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Breaking Point

I should have stopped him the first time he hit me, But I was new to love, and thought love didn’t leave. Several years later, love became my excuse, I was little-larry-lies-a-lot, denying abuse. Life wasn’t the dream of our love letters. I was a victim of hope, that he’d change for the better. I couldn’t admit that I’d made a mistake, So I let him kick me, till I felt my leg break. After that, I had to admit the truth, Stop lying to myself, and find a new roof – I’d always had the support of my friends, But it took me crutches to stand up to him. 9/4/11

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/13/2011 10:43:00 AM
My apologies for missing so many contest results - many congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 9/11/2011 3:28:00 PM
hey Susan congrats on your well deserved win..David
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Date: 9/11/2011 9:09:00 AM
Wow, this is one empowering write Susan, so many stay for fear of not making it but you got out.. I love how you say "...it took me crutches to stand up to him." profound statement.. Congratulations on your win, love Wilma
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Date: 9/10/2011 4:44:00 PM
Love that last line!!! Congratulations on your placement in Michael's contest. Have another creative day filled with blessings my friend. CR
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Date: 9/10/2011 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2011 3:55:00 AM
Once the cycle of abuse begins, it is hard to break, Susan. Still, I'm glad you found the courage to leave this man. Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/9/2011 7:15:00 PM
Great poem but I am sorry if it is based on your life. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/9/2011 6:43:00 PM
CONGRATS SUSAN ON THIS WONDERFUL WIN WITH A DEEPLY MOVING POEM ABOUT AN ALL TOO FREQUENT SUBJECT OF ABUSE .. EXCELLENT PRESENTATION MY FRIEND..GLAD U GOT OUT OF IT..BRAVO..LUV..
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Date: 9/9/2011 4:54:00 PM
Congrats Susan on this moving write...touched many Im sure.... luv Michael
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Date: 9/7/2011 2:18:00 PM
Thank you for sharing today Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/7/2011 8:51:00 AM
rough thoughts....love the way you brought this out. we lie to ourselves so much about many things....that isn't happening to me. Queen of denial.
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Date: 9/7/2011 8:05:00 AM
a fearless write.. daunting and liberating, susan... love this! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 9/6/2011 6:08:00 PM
Hope that he would change didn't work; it rarely does. Your poem says it well.
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Date: 9/6/2011 5:53:00 PM
Powerful and very touching, my friend. I do hope it's just fictional - but if not, good on you for leaving the creep
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