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Your Song ( End Line Word Poem)

Don't be afraid to.. ...Sing Celebrate your own ....Life's Old and new ...........Songs Sweet melody of.....Each Lingers at the end of ...Day

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James Fraser

Date: 2/27/2010 2:48:00 PM

A most beautiful end line poem Barbara, now this is what i call a delight to read >> James,xx

Simone Segal

Date: 2/23/2010 1:09:00 AM

Another lovely write! love Simone

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/22/2010 4:34:00 PM

Dear Barbara, You certainly understand the new Form " End Line Word " So many of the Great POETS here have Mastered this Form As YOU have done Here Superb LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG

John Beam

Date: 2/20/2010 6:59:00 PM

thanks for comment have good evening

Margaret Foster

Date: 2/20/2010 5:52:00 PM

Brilliant Barbara, A perfect flow, difficult to achieve in this form. ( my opinion :) ) but you have carried it off no worries. well done...Thank you for your kind comments this morning...Margaret

Date: 2/19/2010 7:40:00 PM

What an uplifting use of Dane and HG's new form. They are going to love it. Keep on singing and sharing your poetry with us. Have a good weekend. Karen

Laura Spears

Date: 2/19/2010 7:37:00 PM

I really LOVE Music is IT for me. Sorry for that. I was going to get cute with an end line comment. I tend to use the same words over and over on these comments when I am really so awestruck by some of these poems that I just don't know what to say. Wonderful theme.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/16/2010 4:39:00 PM

So uplifting and inspiring, Barbara. Your fellow LNC needed these words today and you delivered big time. Thank you, dear. Love, Carolyn

Sean Kelly

Date: 2/15/2010 10:35:00 PM

Yeaahhh !! , strike up the band , Barbara . Great piece of wisdom , well delivered and best of luck in the contest ...