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Breaking Point

Come on and break me down
finding the spot not yet found
as you tear my knees to the ground 
wearing arrogance as if its your crown
as if its life
as if a right, that's yet been unspoken
can heal this heart too often broken
twisting like a knife
breaking through my souls skin
leaving me alone and twisted
erasing my rules never before listed 
all caught up in this sin
of which I can't escape 
of which I can't win

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/16/2016 10:49:00 PM
Dugat-K, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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Date: 5/14/2016 3:14:00 PM
LEAH D, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem. ~Love LINDA~
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Date: 10/22/2009 12:15:00 PM
Nice piece Leah >> James
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Date: 10/21/2009 2:33:00 PM
This is the most beautiful light poetry I have read today. Wishing you all the best.
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Date: 10/21/2009 3:18:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Leah. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/20/2009 9:22:00 PM
I really like this, it has good flow and the symbolism is very thought evoking. Good Job!
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