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Yesterday

Yesterday has come and gone like a vapid shadow In my mind so many things I might have explored, As I strolled through the lush, verdant meadow Hoping my troubled soul might become restored. Renewed confidence in the goodness of mankind With sweet visions of the innate brotherhood of all, Yesterday is gone, however; in this new day I find A plethora of opportunities, once again, to recall. Despite yesterday’s disappointments and fear I am the captain of my soul* and I make my future, As adventurous horizons before me do appear These old heart scars do not need another suture. I cannot alter patterns of grim yesterday’s woes, But grasp onto the hope this promising day shows.
SECOND PLACE WINNER Written November 28, 2021 *with a nod to Whitman "Yesterday" Submitted to "Y" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France

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Date: 12/10/2021 5:12:00 PM
Milt, wonderful writing your poem touched my heart "I am the captain of my soul" also. Congratulations on your Second Place win in my "Y" Contest ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/10/2021 7:22:00 PM
Thanks, Constance. I enjoyed writing for your contest, and I wish you much success in the next "episode."
Date: 12/3/2021 2:34:00 PM
Your poem is very wise, Milton. We can't rewind the clock, relive happiness or sadness except in memories. It's best to keep looking forward. Congratulation on your win!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/3/2021 3:49:00 PM
Thanks, Ann. I'm really proud of this poem, quite honestly, because I believe it is supremely optimistic and shows the value of taking charge of one's own future potential and direction.
Date: 11/29/2021 3:36:00 PM
one can visit the past but should not live in it, looking forward is a good thing, it's all we really have...good message in your poem...good luck in the contest
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/29/2021 5:41:00 PM
Thanks so much, Frederick, for your thoughtful comment.
Date: 11/28/2021 7:09:00 PM
Love the optimism here Hank "Renewed confidence in the goodness of mankind With sweet visions of the innate brotherhood of all," Love it!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/28/2021 7:16:00 PM
There will always be that streak of Anne Frank in me, Caren. Thanks for your thoughts.

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