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Yet I Long For Spring

Beautiful Autumn, trees set ablaze, golden and scarlet, always amaze. Yet, I long for spring, for soon I know, Autumn's song fades into winter's snow. I long for green--new life everywhere, spring's gusty music, magic in air! October 30, 2022

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Date: 11/1/2022 5:07:00 PM
"I long for green--new life everywhere, spring's gusty music, magic in the air." Beautiful!
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Ann Peck
Date: 11/3/2022 9:11:00 AM
Than you so much, Joe!
Date: 10/31/2022 4:52:00 PM
Covering the seasons but longing for Spring!
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Ann Peck
Date: 11/3/2022 9:13:00 AM
Yes, while everyone else is enjoying Autumn! Thanks, Kim.
Date: 10/31/2022 11:42:00 AM
My sentiments exactly, which is why I live in Hawai'i! Aloha!
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Ann Peck
Date: 11/3/2022 9:24:00 AM
No Autumns in Hawai'i, I guess--But no Spring promises, either. :( Thank you for correcting my spelling.I'll try to remember--no promises there, either :) But, actually, I hate that we don't try to get spelling and pronounciations correct.
Date: 10/31/2022 11:29:00 AM
Very pretty, Ann. Best of wishes for the contest. :)
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Ann Peck
Date: 10/31/2022 4:37:00 PM
Thank you, Evelyn!
Date: 10/31/2022 3:46:00 AM
Lovely sentiment in this bitesize poem. Good luck in the contest. // Barry
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Ann Peck
Date: 10/31/2022 7:47:00 AM
Hello, Barry! Thank you for commenting!
Date: 10/30/2022 7:37:00 PM
Pretty as a picture, Ann. Very soothing write. Thank you, Gershon
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Ann Peck
Date: 11/6/2022 10:42:00 AM
well, yes--that would be hard to beat! :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/2/2022 2:54:00 PM
Sometimes an early summer night over a clear, cool lake in Wisconsin -- tough to match that. ~ Drop in anytime
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Ann Peck
Date: 10/31/2022 7:49:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon! Is there anything lovelier than a spring day? :)
Date: 10/30/2022 12:46:00 PM
Much enjoyed this ode to spring, Ann. Nature is so beautiful-- both in vibrant growth and colorful decay. Best to you.
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Ann Peck
Date: 11/4/2022 10:19:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Vijay.
Date: 10/30/2022 12:16:00 PM
Anne, So well thought for so few lines! Love your 'magic in the air'! Best of luck, suzanne
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Ann Peck
Date: 10/30/2022 4:51:00 PM
Thanks, Sweet Suzanne! I really don't like cold weather! :)
Date: 10/30/2022 11:35:00 AM
I like this very much, Ann, and I'm sure Line will, too. Nice couplets.
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Ann Peck
Date: 10/30/2022 11:40:00 AM
Thanks, Milton. I really do long for spring

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