Tim Ryerson Poet Senryu

I Stand Corrected

Fatty deposits
called CELLULITE mostly plague
the pelvic region

Beg your pardon sir?
Oh, I see! It’s CELLULAR
Let’s try this again…

Fatty deposits
called CELLULAR mostly plague
the pelvic region


For the 'Cellular Reality' contest sponsored by Marvin Celestial

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Andrea Dietrich September 28, 2015 at 6:01 PM did it ever win? I think it is my favorite. ( I must have known if it won earlier because I had soupmailed you) Mine did terrible. got an HM ,maybe N/A! Tim Ryerson September 28, 2015 at 6:42 PM Nope, didn't place...Guess he was looking for something serious...At least yours got an HM and I thought it was HILARIOUS

Andrea Dietrich September 13, 2015 at 5:59 PM soupmail.

Andrea Dietrich September 7, 2015 at 8:51 PM hahaha, you did like me, just making fun of the topic!! It is great for humorous overtones!! Love yours.

Scott Thirtyseven September 7, 2015 at 7:46 AM What a fun, clever poem. Best of luck in the contest.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 4, 2015 at 3:07 AM Tim, you made me giggle here.. :D!!! you surely have some humor!!! send some to me pls... :D!~Olive ELoisa