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Premium Member Balding

Holy crappola
My hair's thinning out
I'm much too young
It's making me pout

My pride and joy
My whole life through
Can't imagine me bald
Bet neither can you

Given this guy is
So rugged and stylish
Admittedly sometimes
A trifle bit childish

A dapper chappy
But with everything said
My crowning glory
Is up on my head

It defines who I am
No will to carry on
If I wake up one day
And my coiffure is gone

So take a good look
At my profile pic
The thought of me bald
Is making me sick

© Jack Ellison 2012
Form: Quatrain

One Hair On a Balding Man's Head

*spot poetry written in 15 minutes or less about any random subject


 I am the hair on a balding man's head
 not lying down but standing instead
 Choosing to fight the battle alone
 escaping the scissors, evading the comb
 Keeping the faith down through the years
 dodging the blade of the old barber's shears
© Gayle Rodd  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Balding Burden

He wants to look hot and "spicey"
But hair "rugs" are much too pricey
So he's getting some plugs today
Cuz he just doesn't want toupee'
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member Balding Bard

Will Shakespeare got some writers starting
He didn’t write odes about farting
His talent was rare
And so was his hair
He had an incredible parting
Form: Limerick

Balding and Sprightly

...adapted from 'Mr Pye' by Mervyn Peake


Balding and sprightly, he's filled with 
     bold dreams
to make us all happy and free.
He selects as his target a small 
     Channel Island,
a representative sampling of people 
     just like you and me.

All he wants is that folks get along
without all those disputes and fights.
He tries to bring peace to this 
     sheltered enclave,
just by doing good deeds he can 
     sleep nights.

He practises witchcraft to bring 
     them together,
'if it works...' are his words 
     for the day.
A sense of humour is paramount 
     these days
to keep all those evil-believers at bay.

In the midst of these noble endeavours
he feels discomfort that turns out
to be wings that are sprouting quite clearly,
a cause for concern there's no doubt.

It seems that his kindness has made him 
     an angel,  
the more he does good deeds 
     the bigger they grow
till they're actually poking right out 
     of his shirt,
my goodness, they're starting to show!

So he counters with bad deeds 
     in hopes that they'll shrink,
indiscretions and plain bald-faced lies.
Sure enough they diminish, in fact 
     they're all gone,
he need not keep himself in disguise.

But this scheme that he's started 
     gets odder,
there's a growth on his temples, two horns;
he's been so busy negating the good 
     that he's done
he's turned Devil, good heavens! 
     he's torn

between Good and Evil, just what 
     should he do?
He's conflicted like never before.
He sits down to ponder which way 
     he should turn,
till it's clear, sitting right at his door.

On the horns of a moral dilemma
he simply gives in to pure Good.
He embraces his folk, he just loves them 
     to death,
till his wings are full-sprouted; he could

take to the air and keep flying
just as far as infinity goes,
so he bids his people a tearful farewell,
next stop the cosmos, who knows?
Form: Narrative

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