Bedsores Poems | Examples


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Lay Down And Freeze

I've severed my conscious from the backplates of my brain. I’ve pleated vine and cord through the cracks of my rib, bedsores spreading across my ever-paling appearance. I haven't left this hole in weeks. 

I get nauseous at my own proof of life, conviction, correction of every flaw flowing out the gaps in my crooked mouth. I let insecurity envelop me, so I hide. I hibernate through nightfall and shorter sunshine. I paint powder over blemishes and broken bones. I crave to be coddled in frozen droplets and sheer fabrics that cool my  skin; But I can't bear to be draped in anything but harsh winter coats and the pudge that distorts my figure.

Maybe, I'm addicted to hatred. A taste so strong I can only starve it out of my system - though I'd drown in the taste of every regret I've shoved down. Every loss of control is sharp at the end, blackening my ivories and souring my savory-sweet till I'm all overt ailment and I can't salt the snow that strikes me. 

Over time, I've been pricked and prodded. What is now only winter breath replacing empty calories down my throat. What was once soft snowfall is now avalanche, and I can't bring myself to do anything but lay down and freeze.

Premium Member retirement explained

I am mesmerized by TV
on Wednesday and Thursday I laid in a recliner all day
my butt making an impression that will be there forever
I almost have bedsores

today I finally shook myself out of this heavenly chair
at two p.m.
I have traveled six steps from recliner to porch chair
where I sit in the sun

basking like a fat fluffy happy cat
wondering how I have missed all of these hours of perfect weather
glad I escaped the dark tomb of the living room

the TV calls my name and I try to ignore it
Then my fluffy blanket gives me a yell
this gets me back inside; I love my naps
retirement is a gift!

From Nature We Rise

from a sweetened 
green spring
ripples of
sanguineous salt
a mixing bowl
brings forth
oceans and trees
cans, cigarettes
stains on carpets
like bedsores


Premium Member Spare Bedroom

We pack our elders away like old photos?
To spend their golden years under roofs of bedsores and neglect.

Is it too much to ask to fix up that spare bedroom?
So they can spend their last years around love.
Do for them the like they once did for us. 
When life chewed our hearts and spit us into darkness.

Yes, there will be adjustments and frustration.
They've so little control over their faculties.
(Much like us when we were their babies).
They'll keep us up at night with demands
Just like we once did to them.

So, suck it up-fix up that spare bedroom.
Make the best of it...
Put some thought and heart into it,
A few photos, a vase of smiling flowers.
Sprinkle in a few sunny time mementos.
Hold their hand, stay with them a while.
Keep the drapes open to let a piece of sky in.
Small things make a big difference.

Premium Member Third Degree Turns

‘babes you need UV protection’

from top to tail and midsection

‘I’m African don’t be daft’

quite insulted she laughed

a masterpiece of self deception


but the tan worshipper in Cape Town

decided her skin must get more brown

took a book to sun

but it was ’Shantaram’

now she got blisters and a burnt frown


the sequel is  called ‘Mountain Shadow’

900 pages to become quite aglow

thought she reflected her lesson

from scripted obsession

and consumed part two in the snow


she became frosted in flakes and purblind

‘babes some advice if you don’t mind’

the book has dangerous thickness

and then there is altitude sickness

Mount Kilimanjaro can be unkind


now she reads reclined in the boudoir

fact fiction fantasy and mysterious lore

Hawaiian tropic neath pajamas on cutis

sun shades and bedsores on gluteus

and wonders what else reading has in store


should she try with fins snorkel and mask

but corals sting and sharks have a blast

a most unappealing notion

why not apply sun lotion

and make misconception a thing of the past


14th June 2020

a true story and part of the family legend

Premium Member Spilled Ink

A true writer when consigned to their virus induced self-isolation

Might want to consider turning over in bed for hot contemplation

Passion cannot be subdued by staying at home for an interim stay

But once you have bedsores you can’t even shop for emollient spray


If you are lucky to share undercover mission with a like-minded soul

Change perspective paradigm and position but don’t fight for control

Poetry is no competition but a contagious need for sharing and caring

Sharpen your quill and be receptive because two scripts make a pairing


When words fail lie speechless and gather momentum for further action

Of mind soul and body until figures of speech gain metaphorical traction

Epic love stories aren’t written in one short night on an immaculate sheet

And when the curfew curtain draws longer do not refrain but press on repeat


28th arch 2020


Premium Member Friday Once More

Hap, hap, happy day, it's Friday once more
Look forward each week, my work was a bore
Same old grind
Going outta my mind
Hope this weekend I don't get too many bedsores

© Jack Ellison 2015

Terri, the Pope, and I

I pray Almighty,
my freakazoid parents
the self-proclaimed-pulpits
of puritanical pious
and pompous selfish
keep their cult like claws
away from my throat,
and respect my 
sanctimonious death wish.
Otherwise, I may have to kill them.
Or at least break their hearts.

I am with that crazy ass Pope.
Let them pull the plug!
Draft me not for life support
puncutated by agonizing bedsores.

And Heaven forbid,
please keep me from them 
dragging my fragile bones
disgracefully through the courts
and turning my private slip
into a public script.
Please, please, please,
I pray they leave
my morphine shell alone.
Let me sleep
in sweet psychodelic dreams.
Let me sleep in peace.
Amen.

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