A Feeling So Fresh

A Feeling So Fresh...

Ahh...! The streak of pain,
The rough floor
And the red stain.

How can I forget that agony?
They were five
And I was only.

They dragged me like a rucksack,
A feeling so fresh...
Not at all a Flashback...

The strong smell of alcohol,
The half burnt cigarettes
And their faces like a black coal.

I’s like a fish out of water
Repeatedly pleading
Like a stubborn beggar.

How could they listen?
Unlike humans
They were all demons.


Tightly, they tied me with a rope,
Not a movement possible
Breathing was only a left scope.

Unsuccessful to unwrap me,
They took a knife
And put cuts, one...two and three.

Echo of their laugh still agitates me,
The smell of their sweat
Is still chasing me...

One by one, they quench their thirst,
Good thing is that
They were fighting to be first.

They murdered my innocence,
Unbearable and brutally
Killing all my sense...

Leaving me, not less than a dead
Chained, in time coffin
 Still trying to move ahead...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Agustin Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 2:18 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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