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Three Toed Jack

Tall pine log line Big Jack's long axe Swung hard no guard Thick trunk housed skunk Tree creaked skunk freaked Skunk sprayed Jack paid Axe head blood red Jack's cost toes lost Tale goes two toes Jack's fame new name! Poetry contest: Your Footle Poem Sponsor: Judy Konos

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/3/2015 9:39:00 PM

Love it :)

Diane Lefebvre

Date: 5/12/2015 9:05:00 PM

Well Kim, this just gave me a good late evening chuckle. Good job. Best regards, Diane L.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2015 2:20:00 PM

Kimberly, Congrats on your FOOTLE POEM win. LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2015 6:16:00 PM

hey, this was GREAT work. Congrats on your win. I really like this.

Kim Shaw
Date: 4/7/2015 6:22:00 PM

Hi Andrea! It was great fun writing it! Thank you for the congrats and the very nice compliment. Warm hugs, Kimberly

Jan Allison

Date: 4/7/2015 11:44:00 AM

a fun write - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Shaw
Date: 4/7/2015 12:18:00 PM

Thank you Jan! It really was fun to write! Have a nice evening. Hugs, Kimberly

Jack Ellison

Date: 4/5/2015 7:01:00 PM

"Footliscious!"... as The Wulf Man said!!! Huggsies, Jack xxx

Kim Shaw
Date: 4/5/2015 7:43:00 PM

Hi Jack! Thank you for the nice visit and the huggles. Back at you. big hugggs, Kimberly

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/2/2015 9:30:00 AM

Wow, Kim! What a great Footle, and what imagination and humor you show in this one! Love it, and it should do exceptionally well in the contest! Hugs, Sandra

Kim Shaw
Date: 4/2/2015 9:37:00 AM

Hi Sandra! You are always so encouraging, and I so appreciate your sweet spirit! Thank you for the kind compliments. Have a wonderful day! Hugs, Kimberly