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You Broke My Heart-'Hibernal Heart'

Hibernal Heart Yes youthful yesterday a kindred King and Queen Till today a dust full death within a daunting dream Oh sweet tomorrow awake before the rising sun For tonight my heart hinders, alas I have no one My passion remains passive and your poison permeates As your lingering lucifugous love shuts the guilted gates I've not any decorative diamonds nor ranting relishing rings All I have left is a lamenting love that sadly silently sings. 02.06.2017 You Broke My Heart ... Contest Sponsored by...Nicola Byrne

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Deborah Burch

Date: 2/14/2017 8:12:00 PM

Well done WW!! Congratulations!!!:) Hugggs deb!!

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/14/2017 11:02:00 AM

Back to congratulate you WW, I am a boy and very young at heart...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/14/2017 5:28:00 AM

Very nice wordsmithing! Congrats on your top win, WW!

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 2/14/2017 1:58:00 AM

Congratulation. Heartfelt, broken and open to change. Kai

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/13/2017 5:28:00 PM

Love the alliterations (and learned a new word!). Congrats on your win.

Phillip Garcia

Date: 2/13/2017 4:48:00 PM

Straight up awesome. I LOVE your use of alliteration. It was smooth and very effective

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 2/13/2017 3:42:00 PM

I love this. Great write. Congrats.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/7/2017 10:23:00 PM

heartrending write poignantly scribed...and with alliteration to enhance the appeal of your lines, WW... all the best at nicola's, WW..huggs

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/7/2017 10:27:00 PM

Thank you so much nette...such a beautiful comment my friend...god bless...^WW^

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/7/2017 8:01:00 PM

Wow this poem is stunningly beautiful WW! I am pretty sure Nicola will just love it. I sure do! 7 ; )

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/7/2017 10:03:00 PM

Thank you so much Connie...I miss your visits...sometimes it's hard to keep in touch with everyone...god bless...^WW^

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/7/2017 5:32:00 PM

Well done, Wingman. Nothing wrong with singing the blues:) It's the story of my life!

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/7/2017 6:26:00 PM

Dido...old buddy...never gets any better...but then again who would write about it lol...we need poets to handle the heavy duty parts of life lol...god bless my friend...^WW^

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 2/7/2017 5:18:00 PM

You really write beautifully! Thank you for commenting on my poem.

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/7/2017 6:20:00 PM

Thank you SW...and you are a beautiful soul...god bless...^WW^

Becca Teagan

Date: 2/7/2017 1:32:00 PM

I love all the alliteration, WW, this flows nicely this sad poem.

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/7/2017 1:45:00 PM

Thank you my lovely friend...god bless...^WW^

Akkina Downing

Date: 2/7/2017 1:05:00 PM

Don't trip over one that has no appreciation for love... Good luck and all the best :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/7/2017 1:11:00 PM

Thank you Akkina...love your name by the way...unfortunately, I'm always tripping lol...god bless..^WW^

John Hamilton

Date: 2/7/2017 12:33:00 PM

Great rhymes as always WW, really enjoyed this, if for the contest should do well! I think Nicola will like your L word!lol

John Hamilton
Date: 2/7/2017 2:09:00 PM

57ish 4for 4?

John Hamilton
Date: 2/7/2017 2:07:00 PM

No I was a courier though so half points?

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/7/2017 12:55:00 PM

Now how did that happen...Thank you John...I'm a boy too...and my name is also John...2 for 2...did you drive a mail truck by any chance...and we'll make for 3 lol...god bless...^WW^

John Hamilton
Date: 2/7/2017 12:50:00 PM

think your comment jumped and i am a boy.lol

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/7/2017 12:38:00 PM

I did take her home to mama...and mama wanted to throw! her out...I've should have listed to mama lol...thanks eh...god bless Charlie old boy(your probably very young and I'm calling you an old boy)...I hope you don't mind...and are you a boy? lol...^WW^

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/7/2017 11:50:00 AM

A cold hearted cave dweller eh? Doesn't sound like one to take home to mama. Great rhyme W/W, best wishes in the contest...

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/7/2017 12:51:00 PM