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Breaking Point
I can't take it no more

this is too much

Your words are just words

you use as a crutch

My mind is a mess

these pills just dont work

Why don't you care

I'm going beserk


One minute I'm up

the next one I'm down

This life is strangling me

I might as well drown

I...

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Categories: breaking point, confusion,
Form: Free verse
My Breaking Point
I used to be so optimistic 
Now, I feel like a pathetic stranger
I used to be so enthusiastic
I have to deal with more danger…
Now I am
Lacking potential, 
strength and intelligence 
I used to be a cheerful kid
I used to be a real bad boy
But, now...

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Categories: breaking point, betrayal, change, courage, emotions,
Form: Free verse
Breaking Point
Come on and break me down
finding the spot not yet found
as you tear my knees to the ground 
wearing arrogance as if its your crown
as if its life
as if a right, that's yet been unspoken
can heal this heart too often broken
twisting like a knife
breaking through...

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Categories: breaking point, angst, depression, loss, love,
Form:

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Premium Member The Breaking Point
i didn’t see it coming
for days walking in a daze
a fog that wasn’t lifting
obviously in shock
one foot in front of the other
on automatic pilot
not knowing what was next 
then it happened

his ashes were ready to be picked up

triggering a flood of tears
there was no turning...

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Categories: breaking point, death, grief, heartbroken, loneliness,
Form: Free verse
At Breaking Point
There is nothing in this world that i can possibly think of or think of doing to tell you how much I love you. 
You are so sweet to me, i can't almost stand it wen you call me handsome and cute, cause it sounds...

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Categories: breaking point, dedication, devotion, fantasy, friendship,
Form: Ode
Breaking Point
Sometimes I'm truly happy;
once, in a great while,
you never really realized that
so much hides behind a smile.

It's hard for you to remember the things
I thought you'd never forget.
All these cries out for help
and you haven't heard one yet.

But we can take a lot of hits;
this...

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Categories: breaking point, innocence, lost, sad, self,
Form: Ballad



Premium Member Breaking Point
With every struggle in life, there's a cost to one's supply
Of their strength, courage, and hope needed to apply.
The cost will depend upon each struggle's intensity
And the number of to face throughout life's history.

When there are few in number, of a lesser count,
Or aren't very...

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Categories: breaking point, wisdom,
Form: Rhyme
You Pushed Me To My Breaking Point
Your attitude has got to go
My top is about to blow
Not liking what you will see
As the other side of me
Brings a fury large and wide
A tremor from deep inside
Will not stop and get more violent
There's no way to keep it silent
Once it builds up...

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Categories: breaking point, abuse, pain, relationship,
Form: Rhyme
My Breaking Point
Hot headed asses
Filled with commie bastards
Social disorder in the brain insane with pain
As if socialized wandering wizards chicken gizzards
My breaking point to no return hero burn
In sweat caged fury everything scarey
Shaded pine in derision chasing after delusion

Fought back the pain with a smile on the...

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Categories: breaking point, art, death, fear, funeral,
Form: Free verse
Breaking Point
Taking into account all she had lost,
It seemed she had such great strength.
But no one ever stopped to consider
That what they were seeing was fake.
She had carefully built up a wall
Between her and the rest of the world.
Letting no one in was her way of...

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Categories: breaking point, death, introspection, lost love,
Form: Free verse
Breaking Point
My best friend is gone, Ended her life
Turned around and she cut herself with a knife
Body lain, Soaked in blood in the bathroom tub
Why did she have to join the suicide club?
Kassidy's gone, I dont know what to do
My other friend Savannah, Im pretty sure...

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Categories: breaking point, confusion, death, depression, loss,
Form: Couplet
Breaking Point
Here now lies wasteland

What once were great nations, now just ghosts of a forgotten world

Here now lies wasteland

Once a burgeoning life force rich with souls, now barren

Once Kingdoms stood in all their glory and power

Then the bombs dropped and fire filled the sky
The dust settled,...

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Categories: breaking point, sad, war,
Form:
Breaking Point
I should have stopped him the first time he hit me,
But I was new to love, and thought love didn’t leave.
Several years later, love became my excuse,
I was little-larry-lies-a-lot, denying abuse.

Life wasn’t the dream of our love letters.
I was a victim of hope, that he’d...

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Categories: breaking point, husband, life, people, sad,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Breaking Point
hand in hand
the dreaded moment 
when your soul took flight

chilling the silence 
abandoning me
in forlorn despair

adrift sullen 
in a dizzying state 
of utter devastation

the gruesome knot
of my world 
sadistically twisted



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Categories: breaking point, bereavement, death, grief, lost
Form: Free verse
Breaking Point
Lost, Stuck, Undecided.
Fear, dread, love divided.
Carefree, never more.
Closed heart, soul, war.
Clear mind? Discarded breath.
Wasted time, nothing left.
Can this be or can it not.
Love has left and I forgot.
Quick thoughts, faster heartbeat.
Soul's lost. The world's forgotten me.
Pain, suffer, anxiety.
Wished to say, poor old greed.
Neck's tense, knots...

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Categories: breaking point, depression
Form: Free verse

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