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Your silence Your silence wraps me like a worn blanket, thin and frayed, providing no warmth, no protection from the cold that invades my every pore as I sit here shivering with fear, questioning every shadow moving outside of the window, lurking, as if sneering at this emptiness drenching my soul with worry and doubt "So quiet that I might hear my own heart beat if it weren't broken" Lost inside these four walls, stained and patterned of past dreams, folding within the plaster nightmares My eyes wet, red and swollen, nervously seeking any minute reassurance, even the faintest of whispers that you are somehow with me as I listen, counting dust particles in the muted sunlight, cowering in this corner with only your silence echoing in my loneliness 5/12/2017 The Poet's Ache Greg Barden

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Date: 5/16/2017 9:36:00 AM
This poem has a very sad feeling of loniliness....yet a hopeful longing feeling ...for just a whisper...Its sad when those we care for go silence..but some people use their silence to tell us so much .many times...This is very deep Chris.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 5/16/2017 9:51:00 AM
Go silent..I meant above..oops sorry... I hope you 'll get to hear her dear Chris.I want you happy.
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Chris Green
Date: 5/16/2017 9:45:00 AM
Sometimes silence is needed I guess, but it never feels good when you are waiting to hear. Thank you so much my sweet friend.
Date: 5/14/2017 7:41:00 PM
I love the imagery you use in this beautiful and sad poem that touches the soul:) Amitiés
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Chris Green
Date: 5/15/2017 8:30:00 AM
Thank you so very much Anne Marie once again for your thoughtful and encouraging comments on my poetry.
Date: 5/14/2017 4:37:00 AM
Morning Chris. Wonderfully expressed throughout. Yes, you have the magic wand for this craft we call poetry. Heart soul and emotion are all met. Honestly. Wonderful in its entirety. We readers thank you.
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Chris Green
Date: 5/15/2017 8:29:00 AM
Thank you Lisa for always touching my heart with your wonderful comments. I am so happy you liked this poem.
Date: 5/12/2017 1:30:00 PM
Such desolate imagery Chris, another perfect write from your pen. #7
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Chris Green
Date: 5/12/2017 1:38:00 PM
Thank you Elizabeth, thank you so much. I truly appreciate all of your nice comments about my work. I am so thrilled you enjoyed this.
Date: 5/12/2017 1:17:00 PM
Chris this is fantastic..i relate to your words so well and they truly touched my soul 7+++
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Chris Green
Date: 5/12/2017 1:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, I am happy you enjoyed this but a little sad you can relate to it. I do appreciate your kindness always.
Date: 5/12/2017 12:10:00 PM
There is great longing and sadness penned here Chris and the loneliness brought forth is loud in the silence. You have such a way with words, very well written Chris :)
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Chris Green
Date: 5/12/2017 12:47:00 PM
Thanks Lenna, I just thought I'd toss a few sad ones out there today and see how they do. Fridays are usually very slow around here so its a good day for a little poetic sorrow. :)
Date: 5/12/2017 11:21:00 AM
Great write, as sad as it may be. Lots of beautiful images.
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Chris Green
Date: 5/12/2017 12:46:00 PM
Thanks so very much Maurice.
Date: 5/12/2017 11:17:00 AM
This is a very lonely picture you paint for me. In beautiful words and images. With a few sentences there I wish I had written. But it presses on me with a feeling of terrible sadness.....
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Chris Green
Date: 5/12/2017 12:45:00 PM
Thanks Darren, that is the feeling I was trying to express but don't allow it to press on you too hard, it's just a poem. :)
Date: 5/12/2017 10:13:00 AM
A very lonely picture you have painted in shades of gray..
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Chris Green
Date: 5/12/2017 12:44:00 PM
Thanks so much Frederic

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