Beware the Living Dead

From my window, darkness was quickly descending. Costumed creatures were walking about, pretending to be goblins and ghosts, expecting me to be scared and totally freaked out, for which I was not prepared. I'd been warned about evil spirts on Halloween night, and vampires rising from coffins to give my neck a bite, but no one had cautioned me, "Beware the living dead!" I laughed it off and scoffed at a zombie's decayed head. Around me creepy crawlers slithered. I felt an eerie chill. but I was trick-or-treating for candy; my bag I'd yet to fill. Across the blood red moon, flew witches in pointed hats. Their dark silhouettes joined by a flock of shrieking bats! I saw a man dressed as a baby, but he looked like a brute. He growled at me, so I ran as he chased me in hot pursuit. I thought I'd be attacked when suddenly there appeared skeletons whose clicking bones pointed at me and jeered. With worry I started thinking, Could these things be real? Something nibbled on my hair. How horrid it made me feel! I went to a house with a porch light, hoping for Tootsie Rolls, but screamed when in the open door stood sneering Trolls. I tried to convince myself that this was just some silly hoax, by friends trying to make me cower with their wicked jokes. With a bit of bravado, I rang another doorbell, undaunted, but fled again when I saw signs that the house was haunted. How I wished for the power to fly away on a witch's broom and escape the macabre apparitions on this night of gloom. Now filled with trepidation and dread, I darn near fainted wondering if the sweet treats I'd collected were all tainted. Somehow, I managed to make it home but could not sleep. Snarls from under my bed gave me goosebumps, skin-deep. October 22, 2022 ~ Halloween Poetry Contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet
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Flood Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 10:43 AM
Told you. A scary write for deserved win. Congrats, Jenna. Terry
Logan Avatar
December 2, 2022 at 7:19 AM
Yes, you did. Thanks, Terry.
Fowler Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 10:37 AM
Cute and clever, as usual Jenna. A great, scary poem! Congratulations on your win! :)
Logan Avatar
December 2, 2022 at 7:19 AM
Thanks so much, Linda.
Pinet Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 9:47 AM
Congratulations Jenna! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my Halloween contest, this contest was all in fun. You should be proud of your placing, there were many good poems submitted, yet your poem caught my eye, well done my friend, Emile.
Logan Avatar
December 2, 2022 at 7:18 AM
Thank you for the placement, Emile. I appreciate it.
Fowler Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 12:16 PM
A fabulous, fun ride through the haunted neighborhood Jenna. I shivered a bit :)
Logan Avatar
December 2, 2022 at 7:18 AM
lol A shiver over this one is a compliment. Thanks, Linda!
Kauffman Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 11:20 AM
Oh how our imaginations run wild on Halloween Jenna! Fun and terrifying all at the same time. But that is Halloween! Well done terror. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings of peace for your terrified heart! Maybe the humane society can do something about that creature under the bed!!! :o
Logan Avatar
December 2, 2022 at 7:18 AM
Thanks, Sam.
Flood Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 4:45 PM
Well you sure set the bar high with this one, Jenna. Look forward to congratulating you soon. Terry
Logan Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 4:50 PM
Your expectations are higher than mine, but I like the way you think. Thanks, Terry.
Kriticos Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 7:22 PM
Thanks for sharing this ....this poem was a blast had a great time!
Logan Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 3:35 AM
Hi Kyle, and thanks for liking these spooky lines!
Hankins Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 6:56 PM
This is a really good one, Jenna. I feel like Emile will like this one a lot!
Logan Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 3:35 AM
Thanks a lot, Milt. I wanted to write at least 30 more lines!
Koplin Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 5:24 PM
Truly a night of horror and fright. Awesome ink Jenna!! I love the picture you used.
Logan Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 3:34 AM
Hi Mark. Nice to see you and thanks for the great comments.
Elless Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 3:34 PM
Sorry. Creative. H
Logan Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 3:33 AM
:) Thanks for the fix. Not a problem... I read your intent.
Elless Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 3:32 PM
Jenna that is Outstanding! You are Rolling and flowing. Really . Stay Creatine. H
Logan Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 3:32 AM
Thanks so much for your kind words, H.
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October 22, 2022 at 10:59 AM
I love it , you are so very gifted in writing, your style of writing flows perfectly, love ya
Logan Avatar
October 22, 2022 at 11:22 AM
Hello, Stephen, and thank you very much for reading me and leaving such wonderful comments. I sincerely appreciate them! With your kind words... I'll soon love ya, too. ;)
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