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You Make Me Exist

You make me exist butterflies flutter petals take vibrant colors honey in beehive...... orange of twilight reflects into the ocean beautiful sunrise...... a magnetic charm gentle breeze touches the soul as birds fly afloat....... nature sings in grace earth meets sky at horizon existence proven....... not a word from you as eyes stare at the blue I cease to exist...... passionate longing rhythmic drumming beats say you are my sole heart...... Written July 2nd, 2015 For contest by Marvin celestial " Senryu on your own existence"

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Barbara Campbell
Date: 7/28/2015 9:40:00 AM
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This reminds me of a lovely piece who's origin escapes me for the moment. The poem reads, "There is nothing more lovely than sitting and talking with you except perhaps sitting with you saying nothing." Both of these poems are elegant and clearly reflect the notion of intimacy in the context of nature. Regards, Barbara
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/5/2015 3:54:00 PM
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Congratulation, I can see why you won, a touching poem
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/5/2015 11:13:00 PM
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Thnx a lot ! Appreciate ur kind visit Frederic !
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 7/4/2015 10:42:00 AM
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congrats on your fabulous winning write! :)
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/5/2015 11:14:00 PM
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Thnx Aiyah!
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 7/4/2015 10:24:00 AM
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Beautifully done; a well-earned first place.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/5/2015 11:14:00 PM
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Thnx Mark!
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 7/4/2015 8:27:00 AM
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How exciting to have a number 1..! congrats to you dear. BG
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/5/2015 11:14:00 PM
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Thnx Barbara!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 8:26:00 AM
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I can see why this is in top spot. Lovely Upma.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/5/2015 11:12:00 PM
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Thnx Richard!
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 7/4/2015 1:21:00 AM
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Congrats! Nicely done :)
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/4/2015 10:56:00 AM
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Thnx Ed!
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Constance La France
Date: 7/3/2015 10:53:00 PM
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Upma congratulations on your wonderful win
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/3/2015 10:59:00 PM
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Thnx dear!
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 7/3/2015 8:44:00 PM
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Dr. Sharma, Congrats on a well deserved win and a truly passionate senryu
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/3/2015 11:00:00 PM
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Thnx Dave Will!
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Skat A
Date: 7/3/2015 6:45:00 PM
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congrats...SK
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/3/2015 11:00:00 PM
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Thnx my dear friend Skat!
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Date: 7/3/2015 6:22:00 PM
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Dr Upma, Congratulations on Your Own Existence Senryu win. Love LINDA
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/3/2015 11:00:00 PM
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Thnx Linda!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/3/2015 4:43:00 PM
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wow, you did GREAT. I just saw this one too. BIG congrats to you!!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/3/2015 11:01:00 PM
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Thnx Andrea! Appreciate ur visit and sweet words!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/3/2015 1:42:00 PM
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Awesome romantic feelings in this one!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/3/2015 11:03:00 PM
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Thnx a lot Andrea!
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/3/2015 12:08:00 PM
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Dear Dr. Upma, your brilliant piece is so deserving of this top first place win! Congratulations to you and BRAVO! All the best. Pandita
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/3/2015 11:04:00 PM
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Thnx dear Pandita! U made my day!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/3/2015 10:25:00 AM
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WOW! Big kudos on this magnificent offering Dr. Sharma! Congratulations on your first place!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/3/2015 10:40:00 AM
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Thnx Connie my dear friend! Appreciate ur kind visit!
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/3/2015 9:21:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win, on this beautiful piece, Dr. Upma A. Sharma. Hugs Eve
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/3/2015 10:41:00 AM
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Thnx eve for us ever kind visits n congrats!
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/3/2015 8:25:00 AM
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Congrats beautiful!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/3/2015 10:39:00 AM
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Thnx Lee!
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Kp Nunez
Date: 7/3/2015 4:48:00 AM
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Wow...no wonder you got the top podium win. Congrats, Dr. Upma!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/3/2015 11:04:00 PM
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Thnaks a lot Kim!
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 7/3/2015 4:38:00 AM
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Congratz Dr. Upma! You got my mind!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/3/2015 7:11:00 AM
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Thnx a lot Marvin ! I m so glad that u liked n found it worth!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/3/2015 3:57:00 AM
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Dr. Upma you shine loveliness in every line.. 3 and 5 my fave~Olive Eloisa =)
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/3/2015 11:05:00 PM
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Thnx a lot my dear Olive!
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Julia Ward
Date: 7/3/2015 2:54:00 AM
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A sweet poem, and I hope it does well. Julia, :)
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/3/2015 11:02:00 PM
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Thnx Julia!
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Date: 7/2/2015 8:48:00 PM
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a lovely write, good luck on the contest:) *luv p.d.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/3/2015 11:02:00 PM
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Thnx dear!

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