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The Need To Amend Immoral Choices

The Need To Amend Immoral Choices under the soles of everyone's feet silently surviving thriving living forms amidst darkness viewed as irrelevant by glorified human cerebellum's ambitions so apparently abhorring frigid to the gentler and wisest enlightened essences below ground cognizant why bother with others' needs not part of man's lust unrelenting? conquerors eroding all pristine abodes of the Earth's abused beings eager to wear crowns over rotting skulls perverted in many ways unending hoarder of stolen blood-stained jewels the final nails to their aging bloated coffins goal to metamorphose as kind creatures a daunting task achievable the malleability of human perception seem obvious given the right path taken we are invisible in the realm of the cosmos accepting wrongs restore and console in desperate times, love bestows a solution a ray of hope guiding souls to a safer haven Penned: 04/25/2022 Lake Worth Florida USA

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Date: 6/20/2022 8:43:00 AM
thank you for reminding me why i chose the Stoics....a Life Worth Living is not about other than the life you leave in your walk along the path...great lines for thought
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 8/22/2022 4:30:00 AM
Thank you, I always appreciate your thoughtful and pithy comments...ab
Date: 4/30/2022 12:06:00 PM
Your poem has some excellent reasons. This is excellent advice that we should all embrace. The deluge of devastation will endure for decades, I believe with all my heart!
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 5/1/2022 10:23:00 PM
Thanks, Lasaad. I have a real hard time imagining what kind of psychological make up the next generations will comprise of...ab
Date: 4/28/2022 7:04:00 PM
There certainly is a great need for much 'amending' these days! ~ Gershon
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 5/1/2022 10:21:00 PM
My sentiments, exactly! ...ab
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/30/2022 8:21:00 PM
Ha, ha! A whole army of nutcase teachers in the USA is already turning America's kids into an army of woebegone wokesters, their neurons brimming with hatred and fear... I'll be checking out of this rat-race before they're in charge, I hope. :) gw
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 4/29/2022 12:54:00 AM
I agree with you. I deeply feel that the onslaught of destruction will continue for generations, but the ones who might endure, will march on and reshape the twisted neurons in the human psyche into new forms. Peace...ab
Date: 4/27/2022 11:19:00 PM
Great arguments in your poem. An advice we should all heed.
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 4/28/2022 12:36:00 AM
Thank you, Victor, for a very learned comment. I appreciate you!...ab

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