Afternoon Poems | Examples

Premium Member A Kittenish Autumn Afternoon

              

Two kitty cats, strode up an autumnal. red-leaved covered hill.

The day being cast in loveliness, they went to visit the old mill.

By then it was noon, so they fried delicious fish on a picnic grill.

Then, sauntered home, to snore like royalty, upon a heavenly, comfy, velvetty-covered, window sill!


                        
                         9/18/2025

Oranges of the afternoon



Hospital waiting room in the afternoon 
Tired flowers looking after the patients
Saplings emerging from the interaction 
Oranges in the hands of the sun as it sets 
       
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              11 September 2025

Premium Member AUTUMN AFTERNOON

AUTUMN AFTERNOON
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spice cake on the table
     aroma wafts through the air
          coziness, tranquility 

cup of hot cocoa 
    warms hands
          sipping comforts soul

world slows
     gone is hurried pace
          time takes reprise

sun hangs low
     rays cascade down
          golden orb sighs

trees stand tall
     leaves ablaze
          hues of crimson, amber, and brown

air is crisp
     hint of chill
          warmth in our embrace

meander along winding path
     footfalls crunch fallen leaves
          autumn’s scent fills the breeze

world goes by
     colors change under the sky
          autumn charms 

revel in this scene
     cherish autumn’s fleeting days
          winter is on its way


An Afternoon in the Abyss

I wait for you
where the road splits in two,
I'm forced to remain
uncertain which path is mine,
yet certain you will come.

I will open my abyss for you,
not as a prison,
but as a place to rest:
for an afternoon so perfect
it could outlast time.

I know, as every moth must know,
that the flame is its destiny:
even though the light was never made
for moths.

On A Sunday Afternoon in The Garden


bright yellow throats 
trumpeting a sunlit joy -
daffodils

drowsy afternoon -
day dreams scented
with white magnolia

plum tree -
silhouetted in sound
by buzzing bees

Premium Member Sunday afternoon

sunday afternoon
fresh basket of wildflowers ~
a knock on Nan's door



AP: 2nd place 2025


Premium Member Afternoon Rain

As I sit and look out,
I hear the soft cadence
of dripping eaves as
afternoon fades from the sky.

I’m completely mesmerized by the gentle sound,
and the slow, methodical raindrops sliding down
the splattered windowpane…
     ...as twilight comes with more gentle rain...

Wintry World

In the gathering gloom
of a winter's afternoon
as the light leaches
from the room
I'm more prone or inclined
as comforts tug
to recline supine
beside the hearth
here on the rug
with a good book
than step outdoors
as if you would take a look
outside the window
should you care
it's more than slightly
chilly out there
with snowflakes
blowing in the air
better on the floor I think
with a hot drink near the fire
until my tired eyes start to close
in repose and so go upstairs where I retire

Premium Member Sunday afternoon

a good book and my cat
cushions and a faux fur throw
a nook by the window 
with a view onto the city park
where birds have returned to nest
following the harsh winter 

everyone's come out of hibernation
and the cycle begins
of rejuvenation life and love

Premium Member On a friday afternoon

in my sight's a glimpse
of a young student
her life just beginning
under a hopeful sun

how i envy her serenity
i rejoice in the moment
the beauty of it all
i smile and feel peace

time stands still
the slate is cleared
and all is right again
with the world



AP: 2nd place 2025

Premium Member Tea time

a generous bouquet
of sumptuous peonies
if you please
gracing the parlour
in all its splendour

it’s tea time
we’ve brought out 
the lace cloths
the best china
and warm scones
for our dear friends



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Premium Member Afternoon Tea with a Friend Who Mistook Me for a Vanity Mirror

I do desire we may be better strangers.
— As You Like It, Act 3 Scene 2, Line 254; Orlando to Jacques

She called it venting; 
I called it theater. 
On a loop, it was non-stop tragedy 
with no intermission. 

When I spoke of my dreams, 
she'd flinch, as if I had farted 
during her soliloquy. 

So, I paid the bill. 
She kept the punchline. 
Now we’re strangers again—
better cast this time.

Afternoon People

Some people shine like the sun
They glow straight into your heart
They are like afternoon as I thought
They are warm, golden and full of love
They make you inspire and perspire
They make you a goal oriented person
An achiever close to your dreams
You really can strike a metal while its hot.

Afternoon In Life

Looking at the clouds turning to pale
In this late afternoon film
My mind wander like a lonely kite 
Floating soaring to the wind
I sit here in a big stone a lonely prince
Observing the sleepy sun to set
Life is temporal, yet you have to strive
Keeping yourself intact for tomorrow's fate
Though life is tough and adventuresome
I still see and I pass people smiling
This affect me more inside like sparkling light
Always hopeful and optimistic that one day
Good things comes my way at the right time.

Miramichi Afternoon

Miramichi Afternoon
The sloping shoulders of the river
tumble down rock on rock toward 
the wind-riffled, slow flowing water.
Alder and grass creep down the slope
but will be ripped out once again by
the ice out floods of early spring.
The stones and haphazard boulders
 are sun baked into featureless gray,
their bright minerals shrouded from view.
Land living things are more sparce here 
and those present are paused by the heat.
Out on the water a dimple of a ring rise, 
perhaps a salmon, more likely a trout.
A noiseless punctuation of somnolence.

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