Beware the Living Dead

From my window, darkness was quickly descending. Costumed creatures were walking about, pretending to be goblins and ghosts, expecting me to be scared and totally freaked out, for which I was not prepared. I'd been warned about evil spirts on Halloween night, and vampires rising from coffins to give my neck a bite, but no one had cautioned me, "Beware the living dead!" I laughed it off and scoffed at a zombie's decayed head. Around me creepy crawlers slithered. I felt an eerie chill. but I was trick-or-treating for candy; my bag I'd yet to fill. Across the blood red moon, flew witches in pointed hats. Their dark silhouettes joined by a flock of shrieking bats! I saw a man dressed as a baby, but he looked like a brute. He growled at me, so I ran as he chased me in hot pursuit. I thought I'd be attacked when suddenly there appeared skeletons whose clicking bones pointed at me and jeered. With worry I started thinking, Could these things be real? Something nibbled on my hair. How horrid it made me feel! I went to a house with a porch light, hoping for Tootsie Rolls, but screamed when in the open door stood sneering Trolls. I tried to convince myself that this was just some silly hoax, by friends trying to make me cower with their wicked jokes. With a bit of bravado, I rang another doorbell, undaunted, but fled again when I saw signs that the house was haunted. How I wished for the power to fly away on a witch's broom and escape the macabre apparitions on this night of gloom. Now filled with trepidation and dread, I darn near fainted wondering if the sweet treats I'd collected were all tainted. Somehow, I managed to make it home but could not sleep. Snarls from under my bed gave me goosebumps, skin-deep. October 22, 2022 ~ Halloween Poetry Contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet

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Date: 11/30/2022 10:43:00 AM
Told you. A scary write for deserved win. Congrats, Jenna. Terry
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/2/2022 7:19:00 AM
Yes, you did. Thanks, Terry.
Date: 11/30/2022 10:37:00 AM
Cute and clever, as usual Jenna. A great, scary poem! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/2/2022 7:19:00 AM
Thanks so much, Linda.
Date: 11/30/2022 9:47:00 AM
Congratulations Jenna! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my Halloween contest, this contest was all in fun. You should be proud of your placing, there were many good poems submitted, yet your poem caught my eye, well done my friend, Emile.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/2/2022 7:18:00 AM
Thank you for the placement, Emile. I appreciate it.
Date: 10/28/2022 12:16:00 PM
A fabulous, fun ride through the haunted neighborhood Jenna. I shivered a bit :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/2/2022 7:18:00 AM
lol A shiver over this one is a compliment. Thanks, Linda!
Date: 10/25/2022 11:20:00 AM
Oh how our imaginations run wild on Halloween Jenna! Fun and terrifying all at the same time. But that is Halloween! Well done terror. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings of peace for your terrified heart! Maybe the humane society can do something about that creature under the bed!!! :o
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Jenna Logan
Date: 12/2/2022 7:18:00 AM
Thanks, Sam.
Date: 10/23/2022 4:45:00 PM
Well you sure set the bar high with this one, Jenna. Look forward to congratulating you soon. Terry
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/23/2022 4:50:00 PM
Your expectations are higher than mine, but I like the way you think. Thanks, Terry.
Date: 10/22/2022 7:22:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this ....this poem was a blast had a great time!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/23/2022 3:35:00 AM
Hi Kyle, and thanks for liking these spooky lines!
Date: 10/22/2022 6:56:00 PM
This is a really good one, Jenna. I feel like Emile will like this one a lot!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/23/2022 3:35:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Milt. I wanted to write at least 30 more lines!
Date: 10/22/2022 5:24:00 PM
Truly a night of horror and fright. Awesome ink Jenna!! I love the picture you used.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/23/2022 3:34:00 AM
Hi Mark. Nice to see you and thanks for the great comments.
Date: 10/22/2022 3:34:00 PM
Sorry. Creative. H
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/23/2022 3:33:00 AM
:) Thanks for the fix. Not a problem... I read your intent.
Date: 10/22/2022 3:32:00 PM
Jenna that is Outstanding! You are Rolling and flowing. Really . Stay Creatine. H
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/23/2022 3:32:00 AM
Thanks so much for your kind words, H.
Date: 10/22/2022 10:59:00 AM
I love it , you are so very gifted in writing, your style of writing flows perfectly, love ya
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/22/2022 11:22:00 AM
Hello, Stephen, and thank you very much for reading me and leaving such wonderful comments. I sincerely appreciate them! With your kind words... I'll soon love ya, too. ;)
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