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Yet a Sublime Bliss

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winter-world enveloped with sparkling snow rose branches bare, blithe tulips disappeared serene spruce and pine standing in a bow, decked in bright silver, outstretching their arms. rose branches bare, blithe tulips disappeared rooftops agleam, evergreens yet dazzling, decked in bright silver, outstretching their arms, bountiful nature bestowed all blessings rooftops agleam, evergreens yet dazzling, families enjoy harmony and peace, bountiful nature bestowed all blessings, life is yet a glorious sublime bliss. families enjoy harmony and peace, serene spruce and pine standing in a bow, Life is yet a glorious sublime bliss winter-world enveloped with sparkling snow. November 28, 2021 For "Y" New Poetry Contest Theme: Yet Sponsor: Constance La France 10 Syllables in every line throughout - checked by howmanysyllables.com Old or New Pantoum Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May

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Eve Roper

Date: 8/29/2022 10:01:00 AM

Great imagery on this nice verse my friend. Congratulations on your win . Many blessings my friend

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/29/2022 1:19:00 PM

Thank you, Dear Eve. Living in Canada, snowy winter is my favourite theme.

Joseph May

Date: 8/28/2022 10:15:00 AM

Very nice winter imagery Malabika, Congrats on your win, Very nicely done

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/29/2022 1:17:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph. Feel honoured!

Constance La France

Date: 12/10/2021 5:14:00 PM

Mala, wonderful writing and congratulations on your Second Place win in my "Y" Contest and I really like the great image too ~ love and serenity _Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/6/2021 7:34:00 AM

WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful story/write and picture. Have a blessed day/week.....................

Valsa George

Date: 12/6/2021 5:19:00 AM

You have brought in the whole beauty of the snow covered land ! A well deserved honor with a difficult form. Congratulations Malabika

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/30/2021 3:00:00 PM

Not an easy form of poetry to write, yet one can feel the theme here. truly a lovely poem.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 11/30/2021 10:15:00 AM

Well written Pantoum dear Mala, specially loved the imagery of " serene spruce and pine decked in bright silver, outstretching their arms"... so beautiful of the winter world... which I never get to see here... Haha... Best wishes and hugs... ~ Ani

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/30/2021 2:51:00 PM

Thank you, Anitha. We see a lot of winter wonderland in Canada - sublime snow, and serene evergreens. May be some day you will visit us during Christmas! That would be lovely!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/29/2021 1:22:00 AM

Love the imagery, Mala, great pantoum, she likes snow, so this should do well:)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/29/2021 6:50:00 AM

Thanks, Jo. I am from Canada, so I like snow too.

Bill Baker

Date: 11/28/2021 9:44:00 PM

Good imagery and I love the patterns you use by repeating lines in consecitive lines in different verses, (Like second line in one verse and then first line in another verse) Very intriguing, Malabika. A poet friend, Bill

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/29/2021 6:51:00 AM

Thank you, Bill. I really appreciate your inspiring comments. I didn't use this form - Pantoum - before. Now I am loving it!