Best Critiquing Poems

Seeking Critiquing  by JTC    For the Comment Contest

It seems all my poems
Get battered and beaten 
Words pulled apart
And thoroughly eaten 
Put...

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you, I, we, they
stumble, betwixt
with words-
creative minds
hands write
muses mystify
searching, finding 
expressing in verse 

then you, I, we, they
read, critique
poems delightfully
but a few may
tongue waggle
insinuatingly
eyes close
to...

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My life was heading into an infernal pit of passion.
I am inebriated, sipping your juices like a fine wine.

Infiltrating your body defenses with my offensive...

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Look up to a sky full of stars
akin to sparkling diamonds.
And watch a gold doubloon moon climb
high amidst a starlit background.

Not a sound, just you...

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AMBER

Amber described her.
High yellow like the sun itself
With a inside orange like a 
Fresh lit fire.
Eyes so intriguing, heart so fatiguing
From critiquing men,
That weakened her.
...

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Hello there Mr Robot
You might remember me
I was the human poet
Who invited you to tea

If not an imposition
A favour could I ask?
When you read this...

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Again the alarm is set.

Strawberries, date squares…Yum, Yum.   

The alarm rings again. The tea party is over.

 She returns to her perch where...

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Always treasure what you write
Have your pencil and pad with you at all times
you might think of a subject
or a verse
write it down so you...

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My Favorite Me


I know I can be humble
If anybody can
'Cause I can take critiquing
And even a good slam
So roast me like a famous Star
I guess...

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* "You have to have faith,
On the wings of an angel,"
To emotionally cope with a disability
And find other sources of creativity.

Poetry Soup has genuinely inspired...

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The Muse

She sat on my bed, red mouth scattering.
Drinking my smoke and comfort.
I was dancing diet pill, with ear buds.
Pestering on my shoulder,
was her dead...

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The scent of musty, truly ancient fine books,
Waifs seductively behind the impossible doors, 
As they swing wide, out into L.A.’s balmy air,
I enter, a shiver,...

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Loveless world
You put on your shows
Anything goes
You judge and feed scandals
Your definition of Mercy is critiquing how good someone can handle
So quick to mock our...

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Theatre
auditory, expressive
producing, setting, critiquing
 Miller, Olivier, Azmi, Bergman
directing, acting, entertaining
visual, scripted
Cinema.







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Date: 22 / 10 / 2016...

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Waking me in the wake of her brilliance
words spoken,written in convoluted high tones
ringing meaning esoteric and quite unknown
the craft was hyped in meteoric terms
shining bright,...

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