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So, I tried to love you with all my heart. I gave you my best, But it seems you could not love anyone but yourself, so I was left sad and lonely, Despite having given you my all. Now, I am all alone, and you are free. written December 28, 2021

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Date: 1/10/2022 1:18:00 AM
Hi Milt, missing you on Soup here, hope you are doing well:)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/11/2022 4:06:00 PM
Thanks, Jo. Thanks so much for your concern and your note. I have been on a two-week tour of the southern U.S. visiting family and friends. I did sign into PS a few times, but I don't enjoy doing so with my cell phone. I am home, as of an hour ago, and you will begin to see me posting poems, commenting, and responding to comments right away. Again, thanks for your concern. Your Kentucky Friend, Milt
Date: 1/7/2022 2:23:00 PM
Bitter sweet indeed. Well penned my friend. Have a great day and stay warm.
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Date: 1/11/2022 4:06:00 PM
Thanks so much, David. I appreciated your read and your comment.
Date: 1/6/2022 6:42:00 AM
Indeed Milt. Very moving and written with much feeling.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/11/2022 4:06:00 PM
Thanks so much, Terry. Always good to hear from you.
Date: 1/5/2022 8:40:00 AM
Ah! One sided love … can we shrug and move on?
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/11/2022 4:07:00 PM
I suppose, Unseeking Seeker. So many times love is one-sided, and if you have experienced it, you realize it merits more than a shrug and moving on. Hope you have not!
Date: 1/4/2022 9:56:00 AM
A moving etheree, sad, but well penned with feeling.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/11/2022 4:07:00 PM
Thanks, M.L. I so appreciate hearing from you.
Date: 1/4/2022 7:55:00 AM
Well written Etheree Milt. Very sad but true several times in my experience in life. Have a Happy New Year my friend, Bill
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/11/2022 4:08:00 PM
Hi Bill - I was giving the Etheree a try. Thanks for your comment.
Date: 12/31/2021 9:22:00 AM
Milt...Best wishes and blessings for 2022.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/11/2022 4:08:00 PM
Same to you, Delice. I appreiciate you so much!
Date: 12/31/2021 6:58:00 AM
Sad, but so well composed. Happy and Healthy New Year.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/11/2022 4:08:00 PM
Thanks so much, Victor.
Date: 12/31/2021 5:19:00 AM
A sweet bit of sadness Hank.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/11/2022 4:09:00 PM
Thanks, Caren.
Date: 12/31/2021 2:24:00 AM
I sense a little sadness and loneliness in this etheree, Milton:) hope you are well:) wishing you a happy, blessed, prosperous and a healthy New Year:)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/11/2022 4:09:00 PM
I am doing well, Jo. Thanks for your comment on my poem.
Date: 12/29/2021 1:54:00 PM
Sad. How can anyone love another person when their only true love is themselves?
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/11/2022 4:09:00 PM
That is so true, and a fine observation, Shirley. Thanks.
Date: 12/29/2021 11:30:00 AM
What inspired this sad little poem, Milt? Don't you love this form? I did an entire chapbook long ago based on etheree.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/11/2022 4:10:00 PM
I don't think I had tried it before, Andrea. It seemed to lend itself to the theme...anyway, I hope so! Thanks for your comment on my attempt.
Date: 12/29/2021 8:46:00 AM
in time we hope that we will also be free Great job with this tricky Etheree form Milton
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/11/2022 4:10:00 PM
Thank you so much, John.
Date: 12/29/2021 7:57:00 AM
Great Etheree....and the truth of it is sad, an unfortunate condition many of us have endured. Blessings, Paulette
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/11/2022 4:11:00 PM
Thanks so much for your thoughts, Paulette. I'm afraid that is so true.
Date: 12/29/2021 5:40:00 AM
And they will live to regret it!! ( that's what I tell myself) I think that your Etheree is terrific Milt!!! Happy New Year to you !!!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/11/2022 4:11:00 PM
Thanks so much, Mike. It was sort of experimental!
Date: 12/29/2021 2:50:00 AM
It's sad when a relationship turns out to be one sided and it takes a time to get over it. Love this form. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/11/2022 4:11:00 PM
So true, Tom. I appreciate your comment.
Date: 12/29/2021 12:18:00 AM
Love this poem even if it is sad to see a person engrossed on oneself.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/11/2022 4:12:00 PM
Thank you for your thoughts, Victor.
Date: 12/29/2021 12:03:00 AM
Hi Milton…..I like this one a lot. Fiction?? Cheers Debx
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/11/2022 4:12:00 PM
Pretty much fiction, Deb.
Date: 12/28/2021 10:04:00 PM
I need to do more of this form. Good one. Happy New Year wishes
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/11/2022 4:13:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. It was sort of experimental, but I think it worked well.

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