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You Pushed Me To My Breaking Point

Your attitude has got to go
My top is about to blow
Not liking what you will see
As the other side of me
Brings a fury large and wide
A tremor from deep inside
Will not stop and get more violent
There's no way to keep it silent
Once it builds up from the depth
Where it's been quietly kept
Until someone like you makes
Rude comments causing me to break
And the anger just explodes
Until all the heavy loads
That have been laying so dormant
Years of your abuse and torment
Are making me go insane
There is no one you should blame
When my sweetness turns to evil
Your the one who has to deal
With the monster you created
Every time you have inflated
My mind with your words of hate
Learning it is much too late
For your false apologies
And your lying I'm sorrys
That do not mean anything
As your words of meanness rings
Every day inside my mind
Allowing me never to find
Any forgiveness or care
So you better just beware
Not to cross me anymore
Or you will be on the floor
With my wrath keeping you down
And no kindness to be found

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/16/2014 9:59:00 AM
Happy to see you on the winner's list. Congrats, robin
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Date: 4/16/2014 2:32:00 AM
ROBIN, THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING MY CONTEST... LINDA...
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Date: 4/16/2014 2:33:00 AM
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Date: 11/26/2013 6:07:00 AM
Seriously, do I have to kick somebody's a** for messing with my Sweet Pea? Because I will! <3 <3 <3
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