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Premium Member Free Admission

Inside a big dome...

  A speaker, facing a large group of people, spoke about "life."  The audience was pleased  and clapped so loud.  One visitor just walked in and asked, "Is this heaven???!!! It's too hot in here and very dark too.  I can hear and feel voices and spirits, but I can't see you all..."

  The speaker heard the visitor asking and said, "You are in the wrong place dude!"



(Dreaming is the extension of human thinking, but not all dreams match/picture one's thinking.)

Untimely Admission

What am I doing here again?
I promised I would be gone,
But the muscle fibres beat and pull me back.
It will soon come upon,
So all I can do is lay on track,
and your forlorn look will break my heart.

Premium Member General Admission

Tough enough to not look for a fight,
no choice but to watch as it rages;
A candle burns on a starless night;

Hit only if someone engages,
attention is never what mattered;
They stay away from well lit stages;

Lingering on the brink of captured 
by the snakes in the orchestra pits; 
General admission  is favored;

That dazzling shadow of the misfits,
cannot be copied by counterfeits.


Premium Member Admission

I see the trees the trees 
Speak to me 
In siloquiscent tremblings
Of shaking branches 
And falling leaves 
So quiet and tense
A psychadelic panacea
Of hallucinegitic properties 
At night I lay beneath 
The dark star filled 
Skies the moon
My beacon the 
North Star my compass
And I dream of a 
Less complicated 
Existence where the
Air is clean the
Water is not polluted 
And cancer is just a
Six letter word 
Preferably never
Staged or written

Premium Member Anubis

Anubis, his decision, who has admission
mummification array, slows rot and decay

The Price of Admission

(if it’s)

Love me …
hate my writing

(or)

Hate me …
love my writing

I can live with the hate

(Rosemont College: March, 2023)


Odettes Admission

The couch grass has withered
for winters change
I make no apology
Milkwood so loftily summoned
As I venture forth
A prompt remainder
into the celestial wilderness
Time is running out
The lunar moon indicates
Even the sky can be shrouded
through the thin line

Premium Member Selling Paradise

what price to enter paradise?
just become a willing device
to extinguish non-believers
and other common deceivers

making this world so much more safe
when dangerous demons are quaffed
an extremely small price to pay
for our deity to hold sway

simply the cost of admission
for sins placed into remission
doing such necessary things
will make you an angel with wings

what price the entrance to paradise?
simply follow the ancient advice
comprehend what the holy words mean
not being for one instant unclean

there will be a harem or three
where all services are for free
no sins in pleasures of the flesh
all things there have been pre-blessed

beyond any real feelings
or the slavery of needings
no sweat, no fear, no need to hurry
the richest of realms, not to worry

watch miracles come into play
you shall know real bliss, they say
surely you don't want to delay

heaven and all that comes with it
really no need to fidget
do not be a heathen idjit

may we issue your ticket today?

Premium Member In Open Admission Open Up Your Arms of Praise To God and His Son Jesus-

minds alike lack truths
hearts involved can’t be trusted
open up your arms

give praise to Jesus
the author of holy grace
give Him your purpose




12/18/21
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2021©
SENRYU

Premium Member Addition Admission of Love-

ADDITION ADMISSION OF LOVE

He was honest
For within his heart, soul and mind he trusted
her name was Beautiful
He was honest
as he stared through her window eyes
loves passions cries
He was honest
For within his heart, soul and mind he trusted

12/18/21
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2021©
Triolet

Merging the Trinity

Merging the trinity

By: Erastus “Popyeny” Shipuleni
@December 2020

Not always do I get what I want,
Neither does my request materialise as requested,
Nor desire implemented as desired.

                    Do I know why these occur?

                    Cause of denial,
                    Over power by pride &
                    Refusal for admission.

Road to fruitful life.

Admit the creator,
Merge the trinity, (Mind, soul & body),
Self-acceptance, forgiveness & release.

                    Be present & act.
                    Accept & be as created.
                    Manage within my reach.

College Admission Scandal

They wanted the best for their children,
hovering through the toddler years,
giving them what they wanted,
giving more to avoid any tears.

When their kids became teens, they wanted fame,
building an image for their now empty life,
devoid of moral direction and sense of duty,
leading to personal crises and strife.

The university published standards,
too high so they decided to cheat.
They paid a fixer to get their child in,
using money as a bribe to be discreet.

But the scam was discovered, made public
and the greedy parents, now distressed,
listened to lawyers and admitted wrongdoing
and standing before cameras, adroitly confessed.

I'm sad for the children of these parents,
underachievers and misguided, for sure.
Unprepared for an independent future,
with no inner peace and morally immature.

Premium Member Cost of Admission

If you are wrong, yet,

should I give my consent, then,

we may both be wrong.


Date: 06/21/2019

An Admission of Guilt

Glinting of the nickel
Flip it, place it on the table
Relegate to gravity
That of fate- of destiny
In the end 
It's a choice
To accept 
Or avoid
After the flip,
Do you obey it
Pull back the hammer 
To strike the steel with flint
It's still a choice
Drop hands from wheel, place them by your side
Watch the blurring treeline, shifting away my eyes
I've certainly lied
Proxies for good faith
I've blurred those lines
It's still a choice

Regards To the Dean of Student Admission

R-egards to the Dean
O-f Student Admission;
M-arch twelfth Sunday breaks,
U-nder the burning beacon.
A-llow the education to teach,
L-eading one toward wisdom;
D-eny not the glorious bliss
O-f the Almighty's kingdom.

A-s a disciplined man,
L-ove of God really matters;
C-onducting a divine duty
A-t the INC School For Ministers.
N-oble task he faithfully fulfills
T-o help the Church Administration;
A-crostic wishes are penned,
R-egards to the Dean of Student
A-dmission.

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