Yesterdays Wishes
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June 25, 2024
~ Seventh Place ~
Contest: Yesterday’s Wishes
Sponsor: Craig Cornish
Back when girlish daydreams rode the ether like coal-glowy-clouds
featly feet kept a beat in spring grass as I flounced with Romany wind
breezy-gypsy-lips brushed my cheek as I whirled in his arms
‘til I fell over on pillows of clover… white fields did pillow my dreams
as slow-motion-cumulus shape-shifted to what I wanted to see
I found you where you stood a wizard-well made of stone
there you sang your mouth O-pen like the eye-of-the-storm
and oh— with fluent depth your slippery rime beguiled my mind
June wind a flowy fifer blew across your rounded rim
folksy-fife twisted petticoat heartstrings… wishes stitched seams bewitched
— hopes bloomed like soft-stemmed peonies twined in choke-hold-vines
in season before my summer solstice when skirt-pleats hid shy knees
how was I to know wishing for lambs from edelweiss
was as fictive as a sugar-unicorn parade —
so I dared not damage the magic with doubt’s dent
as I cast blindfolded coins weighed down with cinder-block-hope
with fealty to a deity who made ethereal echoes of my name
yet callous your schemes pitching dreams empty as a fool but for her shame
back then life was unmapped until clover fields became sneak-away-streets
your name paved where remains of wishes lay like burned-out cars at curbs
Copyright © Susan Ashley | Year Posted 2024
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