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Yellow

Her bedroom was a sunny yellow The paint reflecting her charm She disarmed every morning, smiling With enormous baby grins greeting each day As she grew, this sunny disposition Came from her soul, As much a part of her, as arm or leg, As sunny as the yellow curls that crowned her head At times she was sweet and delicate Like holding a little yellow duckling in the palm of your hand Sometimes she was giggly and playful Like when you share yellow buttered popcorn with a friend Her heart grew like a little flame Growing brighter with every year Her eyes would shine, like the brightest stars, twinkling in their mirth Yet full of kindness, and soft as a pale yellow rose The sun seemed to follow her, a radiance, a glow from within That could warm a room on a cold day A ray of sunshine, like daffodils, born to lift spirits Or a yellow marguerite, bright with cheer It is no surprise That the grown woman she became Would bear a sunny little boy With yellow curls, and a beaming smile .......who lights up my life who sits in the glow of a yellow lamplight and colors pictures of a big, fat, yellow sun with his favorite yellow crayon Dedicated to my daughter...who is the Sunshine of our Family

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Date: 5/10/2009 2:17:00 AM
Carrie, nice work and congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 5/8/2009 12:50:00 PM
WOW!. This truly is a magnificent and inspiring write. I feel the joys of childhood to parenthood within your beautiful imagery, I tip my glass to you....... I think my new favorite color is yellow. :)
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Date: 5/5/2009 6:04:00 AM
This is such a precious write. Your love for your daughter shines as bright as that sun. I love the color of this one. Congratulations on having it featured this week. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 5/4/2009 6:29:00 PM
Wonderful tribute to your daughter..conrats on being featured. BG
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Date: 5/4/2009 3:41:00 PM
congrads on being featured. john
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Date: 5/4/2009 1:59:00 PM
Carrie Just beautiful! Congratulations on featured poem! Love Laura :)
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Date: 5/4/2009 11:55:00 AM
Your poem was beautiful and made me feel warm inside. Congratulations on being featured this week.
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Date: 5/4/2009 11:32:00 AM
Carrie that is a sweet tribute to your daughter and I bet she really brightens up your days. Congrats on this being featured, well deserved. God Bless. Ron
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Date: 5/4/2009 10:43:00 AM
This poem shows a loving bond, enhanced by the colour Yellow. What a lovely poem to write about your daughter,James,x
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Date: 5/4/2009 7:52:00 AM
Congrats on this featured poem, so full of love and sweetness. Hey, that's Carrie! Love, daver
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Date: 5/4/2009 7:42:00 AM
I love this dedication Carrie,..and congrats on your feature! james
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Date: 5/4/2009 6:28:00 AM
You are truly blessed. Beautiful write for a daughter who must be a beautiful young lady. Congratulations on the featuring of "Yellow." God Bless. Vince
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Date: 5/4/2009 6:23:00 AM
Dear Carrie,Congratulations on YOUR Featured POEM "YELLOW" A very beautiful dedication to YOUR charming daughter LOVE ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 5/4/2009 6:18:00 AM
Aww Carrie, your love for your children, and their children is HUGE. Nothing but pure sunshine here. Beautiful, beautiful write. Congrats on your wonderful feature! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/4/2009 3:50:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem "Yellow" featured this week. Your love for your daughter is beautifuly told in this tribute to her. Love, Dane
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Date: 5/4/2009 3:37:00 AM
Wonderful writing, Congratulations on being featured, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 5/4/2009 12:58:00 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Carrie Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/3/2009 11:42:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on this featured wonderful poem of yours. I love it. I showed this to my daughter and she also love it. TY for your warm comment. Ernilando
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Date: 2/17/2009 3:06:00 AM
Nice tribute.Carrie.I too like yellow it always brightens life.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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