse to the stand?"
Categories: freaked, funny,
Form: Rhyme

Three Toed Jack

Tall pine
log line

Big Jack's 
long axe

Swung hard
no guard

Thick trunk
housed skunk

Tree creaked
skunk freaked

Skunk sprayed
Jack paid

Axe head
blood red

Jack's cost
toes lost

Tale goes
two toes

Jack's fame
new name!



Poetry contest:   Your Footle Poem
Sponsor:              Judy Konos
© Kim Shaw  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: freaked, adventure, humor,
Form: Footle

Premium Member The Mirror In the Other Room

The mirror in the other room

has recently filled me with gloom.

One early morn I looked in it

and got freaked out; I looked like S@%#T!

Light so dim revealed the reflection of my doom.


(It was truly freaky that one day. I really hate the mirror in that room!
Gotta get me a prescription of Retin-A right away!)

9/5/14 by Andrea Dietrich
for nette onclaud's Reflection of a Florette Poetry Contest
Categories: freaked, age,
Form: Rhyme
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