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Written: September 05, 2023   This or That, Vol 20 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh ______________________________________________________________ In the Zen kingdom, where thoughts coincide. Nihilism is a canopy of shade; it dares to confide. A conflict between reason and meaninglessness. The universe has wonders and incredible minuteness. An all-powerful deity rules over A cosmic dance where all is in order. Nothing can occur without its sanction. The omnipotent creator god is our ultimate captain. Whispers of the divine echo through time. Unveiling the mysteries, so sublime, In the vast expanse of galaxies and stars, The hand of the divine, crafting wonders afar But amidst the grandeur, a question arises: Does purpose exist, or are we just prizes? In a universe so vast, can meaning be found? Or are we simply adrift and unbound? The nihilist argues that life is just a game. No purpose, no meaning, just a cosmic flame, Yet deep within our souls, a yearning remains. For something greater, a purpose that sustains The voices of the divine are calling to us. To seek worth and to have faith and trust In the pattern of an infinite power. To discover meaning in every hour. In the realm of Zen, we understand, That the universe, so vast and grand, Is not a void of chaos and despair, But a canvas for us to discover and share. The whispers of the Divine remind us all, That we are not alone, destined to fall, With faith and belief, we can find our way. And create a purpose that will never stray. So let us embrace the whispers divine, And let them guide us, such a sacred shrine, As in this enormous and magnificent universe, We can wield our fate, for brighter or worse.

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Date: 10/12/2023 11:55:00 AM
Your poetry is truly brilliant. Your expression is very powerful! "This vast universe is a canvas for us to discover and share", you are so right! It's a very soothing poetry for me. Thank you for sharing!
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Date: 9/25/2023 7:41:00 AM
Lassad, this is simply an exceptional poem. I loved it. Striking imagery throughout! Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Date: 9/22/2023 4:06:00 PM
Nicely done Las! Wow! Congratulations! :)
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Date: 9/21/2023 10:15:00 AM
"Dear Lasaad, congratulations on your win! Blessing dear friend. So happy to see this on the winners list!"
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Date: 9/13/2023 7:15:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Lasaad!
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Date: 9/13/2023 8:19:00 AM
A masterly poem, which is exemplary in all aspects of poetry- message, diction, rhythm, rime, structure, imagery, etc. It merits the POD. My hearty congratulations.
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Date: 9/11/2023 2:54:00 PM
A very hearty congratulations on this well deserved POTD Sotto. I'm so happy that you are being recognized for your amazing abilities as a word smith.
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Date: 9/8/2023 7:37:00 PM
I’m very sad that I missed congratulating you yesterday, Lasaad. It’s an amazing write.
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Date: 9/8/2023 7:22:00 AM
Excellent poem Lasaad…so happy to see your name here!! Congratulations on POTD….Debx
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Date: 9/7/2023 10:08:00 PM
Applause to you wise one for this incredible masterpiece. So well deserved the honor of POTD. :)
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Date: 9/7/2023 8:58:00 PM
Glad I gave it a favourite. Back to give you congratulations on the POTD. Its a wonderful poem.
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Date: 9/7/2023 7:44:00 PM
"All values are baseless, and that nothing can be known or communicated." I can't imagine that. Congratulations Lasaad, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 9/7/2023 1:24:00 PM
Congratulatiions dear Sotto on this most deserving POTD. This washed over my mind like a zen moment in nature when suddenly you feel at one with everything. Thanks for sharing your immense talents and insights. SuZ
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Date: 9/7/2023 4:21:00 PM
Suzanne, I am deeply grateful for your kind gesture of reading and dedicating your precious time to providing your valuable comments.
Date: 9/7/2023 12:34:00 PM
Absolutely stunning and exquisite Sotto as I’ve come to expect from you. So, so well written with beautiful rhymes. I particularly love the last stanza and ‘We can wield our fate, for brighter or worse.’ Glorious. Many, many congratulations on a very well deserved POTD! Blessings to you. :):)
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Date: 9/7/2023 4:21:00 PM
Christina, I am deeply grateful for your kind gesture of reading and dedicating your precious time to providing your valuable comments.
Date: 9/7/2023 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations on the POTD Soto Poet! These, your words come out of divine simplicity, your words come from the soul...words that bespeak the secrets of the Universe. While that which feeds the soul liberates. I only feel joy when I read your optimistic poetry on existentialism. A well-deserved poem of the day, indeed! I wish you purity of body, mind, and heart as well. ~I Am Anaya
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Date: 9/7/2023 12:18:00 PM
Anaya, I am deeply grateful for your kind gesture of reading and dedicating your precious time to providing your valuable comments.
Date: 9/7/2023 11:09:00 AM
"Yet deep within our souls, a yearning remains. For something greater, a purpose that sustains" - This line speaks to me most...but you have created a poem, profound, spiritual, and breathing wisdom in every line. Congratulations on your POTD today..bask in the glory of a well-deserved piece of poetry.
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Date: 9/7/2023 12:18:00 PM
Mala, I am deeply grateful for your kind gesture of reading and dedicating your precious time to providing your valuable comments.
Date: 9/7/2023 10:48:00 AM
What a beautiful, spiritually uplifting poem, my friend! Congratulations on your POTD honors. :)
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Date: 9/7/2023 12:17:00 PM
Evelyn, I am deeply grateful for your kind gesture of reading and dedicating your precious time to providing your valuable comments.
Date: 9/7/2023 10:30:00 AM
Dearest Lasaad, this is a poetic wonder straight from the heart of your wisdom and eloquent pen! Each line is a treasure trove of images that articulate your characteristic elegance. Your word usage is just awesome. What amazing image do I highlight! Congratulations on your richly deserved POTD honor. Blessings my friend!
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Date: 9/7/2023 12:17:00 PM
Sam, I am deeply grateful for your kind gesture of reading and dedicating your precious time to providing your valuable comments.
Date: 9/7/2023 10:26:00 AM
Many congrats on POTD Sotto Poet:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/7/2023 12:16:00 PM
Jan, thank you so much for taking the time to read my work and offer your insightful comments.
Date: 9/7/2023 10:17:00 AM
Sotto, a brilliant poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor.
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Date: 9/7/2023 12:14:00 PM
Constance, I appreciate you taking the time to read my work and offer your insightful comments.
Date: 9/7/2023 8:21:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on this exquisite POTD, my dear friend. Your poetry has always touched me, but you're still evolving, and it speaks more and more to our hearts and souls. Enjoy your special day of recognition, you certainly deserve it. Bill
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Date: 9/7/2023 8:59:00 AM
Bill, I am deeply grateful for your kind gesture of reading and dedicating your precious time to providing your valuable comments.
Date: 9/7/2023 8:00:00 AM
There is order in the vastness of the universe, Beautifully penned Sotto, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 9/7/2023 9:01:00 AM
Joseph, I appreciate you taking the time to read my work and offer your insightful comments.
Date: 9/7/2023 7:47:00 AM
Dearest Lasaad, your heart and soul and intellect shine brightly like the stars you mention in the galaxies afar ! Brilliant thoughts and emotions and questions you paint for us . So many favorite lines . A fav for sure ! Congratulations on POTD! Looking forward to reading this gem many times . It touches my soul . Hugs, Susan :)
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Date: 9/7/2023 9:00:00 AM
Dearest Susan, I appreciate you taking the time to read my work and offer your insightful comments.
Date: 9/7/2023 7:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD! An inspirational message to ponder. I love the line "Is not a void of chaos and despair, but a canvas for us to discover and share"....it says it all....brilliant! Paulette
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Date: 9/7/2023 9:01:00 AM
Paulette, I appreciate you taking the time to read my work and offer your insightful comments.
Date: 9/7/2023 6:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. WOW!!! A "Creative" Masterpiece. Have a great/blessed day writing away..............
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Date: 9/7/2023 9:00:00 AM
Paula, I appreciate you taking the time to read my work and offer your insightful comments.
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