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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You are more beautiful than all the men in this world that have ever graced its soil both the living and the dead. You are my sunrise, my star-filled nights. You are the gentle spring breeze, lightly scented with honey suckle. Your eyes and my eyes are celestial beings caught in each other's orbits. Your kiss is a big bang that sparks in my mind the universes of forever and always.

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Date: 4/11/2024 9:32:00 AM
A first, you've left me speechless with your Love. Hugs for my soulmate, Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/11/2024 6:43:00 PM
awww, thank you my soulmate. love and hugs, Sara
Date: 4/11/2024 9:24:00 AM
Aww I bet this made Texas Bill smile.. what a lovely poem and photo.. God bless both of you..
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/11/2024 6:44:00 PM
yes, Silent One, the poem did bring a smile to his face. thanks for visiting my site and for your blessings for today, enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 4/11/2024 5:58:00 AM
So wonderfully romantic, Sara. Love exudes from two doting hearts. I hear the joy in your words of love revered.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/11/2024 6:07:00 AM
thank you, Vijay. We do dote over one another...guess that comes from getting older together :-) Appreciate your kind words, Sara
Date: 4/11/2024 5:38:00 AM
Whew this is hot and heavy with romance! Love! Nice photo you are both adorable!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/11/2024 6:06:00 AM
awww, thank you Karen. Appreciate your visit and kind words. We were at our local Dairy Queen enjoying some ice cream...part of the reason we're smiling :-) enjoy your day, Sara
Date: 4/11/2024 2:54:00 AM
Wow how more romantic than this could it get!! It is truly lovely to see couples so much in love. Best regards to the both of you Sara & Bill. // paul
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/11/2024 5:09:00 AM
awww, thank you for your visit and kind words. Wishing you a splendid day, Sara
Date: 4/10/2024 6:30:00 PM
Seeing the Bakers…aww! You are so cute! … You are the gentle spring breeze, lightly scented with honey suckle...What a lovely thing to say!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/11/2024 5:10:00 AM
awww, thank you Kim. I was a little hesitant to post the picture so I'm glad you enjoyed seeing it. I appreciate your visit and kind response. Have a blessed day, hugs, Sara

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