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You Just Don'T Feel the Same

You just don't feel the same I love to watch the sunrise, but, you love to stay in bed I could go on a nature walk, but, I'll stay with you instead I see you in my future, but, you're living in the past I can run a marathon, but, you just can't go that fast Chorus And I love you, really love you, I want to give you my name And I love you, really love you but, you just...you just.. don't, feel the same I could start a family with you, but, you just want to have fun I believe I really love you, but, you don't think that I'm the one I love to surf the waves, but, you don't like the beach We don't have much in common, does that mean love's out of reach? Chorus And I love you, really love you, I want to give you my name And I love you, really love you but, you just...you just.. don't, feel the same You like to watch old movies, and I really like to swim I'm trying hard to reach you but, you're thinking about him I can't think of life without you, but, you're already gone I thought I really loved you, guess it's time for moving on... Chorus And I love you, really love you, I want to give you my name And I love you, really love you but, you just...you just.. don't, feel the same you just don't feel the same you just don't feel the same repeat and fade to zero John Derek Hamilton July 31,2017

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/1/2017 10:20:00 AM

Beautiful song, John, can feel the rhythm throughout:)

John Hamilton
Date: 8/1/2017 11:33:00 AM

Thanks Jo, yes it has an easy to follow cadence for sure, hey Jo did you hear the music for my such a beautiful feeling? Mark Massey did up the melody and it's posted on my page, check it out. Nice to finally have some music to my lyrics.

Silent One

Date: 7/31/2017 4:18:00 PM

A sad love song John.. if only we could hear you sing this..

John Hamilton
Date: 7/31/2017 9:03:00 PM

Thanks SO for your positive feedback

Jan Allison

Date: 7/31/2017 2:44:00 PM

Beautifully written but such sad lyrics John. They say opposites attract but in this case it is doomed to failure:-( hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton
Date: 7/31/2017 2:48:00 PM

Thanks Jan, have you seen my such a beautiful feeling lyric Mark Massey did the melody for it it's posted now, thanks for all your support!

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/31/2017 2:17:00 PM

John You have such a great way of writing these Lyric that are relatable for so many people. Always, reaching so many I am sure. I want to see them all be put to music :)

John Hamilton
Date: 7/31/2017 2:46:00 PM

You and me both Heidi, I have a few done, don't know if you've seen my such a beautiful feeling, the music is up for it now, Mark Massey did it up nice with a sixties feel to it. Thanks so much for your constant support, it really helps me to keep going!

Lin Lane

Date: 7/31/2017 1:36:00 PM

A sad case of star crossed lovers. Your song lyrics are becoming popular on the site, John, and with good reason. Your talent shines.

John Hamilton
Date: 7/31/2017 1:40:00 PM

So nice Lin for stopping by, yeah it seems like people are acquiring the taste for lyrics, if they can visualize a melody I think it makes it enjoyable, structured poetry is much harder for me. Thanks for your generous words, it means a lot to me!

White Wolf

Date: 7/31/2017 1:32:00 PM

This is really well done, John! A pleasure

John Hamilton
Date: 7/31/2017 1:37:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by Rick, I really appreciate your positive feedback, and brave first comment!