You

as a soft breeze, a hushed whisper, a cool mist, you came quietly and slipped into my thoughts. I skim through the sunlit alley of a dream world and I whirl in an uneasy sensuality. now the embryo of love in me has matured into a full grown fetus kicking at the crust of my womb giving the tremor of a forbidden E C S T A S Y June.22.2022 ~Placed First~ Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest

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Margarita Lillico

Date: 6/26/2022 3:21:00 PM

A jewel of sensuality! Congrats!

Valsa George
Date: 7/3/2022 4:30:00 AM

Nice to see your smiling face and your hearty comment . Thanks a lot Margarita

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/26/2022 2:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your trophy win Valsa! A stunning masterpiece of a lovechild! A marvelous display! I am very happy for you...Hugs, hugs, hugs.

Valsa George
Date: 7/3/2022 4:28:00 AM

I feel thrilled Anaya.... ! Much gratitude to you dear friend !

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 6/25/2022 4:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your excellent trophy win, Valsa. Beautifully crafted poem! Best ~ Mala

Valsa George
Date: 7/3/2022 4:29:00 AM

Mala, you are so ver kind. Thanks a lot for your sweet words

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/25/2022 1:37:00 AM

Very picturesque and feeling-filled or rather ecstasy-filled work. Congratulations!

Valsa George
Date: 7/3/2022 4:27:00 AM

I appreciate your usual gesture of congratulating me. Thanks a lot Chris...

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 6/24/2022 9:01:00 PM

So masterfully penned, Valsa! Congrats on your top trophy win in Brian’s contest!

Valsa George
Date: 7/3/2022 4:26:00 AM

Thanks a lot dear Seeker friend. Your words really count !

Valsa George

Date: 6/24/2022 7:21:00 PM

Wow.... I feel overjoyed. Thanks a lot Brian for selecting my poem for the trophy win. Also for arranging several competitions and boosting our morale as poets.....!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/24/2022 12:49:00 PM

Congrats on this winning work. SK

Valsa George
Date: 7/3/2022 4:25:00 AM

Sara, dear poet friend, Thank you so much !

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/24/2022 11:45:00 AM

Back with congratulations for my predicted very well-deserved win dear Valsa.

Valsa George
Date: 7/3/2022 4:24:00 AM

Your ever encouraging attitude is your greatest gift ! Thank you so much dear Lasaad !

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 6/24/2022 10:56:00 AM

Hello, congratulations on your well deserved win

Valsa George
Date: 7/3/2022 4:23:00 AM

Thank you so much Paghunda .....

Hilo Poet

Date: 6/24/2022 10:25:00 AM

An artistically beautiful penning, Valsa, romanticism emanates rapturously, and my sincere compliments on your commendable top win my friend, Aloha~William

Valsa George
Date: 7/3/2022 4:22:00 AM

Never expected this trophy win ! So grateful to for your wonderful appreciation. Much appreciated from a poet of your caliber, Williams ....

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/24/2022 9:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your trophy win Valsa! Your wording and metaphor are so rich and lush and definitely "conceived" in your poetic mastery of words and language. It is always a pleasure to read you sublime poetry! Blessings to you dear friend!

Valsa George
Date: 7/3/2022 4:20:00 AM

So kind of you to have lavished praises on me. These words from you, I treasure so much, Sam.... ! Thanks a lot dear friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/23/2022 8:18:00 AM

Very interesting! Love that you are on this sight! Hugs ~ Kim

Valsa George
Date: 6/23/2022 9:01:00 AM

I too am so glad that I am part of this site with such sweet company ! Thank you dear Kim....

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 6/22/2022 9:21:00 PM

Truly creative and romantically inclined with nice imagery and insightful Valsa, hope all is well, blessings,Gordon

Valsa George
Date: 6/23/2022 12:40:00 AM

Thank you so much dear friend, Gordon ! After your great innings, I am sure you are more into poetry ! Thanks a lot friend ! Blessings !

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/22/2022 8:56:00 PM

This may be the most sensual poem I have ever read/viewed, Valsa. Bravo. ~ gw

Valsa George
Date: 6/22/2022 9:06:00 PM

Wow.... This is a comment I shall treasure! I am floored.... Thank you so much....Gershon

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/22/2022 7:44:00 PM

There is more than one creation here, Valsa.

Valsa George
Date: 6/22/2022 9:01:00 PM

I feel so happy. Thanks a lot venerable poet friend !

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/22/2022 2:24:00 PM

How enchanting and romantic! Much enjoyed the whispers of your poem.

Valsa George
Date: 6/22/2022 9:00:00 PM

Happy you liked it.... you the great bard of love.....! Thanks a lot !

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/22/2022 10:26:00 AM

You captured it well Valsa, very creative layout. Tom

Valsa George
Date: 6/22/2022 8:59:00 PM

Glad you liked the lay out . Sfter seeing some poems here, I was trying to imitate. Thank you dear Tom.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/22/2022 8:48:00 AM

Wow. You spell romance with a capital R.

Valsa George
Date: 6/22/2022 8:56:00 PM

At this age, I was just trying if romance suits me....:) Thanks a lot dear Victor!

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/22/2022 6:11:00 AM

Valsa, Your poetry is an amazing stunner because of the fascinating sights and powerful diction that you use. This poem on the thrill of love is very profound, and your words pierce right to the core of the reader's being.

Valsa George
Date: 6/22/2022 8:55:00 PM

I am always in awe of your diction ! If you feel that my vocabulary is fine, I am so happy ! Thank you dear Lasaad for your wonderful comment !