Zoo

Quote By Poet "A zoo trip can put a zip in your walk and zeal for being outside with the animals." A hot summer's day at the zoo, beautiful white clouds with a bright sky of blue. Look the elephants are being chased by the clean up crew, watch out he just might moo. Here we have lions of two, just like me and you. The cute little bear is eating bamboo, they want bamboo and I want some hot beef stew. The day and time is almost through, let's go home and have some cheese fondue.

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Christina Bowring

Date: 9/17/2023 3:09:00 PM

Such a fun poem Paula. Made me smile. Many will be able to relate to this and their memories of a day at the zoo. Great fun! Really enjoyed it thank you. Lots of smiles :):):)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/1/2023 11:54:00 AM

I enjoyed your note. Glad this fun "Zoo" trip write made you smile. I love to give out smiles. "Smile" I am back after being off the computer for 3 weeks. I am writing again. Have a fun day at the Zoo or writing away........................

Constance La France

Date: 9/12/2023 5:54:00 PM

Paula, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love the quote, Constance

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/1/2023 11:52:00 AM

Thanks for your congratulations. Glad you love my quote/my fun "Zoo" trip write. I enjoyed writing this "Zoo" trip for your fun contest. Thanks for the placement. Have a fun day at the Zoo or writing away........................

Hiya Sharma

Date: 8/26/2023 8:51:00 AM

Awh, this is such an adorable poem that so lovingly depicts a visit to the zoo, creating a splendid and delightful ambience for the readers, hued with certain beautiful nostalgia.. Your wordplay is so beautiful.. Connecting with nature and animals definitely grounds our energies and gives us peace..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/26/2023 1:33:00 PM

I enjoyed your note. Always good to see you. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "Zoo" trip write. I enjoyed writing this "Zoo" day trip. Have a fun day at the Zoo or writing away........................

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/21/2023 1:15:00 PM

Very well-crafted, Paula and the quote goes perfectly with your poem.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/22/2023 12:24:00 PM

I enjoyed your note. Always good to see you. Glad you like my fun Zoo trip write/quote. Have a fun day at the Zoo or writing away........................

Len Gasun

Date: 8/20/2023 7:06:00 AM

This is a very interesting and delightful poem about zoo my dear poet friend Paula. I enjoyed it a lot. Congratulations on your first place win! Thank you so much for sharing! God bless you always and your writings. I'll come back to read more soon. Hugs.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2023 11:53:00 AM

I enjoyed your note and your congratulations. Thank You. Always good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my fun Zoo trip write and found it to be interesting/delightful. Hugs.... Have a fun day at the Zoo or writing away........................

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/19/2023 6:39:00 AM

such childhood memories you have conjured with your glorious words Paula! I loved every line! Happy Saturday xxoo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2023 11:50:00 AM

I enjoyed your note. Thank You. Glad you love my fun Zoo trip write. It was fun to write. I have not been to a Zoo in many, many years. Always a fun place to go. "Happy Monday" Have a fun day at the Zoo or writing away........................

Valsa George

Date: 8/18/2023 8:26:00 PM

This visit to the zoo must have been so entertaining and informative. Congratulations Paula on your beautifully rhyming poem and your top win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2023 11:47:00 AM

I enjoyed your note and your congratulations. Thank You. Glad you like my fun Zoo rhyming write. I have not been to the Zoo in many years. It was always a fun time watching the animals/people. Have a fun day at the Zoo or writing away........................

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/18/2023 7:03:00 PM

A fine poem on Zoo fun. Great rhyming. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2023 11:43:00 AM

I enjoyed your note and your congratulations. Thank You. Glad you like my fun Zoo rhyming write. Have a fun day at the Zoo or writing away........................

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 8/18/2023 3:51:00 PM

Cute!! I love the zoo...and tonight for dinner I'm cooking stew! Cheese fondue? That sounds good too!! Sorry, lol, I honestly didn't mean to write poetry for a comment to your poem, it just sort of started going there and I couldn't stop myself ;) your poem inspired my comment :) Seriously, a trip to the zoo sounds so wonderful! Your poem is adorable and fun Paula!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2023 11:41:00 AM

I enjoyed your note. Thank You. Glad you enjoyed my fun Zoo trip write and found it to be cute/adorable. Writers write, that is what they do. This writing from you makes me happy. Have a fun day at the Zoo or writing away........................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/18/2023 12:49:00 PM

"1 Place" ~ Zoo ~ Date Written: 8/17/2023

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/18/2023 12:10:00 PM

Congratulations, Paula!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 8/18/2023 11:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Dear Paula. You have depicted such a lovely fun day at the zoo - brings back memories from childhood.

Joseph May

Date: 8/18/2023 12:35:00 AM

Very nicely penned Paula, a fun day at the zoo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2023 11:33:00 AM

I enjoyed your note/Thank You. Glad you like my fun Zoo trip write. Have a fun day at the Zoo or writing away........................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/17/2023 7:39:00 PM

You really sound enthused, Paula! Gosh! How old are you now? Eight? -- That's what I thought. lol. Enjoy!!! ~ Gads Zooks

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2023 11:32:00 AM

I enjoyed your note/Thank You. Glad you enjoyed my fun Zoo trip write. How did you know I tuned eight this year??? Hahah... I say, age is just a number. Hope I gave you a smile. Have a fun day at the Zoo or writing away........................

The Situation

Date: 8/17/2023 5:55:00 PM

One line at a time gets the job done.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2023 11:29:00 AM

I enjoyed your note/Thank You. Yes, one line at a time will get the writing done. Have a fun day at the Zoo or writing away........................

Stephan McBride

Date: 8/17/2023 5:14:00 PM

Love it, : ) this is hilarious, very well put together

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2023 11:27:00 AM

I enjoyed your note/Thank You. Glad you love my fun Zoo trip write and found it to be hilarious. That makes me happy. Have a fun day at the Zoo or writing away.......................

Bill Baker

Date: 8/17/2023 5:07:00 PM

Now that's the way to enjoy your day! Nice personal quote, Paula. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2023 11:24:00 AM

I enjoyed your note/Thank You. Glad you enjoyed my fun Zoo trip write/quote. Have a fun day at the Zoo or writing away........................

Eve Roper

Date: 8/17/2023 3:52:00 PM

Cute poem. Good luck to you ... Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2023 11:21:00 AM

I enjoyed your note and your good luck. Thank You... Glad you enjoyed my cute/fun Zoo trip write. Hugs... Have a fun day at the Zoo or writing away........................

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/17/2023 2:55:00 PM

You made me laugh with the likes about the elephants))) Your poem took me on a trip to the zoo. And I never has to leave gome. And….this I thank you… Pangie

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/17/2023 3:14:00 PM

I enjoyed your note/Thank You. Glad you enjoyed my fun Zoo trip write. So glad I made you laugh. That puts a smile on my heart. Have a fun day at the Zoo or writing away........................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2023 2:18:00 PM

Very cute, Paula and the quote goes perfectly with it

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/17/2023 3:11:00 PM

I enjoyed your note/Thank You. Glad you like my fun/cute Zoo trip write/quote. Have a fun day at the Zoo or writing away........................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/17/2023 2:16:00 PM

Very cute! A nice trip to the zoo and cheese fondue!

Silent One

Date: 8/17/2023 1:44:00 PM

Lovely rhymes to your poem..hope all is well

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/17/2023 3:09:00 PM

I enjoyed your note/Thank You. Glad you found my Zoo to be a lovely rhyme write. Back in May I took a month off for health. I am now better, Thank God. It is great to see you here. Hope all is OK with you. Have a fun day at the Zoo or writing away........................

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/17/2023 10:33:00 AM

A delightful trip to the zoo Paula, love how the lines end in rhyme all the way through. All the best… Belle

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/17/2023 11:07:00 AM

I enjoyed your note/Thank You. Glad you love my Zoo rhyme write. Have a fun day at the Zoo or writing away........................

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/17/2023 10:28:00 AM

Much enjoyed the leisurely walk through the zoo. Great images you portray. Loved your poem and your quote.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/17/2023 11:05:00 AM

I enjoyed your note/Thank You. Glad you enjoyed the walk and love my Zoo write/quote. You made me very happy. Have a fun day at the Zoo or writing away........................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/17/2023 10:10:00 AM

Ahh!! What a delightful day you have described in this contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it and for dropping by my page. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/17/2023 11:03:00 AM

I enjoyed your note/Thank You. Glad you like my Zoo trip write. It was fun to write about. Have a fun day at the Zoo or writing away........................