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Zephyr

Wandering winds wind through tall thin trees sending constant consumptive croaks with sustained sonority. Quaking querulously a mellow message, a somber song, sweetly sung by a zephyr

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Bill Baker

Date: 5/25/2023 3:48:00 PM

Love the shape poem, Linda. Congrats on your contest win! Write On my friend! Bill

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/26/2023 8:24:00 AM

Good morning Bill. Thanks for the visit and congrats my friend! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/16/2023 3:40:00 AM

Back with congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/25/2023 6:56:00 AM

Thanks for returning with congrats Sara! :)

Joseph May

Date: 5/15/2023 5:38:00 AM

Love your use of Alliterations in this poem Linda, Congrats on your win

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/25/2023 6:55:00 AM

Hi Joseph. Thanks for the stop-by and congrats! :)

Constance La France

Date: 5/15/2023 4:35:00 AM

Linda, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge, excellent, congratulations !

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/25/2023 6:55:00 AM

Thank you Constance. A fun challenge! :)

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 5/14/2023 8:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the Contest....Linda. A Wonderful short poem.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/25/2023 6:54:00 AM

Hello my friend Alfonso. Thank you so much for your visit and comment! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/14/2023 3:03:00 PM

Amazing how it looks like a tornado but of course, a tornado isn't a zephyr. I do love the way the wind through the pines sings the sighing song. Way to go on this winner. Thanks for sharing it and for dropping by my page. Sara..

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/25/2023 6:54:00 AM

Thank you Sara. I had started a nine, but of course, 'zephyr' blew the syllable count LOL. :)

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 5/14/2023 1:41:00 PM

Yes, a zephyr song! What a beautiful poem. Congratulations on your fine win, Linda.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/25/2023 6:53:00 AM

Many thanks Carol Louise! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2023 11:34:00 AM

So beautiful. Congrats for your win

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/14/2023 12:56:00 PM

Many thanks Andrea. I enjoy these exercises in vocabulary, and choice of form. :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/14/2023 7:03:00 AM

Congratulations on winning the contest with your excellent poetry.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/14/2023 7:16:00 AM

Many thanks Lasaad! :) You as well!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/13/2023 8:20:00 PM

Juzt like my zorority -- zuztained zonority! ~ Zelda

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/14/2023 7:14:00 AM

Okay ZZ. You are zo zweet! :)

Ann Peck

Date: 5/13/2023 2:14:00 PM

That's very lovely, Linda. Best of luck!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/13/2023 2:42:00 PM

Many thanks Ann! :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/13/2023 8:14:00 AM

Nicely penned, Alice. I love listening to wind whistle and roar through the pines. It's different than broadleaf trees which has a rustling sound. You have me ready for a trip to the woods:) Have a Happy Mother's Day sweet friend:)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/13/2023 8:18:00 AM

Thanks Daniel. I do too. I was thinking of the aspen trees in the Rockies when I wrote it. Eerie croaking of the 'quakies' - I loved it! Happy trip! Also thanks for the Mom Day wishes!