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Premium Member The Need To Amend Immoral Choices

The Need To Amend Immoral Choices


                              under the soles of everyone's feet 
                              silently surviving
                              thriving living forms amidst darkness 
                              viewed as irrelevant
                              by glorified human cerebellum's ambitions 
                              so apparently abhorring
                              frigid to the gentler and wisest enlightened 
                              essences below ground cognizant


                              why bother with others' needs not part of 
                              man's lust unrelenting?
                              conquerors eroding all pristine abodes 
                              of the Earth's abused beings
                              eager to wear crowns over rotting skulls 
                              perverted in many ways unending 
                              hoarder of stolen blood-stained jewels 
                              the final nails to their aging bloated coffins
  

                              goal to metamorphose as kind creatures 
                              a daunting task achievable
                              the malleability of human perception seem 
                              obvious given the right path taken
                              we are invisible in the realm of the cosmos 
                              accepting wrongs restore and console
                              in desperate times, love bestows a solution 
                              a ray of hope guiding souls to a safer haven










Penned: 04/25/2022
             Lake Worth
             Florida USA

Amend the Amends

You go on ahead
To your unmade bed.
Take a saintly nap;
Comfortably wrap
Yourself in blankets—
It is night, isn't it?
The day has ended,
Amends amended,
Because apologies
Are ideologies:—
Merely strange dogmas
Of those in comas—
They demand no following.
They are grossly wallowing
In mud and waste.
Go and make haste
And amend the amends—:—
I deserve no friends:—
You retract companionship
For complete dictatorship.
'Tis simply an amendment
On amends. You meant
For betterment—
Thus detachment
From me
And replacement
Of me
With government.

Broken Beyond Amend

I plea only to be ignored, my clock froze to my pain
Its hands will turn no more
Pardon me, forgive my dry pen that impedes my heart to speak
A poet am I? A pen with no ink, I am hollow and I write to my shadow
Her strokes dry, and with every creation I awake
Lines of love, O' lines of tragedy sing to me that I may hear and tune
Will the earthquakes kill me and drown me in history
I will live even after death herself wins the race that we all lose
Read my art, as I bleed broken beyond amend


Friend's Amend

I want us to be friends.
I want us to make amends.
I want our friendship to grow.
I know that you have dreams,
Way, way, bigger than Monroe.
I understand that you need space.
So that you can move toward,
Achievement at a steady pace.

Many times I speak too frequently,
Being unconscious of your feelings,
And sometimes I can say harsh words.
Again I understand that you must fly,
Like a bird in the air of progress.
At the same time, our friendship,
Should not be at rest.

Hardships, joy, tranquility, reliability,
And sharing is what friendship means to me.
I affirm that we have those qualities.
If we walk away from what we have,
We will definitely miss what was meant to be:
Friends- a me and you and a you and me.

I have goals that I am achieving,
That are much larger than Monroe.
If we’re together, 
We can keep each other believing,
That we can go further in our lives,
That our friendships can advance
If we keep caring for each other,
Like family- sister and brother.

My feelings for you will never change,
But will possibly grow,
 if you and I give it  a chance.
Who knows what will be,
The result of us being close friends?
It could possibly blossom,
Into a sweet romance.
We’ll have to wait and see,
How time will make us dance.




wrote summer 2004 while still in college for some friends

Premium Member The Bible Is a Blessing of a Amend

to bless is to bless,
the amend of the future
to bless is to bless,
the counting of a amend
to count is to bless,
to count is to amend
the amend of the future,

is the amend of a blessing
religious is religious of,
the amend of the future
religious of a amend,
is religious of the future
a religious amend is a,
religious blessing

the bible is the religious of the bible
the bible is the religious of the future
counting is counting the bible
counting is counting the amend of the bible
counting the amend of the future,
is counting the amend of the bible
the bible is the bible of a future amend

Premium Member Amend the Amendment

I propose amending
the U.S. Second Amendment.

The right to own and transport and fire arms
shall be constrained
to include only those who demonstrate sufficient mental health
to have no desire to own and transport and fire ballistic arms,
because they are bad for Earth's environment,
and not so great for assured mutual health and safety.

Hunters
with sufficient mental health
prefer bows and arrows
and fishing poles,
and possibly javelins,
or maybe even boomerangs.


Amend

The 14th amendment set us free,
Yet we’re continuously mistreated daily.
The badge takes our purpose and lives,
Lacking any expression of remorse and guilt.

My safety and security is undermined,
The country remains silent and redefined.
If you do not like what I have to say,
Just click the “X” and leave the page.

Believe it or not our system is rigged,
Minorities struggle while majority lives.
Racism is not dead it widely still lives,
No matter what anyone says or gives.

The white man always goes free,
No matter how wrong they treat me.
My people did not fight and die for me,
To be killed for being black on the street.

To Forever Amend

Trapped in the meter,
a prisoner of rhyme

My spirit indicted,
destroyer of time

A minstrels disciple,
epistle in hand

The sound and the rhythm,
my souls contraband

New couplets my jailer,
their sentences terse

The key to their freedom,
locked deep in the verse

And serving in silence,
chalk marks on the wall

I listen intently,
for one voice to call

Awaiting its pardon,
this conviction will end

My words liberated
—to forever amend

(Villanova Pennsylvania: January, 2017)

Premium Member FAITH IN GOD WHO ENABLES US TO AMEND OUR WAYS

August 19 Faith in God Bible Meditations Based on Jeremiah 26-29

Key Verse – Jeremiah 26:13  Therefore now amend your ways and your doings, and obey the voice of the LORD your God; and the LORD will repent him of the evil that he hath pronounced against you.

FAITH IN GOD WHO ENABLES US TO AMEND OUR WAYS	

God enables us to amend our ways with purposefulness 
Along His set laws of truthfulness and righteousness
Letting us hearken unto Him by faith toward walk of holiness
As we shine in our testimony, reflecting His brightness.
 
God enables us to amend our ways with obedience 
Along His gracious goodness pronouncing His love’s diligence
Letting us exalt Him by faith before any audience
As we rise against fear’s insurgence midst His revival-resurgence.
 
God enables us to amend our ways with commitment
Along His ready strength toward ministry involvement
Letting us participate in great commission engagement
As we abide in His Word to fulfill His entrusted divine assignment.
 
God enables us to amend our ways with devotion 
Along His great power of doing what is best amidst dedication
Letting us serve Him well by faith driven through His instruction
As we continue in His will upon His direction.
 
God enables us to amend our ways with courage 
Along His sure prophecy that reveals our Christian advantage
Letting us trust Him always by faith against attacking damage
As we face challenges bravely, freed from anxiety’s cage .
 
God enables us to amend our ways with prayer-plight
Along His guarded guidance of mercy and might
Letting us draw near to Him by faith in supplication-delight
As we triumph through His assured victory-height.
 
God enables us to amend our ways with glad serenity 
Along His firm standards that affirm His authority
Letting us honour Him by faith while serving midst sincerity
As we worship Him, giving Him our first priority.

August 19, 2025

Premium Member PRAISE BE TO GOD FOR ENABLING US TO AMEND OUR WAYS AND OUR DOINGS

August 13 Praises to God Bible Meditations Based on Jeremiah 7-9

Key Verse – Jeremiah 7:3 Thus saith the LORD of hosts, the God of Israel, Amend your ways and your doings, and I will cause you to dwell in this place.

PRAISE BE TO GOD FOR ENABLING US 
TO AMEND OUR WAYS AND OUR DOINGS	

Praise be to God for enabling us to 
amends our ways and our doings while we: 
Hear His Word
Hearken to His will
Hold on to His wisdom
Hide inside His watchfulness
Honour His worthiness and winning
Hail His helpfulness midst His work wonders

Jeremiah 8:14 Praise be to the Lord for putting us
to silence because of our:
Terrible transgressions along tarnished testimony
Topsy-turvy task despite trendy toil-techniques
Terrorized temper midst our turbulent turmoil
Treacherous triumph and taunting timidity
Troubled trust along touchy trait

Jeremiah 9:24 Praise be to the Saviour for instructing us 
about what delights Him; thus, we must be:
Praising His personhood while prioritizing His presence
Persevering through His power, propelled by His prudence 
Pursuing along His pleasure, praying and pleading for peace
Pressing forward unto His perfection, packed with His provisions
Performing by His purpose, producing through His plan’s perspective. Amen!

August 13, 2024

Premium Member PRAISE BE TO GOD FOR ENABLING US TO AMEND OUR WAYS

August 18 Praises to God Bible Meditations Based on Jeremiah 26-29

Key Verse – Jeremiah 26:13 Therefore now amend your ways and your doings, and obey the voice of the Lord your God...

PRAISE BE TO GOD FOR ENABLING US 
TO AMEND OUR WAYS	

Praise be to God for enabling us to amend our ways: 
Purposefully by His Word
Prayerfully through His will
Protectively around His wisdom
Persistently with His watchfulness 
Providentially against worldliness-wickedness

Jeremiah 27:22 Praise be to the Lord for 
bringing us into His will with His restoration for us to:
Express His encouraging exhortations on everlasting excitement
Exalt His energizing exertion toward eternal empowerment
Expose His examining earnestness against evil and errors 
Exclaim His enhancing example of effective efficiency 
Exult His eager endearment beyond earthly ecstasy

Jeremiah 28:6 Praise be to the Saviour for performing
His words that we must take as His instructions in our:
Decision along His truths
Duty midst His toil-tasking
Discretion with His teachings
Determination upon His training
Direction by His testimony and distinction in His triumph

Jeremiah 29:14 Praise be to the Holy Spirit for
turning away our captivity, while we repent from:
Blaspheming His person because of our false beliefs
Building with our preferences, so foolishly-blind
Blaming His plan along our faithlessness brace
Breaking His precepts by our false book 
Betraying His pardon with fake bond. Amen!

August 18, 2024

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