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You Know You'Re In the Zone When:

When the poem jumps on you, wholly formed, Needing only you to let it out. When you lose track of what the other person's saying, Because your inner monologue is coming together. When you forget all else you're doing, Because now you realize how to say it. When traffic's so slow that you feel like screaming, Because you want to get home and write it down. When you take those incremental steps of becoming a writer, -- One of them is like that first time you ride a horse, It's big and it's powerful, And you are ON THIS THING. Or when your consciousness really starts smiling back at you, Because it's gotten bigger and deeper, Or at least now you're better at shaking hands with it, Seeing more of what's in there, And sometimes what's in there is laughter, Because now you can make yourself laugh. When that sad line pops into your head, And you give that initial gasp or gulp or sniff, Because you're going to start crying, But you're in a restaurant so you try and resist it, Make it into a cough or clear your throat, Trying to disguise it, And your jaws and ears hurt under the tension Of not letting the sobs out.

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Date: 1/18/2022 1:09:00 AM
Thus drawing in by resonation, divine inspiration
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Date: 1/17/2022 3:31:00 PM
Congratulations on having this wonderful poem featured Doug. I can totally identify as most of us poets can. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/17/2022 2:01:00 PM
Well done Doug, or should that be well written. Real coming to life poem, we have all been there and done that, you have managed to describe it to perfection. John
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Date: 12/28/2016 9:26:00 AM
Congrats Doug...
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/28/2016 11:03:00 AM
Thank you, Trice. : )
Date: 12/27/2016 7:48:00 PM
Perfect descriptions of those in-the-zone experiences, Doug. Congrats on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/27/2016 11:41:00 PM
Hi Janice. : ) Gracias - maybe there is a point where it's "too much," but sure wouldn't want to never be in the zone again.
Date: 12/27/2016 7:32:00 PM
Big congrats Doug!! Well done!! :) Big Hugggs!! Deb!!
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/27/2016 11:37:00 PM
In your debt, Cap'n! : )
Date: 12/27/2016 7:16:00 PM
Amazing write, Doug, that says it all. Been there done that! Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/27/2016 11:40:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra! Sometimes the mind will stay on auto-pilot, but the Muse can take control too...
Date: 12/27/2016 7:14:00 PM
Your wonderful poem so aptly describes the urgency a poet feels when the muse visits. Excellent! Congratulations on your fine win Doug. : ) 7
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/27/2016 11:38:00 PM
Merci, Connie. I can see that Muse, thinking, "Okay, she's sitting at a desk right now... I'll just wait until she goes out, when she's a couple miles from home..."
Date: 12/27/2016 7:10:00 PM
Congratulations Doug on your placement. The tale and lament of the struggling poet, one we all share. I enjoyed your form and imagery, we'll done.
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/27/2016 11:35:00 PM
Thanks, Robert. : ) It's like a feeling of wealth, i.e. now I've got something that I didn't have a little while ago, but also of panic - oh lord don't let me lose this.... : p
Date: 12/27/2016 6:47:00 PM
Congrats on a fine placement, really enjoyed second and third read!
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Date: 12/14/2016 11:44:00 AM
Just perfectly describes when it hits us, Doug, you captured the essence of the poetic spirit. Sometimes I can't wait to go home, gotta write it down in the car, bad memory these days. Great writing, bty, just discovered you, will do more digging for gems on your page.A7
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/27/2016 11:33:00 PM
Hey John - cheers. : ) Have to laugh - wrote most of this in my head on one of those days: running errands, then eating in a restaurant.
Date: 12/14/2016 11:44:00 AM
Forgot the seven, see...bad memory.
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/14/2016 4:33:00 PM
Ha! I do that too, John. : )
Date: 12/4/2016 3:27:00 AM
Doug, really does hit the nail on the head. Thanks!
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/4/2016 9:09:00 AM
Was all fired-up last week. ; )
Date: 12/2/2016 8:14:00 AM
Wow! You have captured the feelings that inspire us to write. A very powerful write. Will come back to this one--a fav! Thanks, Kathy
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/2/2016 8:35:00 AM
Hey Kathleen, thanks! I am just so pleased when writers like this.
Date: 12/1/2016 9:47:00 AM
Beautifully co-empathic. Thx. Gerald Oliver
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/1/2016 11:27:00 AM
Hey Gerald. I appreciate that. "When the spirit moves you..." well then you gotta move.
Date: 12/1/2016 7:21:00 AM
Very existential cool poem, Doug. You got the right take on how the creative spirit comes on someone. Fine piece of poetry. I love it. Will read more of your work for sure. Ty for the support on my page. Love and peace to you. RW (Romantic Warrior)
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/1/2016 9:09:00 AM
Thank you, RW. Romantic Warrior - I saw you more as a wrathful preacher, laying down the law. ; )
Date: 12/1/2016 4:46:00 AM
This poem explains exactly how i feel when i get that raw feeling that i gtta write something down before i forget it , knowing that someone might read it and feel the same way gives me a ick an adrenaline rush without the ''fastcar'' .or just the simple fact that it might touch someones heart and change their life for the better , for me is the greatest award ever.Thats how this poem is for me.
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Doug Vinson
Date: 12/1/2016 9:07:00 AM
Rachael, just reading your words gives me some of that feeling. Going way back to when cave people painted on walls, there has been the creative impulse.
Date: 11/30/2016 9:58:00 PM
Doug Vinson... Spot on brother. And I often don't like broccoli! But not all the time. Ha.
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Doug Vinson
Date: 11/30/2016 11:10:00 PM
Gracias, Rick. Rock on, spot on, keep on keepin' on.
Date: 11/30/2016 4:48:00 PM
So me, I love your free verse, Doug.. thank you for sharing :)
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Doug Vinson
Date: 11/30/2016 5:48:00 PM
I'm honored, Eve, and glad you read it and like it. It's not really "equal" out there in public, either - no problem to smile or laugh a little; that doesn't really get noticed. But when you're alone and break down crying in a restaurant, then it's like, "Dang, Holmes - you really don't like broccoli, do you?"
Date: 11/30/2016 4:25:00 PM
I think you've about got it all right here. I know each and everyone of the feelings, scenarios and situations you wrote about today my friend. Very descriptive and spot on.
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Doug Vinson
Date: 11/30/2016 4:40:00 PM
Thanks, brother! Surely it helps us figure out who we are. : )
Date: 11/30/2016 4:15:00 PM
i can so relate to this, doug! you've done an outstanding job of describing that feeling...
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Doug Vinson
Date: 11/30/2016 4:34:00 PM
Maybe it's a life that chooses us, Ilene....? Or, at least partially. And - there are a lot worse things.

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