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Rhythmic Fornication

My life was heading into an infernal pit of passion. I am inebriated, sipping your juices like a fine wine. Infiltrating your body defenses with my offensive weapon. My hands take control, scanning every contour. In need of psychological evaluation. I am a maniac, a lunatic in need of your drug. Your body is my shrine, praying to you for all time. Ignited hype, our passionate tunes, rhythmically sensual, our movements in unison. Journeying toward your loins with my imagination roaming. Sex, not only. Perfection, I'm hexed. Now, I'm far from lonely. My name is officer Pickett, your body is my jurisdiction. Patrolling your perimeter, my every intent to please. Your beauty manifests and becomes this portrait embedded in my mind. Like Michael Angelo and Leonardo Divinchi, your body is art. Spending a life time critiquing your imperfections. In sexxtions....... Jared Pickett 10/29/09 Asavvy1

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/3/2009 1:26:00 PM
Simply excellent Jared >> James
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Date: 11/3/2009 9:52:00 AM
Your play on words, has caused a surge, married ladies below, will need to purge, as Leonardo's......Michael Angelo...begins to slow, we all know,.... `twill be a heavy blow,...to the mind's ego,...as the mind makes appointments, the body can't keep, so shall we all,....weep....weep......weep,...these appointments we can't keep! Good job Mike! Lol, Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 11/3/2009 8:52:00 AM
This poem is a fine piece of art! with wit! you have changed my mood for the day! love Simone
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Date: 11/3/2009 12:17:00 AM
Ow my very steamy.steamy with class..excellent work..Officer.. Pickett:) A FAVS--Charma
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Date: 11/2/2009 11:22:00 PM
.... yo! officer... I was speeding the other day and doin' about 1000 miles an hour... you kinda missed me and since you write so well (blushes)... I've decided to turn myself in! ;)~ lol! I like it.
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Date: 11/1/2009 8:23:00 PM
Officer Pickett, you sure do know how to turn on the charm and evoke a passionate response from the ladies. The feelings you describe are not only sensual, but also inspiring! It's nice to know you are "far from lonely." Anyone who can write poetry like yours will never be lonely, my dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/30/2009 5:45:00 PM
love this! Wonderful, sexy, awesome write ;)
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Date: 10/30/2009 5:04:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Jared. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/29/2009 7:46:00 PM
Those first two stanzas are awesome. I like the sensual tone of this piece. Excellent work...Raul
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Date: 10/29/2009 3:55:00 PM
Hi Jared, you got me blushing!This is very romantic, wild and beautiful all at the same time. You make this gal sound like the queen of sheba, ha!I'm ready for a cold shower!! Thanks for your comments too I appreciate it. I think you should be writing those steamy novels, you're good at it. Thanks for sharing, Love Light Truth Patty
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