Best Corrected Poems

Franky was seven and having a party
He told all his school-mates, except for Spud Carty
And once they had heard that Spud wasn't invited
All of them said they were really excited

And then at the party the kids all had fun
Which might have continued if Spud hadn't...

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Fatty deposits
called CELLULITE mostly plague
the pelvic region

Beg your pardon sir?
Oh, I see! It’s CELLULAR
Let’s try this again…

Fatty deposits
called CELLULAR mostly plague
the pelvic region


For the 'Cellular Reality' contest sponsored by Marvin Celestial...

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Moments to Reflect
Life found in a Dream 
Today I’m a lonely man living in a cold, cold world filled with indifferences and malice. As time marches on a harsh reality come to my mind, time is on no one’s sided, it is only given once...

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Ah yes, they were right all along
I’m speaking of human evolution.
Sorry folks. In the past I was wrong.
Those facts were a convolution.

For saying in the past, 
that evolution could not cross a class,
I certainly apologize.
That was not wise.

This newly found epiphany 
causes my soul to...

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When you took off your silken dress
I made you confess
all the dreams I dreamt about you
all the dreams that did not come true.
when you did quiver within my arms,
when I did whisper words to you so fond,
You could feel my breath upon your lips.
I became...

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always corrected 
for my actions and my words
twenty four seven...

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THE LANDING - corrected

The big jetliner banked sharply left,
descending out of a bad thunderstorm,
lined up on the runway, its six landing lights
like a big chandelier suddenly turned up by
an unseen hand, the passengers sweating and
shaking, sure that death was at hand only
seconds ago, the way...

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The Silence of the River

          The silence of the river flowing like a stream 
         Masking fishes and crabs and other living things. 

The silence of the river...

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GUN VIOLENCE BLUES - corrected

They built a gun-violence memorial 
in a god-forsaken corner of my 
struggling city
A collaborative effort of a few academics, 
a handful of neighbors, a preacher or two, 
and some interested parties with a mission 
and a grant, a willing grad student,...

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This is what should have posted last night.  Thank you for your understanding

Erasing every trace 

“Star light, star bright,
The first star I see tonight;
I wish I may, I wish I might,
Have the wish I wish tonight”

The winter wind is cold
as I stand in the...

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I can't explain these feelings. 
Your concernes are eating me alive.
You want to ship me off, send me away. 
And at this point i'm not quite sure if i want to stay. 
You say self-distruction is on the way and that i'm losing my mind....

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And here I stand, both corrected and a fool
Yet here I stand, both forgiving and willing
To afford another try.
Pity me, but do not pity me
I hate to be pitied
But my stupidity leaves you with no choice
But to pity me
I am with shame for two times...

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A SOUPER FRIEND

I searched the Soup, but failed to find 
Just one friend that I call mine
I'm in a tizzy now, you see
'Cause many of you are friends to me

There's Hinshaw, Cunningham, Silent One
Winged Warrior, Allison, Gauthier, and Dunn
LuLoo, Sandra, Andrea, and Brenda
Rhoda, Maureen, Anne-Lise,...

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A Drizzle
A Drizzle

The wind blows and is fierce and cold 
 A shake and a tremble from me  
One would think that we were in for a storm  
Oh, but wait ,look! it was only a drizzle.

 Little light rain drops slanted falling...

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Dirty leprechauns-n-promiscuous shepherds, prestigious statues of golden 
leopards, emerald tongues used as weapons, false pride, no philanthropy 
accepted, the most precious reddest of rubies selected, my hearts surrounded 
by floating fire balls 2 keep it protected, thru the devil’s schemes my blood 
streams infected, true...

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