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You Are - Much More

I A day, a blessing, misshapen Careless words, good deeds overtaken You rise, we rise: building on the trough Cresting arrested; environment looks tough We cannot fall further, sink lower We remain connected, no matter the matter Mother and child, ocean & waves, eternally Somewhere deeper, Universe is you and me II You were cresting, dancing with siblings Environments include YOU, both creating A win-win world, Oceans of happy waves Even when we crash, the trough saves It is our connection to the Ocean Bed No matter the weather ... Curses, words said You are more, more than that spent wave You have tasted eternity; you are beyond brave III We are more than our profession We are more than any reputation We are more than strong, or wise We are more than traps that surprise U & I are the universe experiencing Itself New American loses identity of immigrant The play of creation depends on disguise Maybe that God as Spirit borrows our eyes IV (Envoi) You are much more than you know Look for the empowerment in surprise Go with the flow as a wave, ebb and flow Maybe God as Spirit must borrow our eyes NOTE: I am still new to this form and modified the rhyme scheme From ababbcbc ; ababbcbc; ababbcba; bcbc

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Date: 3/3/2022 2:29:00 PM
I love your wordplay here, such as 'no matter the matter' and the repeat of 'God as Spirit borrows our eyes' - and the inspiring connection to the ocean and universe- think I've got to fave this one!
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Date: 3/2/2022 3:32:00 PM
Empowering piece Anil...
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Date: 2/28/2022 6:40:00 PM
Excellent bro, You are much more then we know. Happy Mahashivratri
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Date: 2/27/2022 8:57:00 AM
We are by the grace of God much more and through our faith in him we have tasted eternity. Well penned my friend Anil, eireene, shalom, peace. Jennifer.
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Date: 2/24/2022 1:58:00 PM
Excellent work, Anil. Deep, thought-provoking words. We limit ourselves because we are unaware of our full potential, basically we don't acknowledge who we are. A creation in bodily form, designed in the eternal spirit of oneness of the Creator. We are unlimited as our authentic selves. Thanks for sharing your gift with us, Anil. Blessings upon you and your poetry, Bill
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Date: 2/23/2022 8:23:00 AM
Anil Anil Anil - I was mesmerized reading this entry. My goodness, this is one your best. You incorporate the ocean with life, thus a winning combination in my eyes. In short this is beautiful in every way. May this day find you well and safe. Love and Blessings always. Yes, Namaste and Shalom. (smile)... Oh the humanity of it all...
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Date: 2/21/2022 8:40:00 PM
"You are much more than you know Look for the empowerment in surprise" So true.... Each one is much more than one knows. There are a number of hidden potentials in us. If we dig them out, we will be greatly empowered and God will aid us. Very profound thoughts, Anil
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