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“Yellow is the color closest to light. In its utmost purity it always implies the nature of brightness and has a cheerful, serene, gently stimulating character. Hence, experience teaches us that yellow makes a thoroughly warm and comforting impression.” Johann Wolfgang von Goethe
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Yellow stars are quickly receding, as I’ve always known they would. Yellow is the sun touching the sky adding color to the neighborhood. Yellow is the warmth of mellow sunshine, mid woodland songs and cries. Yellow is the egg yolk and buttery toast I eat while watching butterflies. Yellow is the morning of marigolds and sun, watching as magenta finally fades. Yellow is the frenzied canary who sits upon my rooftop and stays. Yellow are the wheat fields underneath transparent, cerulean skies. Yellow are the gigantic sunflowers standing at attention, vigilant sentries. Yellow are those scented hours, wishing they would never end. Yellow is the beauty of seasonal colors upon which I’ve learnt to depend. Yellow are nature’s melodies played on a loop celebrating the rising sun. Yellow is this memorable day of days with its treasured life hardly begun. Yellow is the morning of citrine sparkling upon the full richness of my life. Yellow is the sparkling, delicious honey in the rich chamber of a beehive.

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Date: 4/1/2024 10:27:00 AM
What a wonderful way you have of describing Yellow, dear Sara. Yellow is a delightful color always associated with joy, and this poem beautifully captures it. This is a beloved choice. Well done on your win!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/1/2024 6:18:00 PM
thank you, dear Sotto, for stopping by. I appreciate your kind and complimentary words. Grateful, also, for your congratulatory wors. Have a pleasant evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
Date: 4/1/2024 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your bright "Yellow" write with the pretty flower picture. What a great/fun color.... Have a blessed day...............
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/1/2024 6:16:00 PM
thank you, sweet Paula! I appreciate your congratulatory words. Glad you enjoyed the sunshiny poem, hugs, Sara
Date: 4/1/2024 7:56:00 AM
Love the last line especially dear Sara. Congratulations! :)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/1/2024 6:15:00 PM
thank you, Linda! You're visit and kind words are welcomed and appreciated. Have a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara
Date: 4/1/2024 7:47:00 AM
Back with congratulations, Sarah! My day is brightened once again with your sunny yellow imagery!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/1/2024 6:15:00 PM
awww, thank you Kim. I appreciate your 'sunny' comments. You brought sunshine to my day, seriously :-) Have a wonderful evening,hugs, Sara
Date: 3/31/2024 9:13:00 PM
I love all the clever ways you described yellow. I have three favorite colors and this is one of them. Fantastic job. Congrats
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/1/2024 4:01:00 AM
awww, thank you for your positive comments and for your congratulatory words. I'm grateful for the placement of my bright and sunny list poem. Have a splendid week, hugs, Sara
Date: 3/11/2024 9:38:00 PM
I love all the wonderful yellow imagery especially the sunflowers and marigolds! Your poem was refreshing and flowed well with charming rhyme! Best wishes in the contest!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/12/2024 4:49:00 AM
your comments were a delight to read this morning! Thanks for your visit and well wishes for the contest. Have a pleasant day, Sara
Date: 3/11/2024 7:36:00 PM
Dear Sara, your poem is truly magnificent. Your ability to convey a profound perspective is truly awe-inspiring. Through your words, you have managed to transport us into a state of utter fascination with the color yellow, which has always brought me immense joy. I cannot express enough how much I admire your work and consider it to be a personal favorite. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/12/2024 4:49:00 AM
dearest Sotto--your comments were a warm, gentle, and uplifting breeze this morning. They truly made my day (no my week!) Yellow is my favorite color, and I'm grateful it brings you joy. I'm humbly grateful for your admiration of my work...that means so much to me, a meaningfulness that I can't express in words. You've encouraged & inspired! Thanks for the contest well wishes. hugs and have great day, Sara
Date: 3/11/2024 6:26:00 PM
wow Sara, this is spectacular you made me lose myself in the color yellow, its always been a happy color for me even more now gl in the contest, a fav for me,
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/12/2024 4:45:00 AM
awww, dear Rose, your comments are wonderful and brought me warmth to the beginning of my day. I'm glad yellow is a happy color for your. I appreciate your visit and your well wishes for the contest. have a blessed day, hugs, Sara
Date: 3/11/2024 5:40:00 PM
Great entry for the "Yellow" contest, Sara. Your list of the attributes and things of yellow were lovely. (Did notice, you left out the yellow submarine) we'll live. :-) Have a joyful "yellow" day! Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/11/2024 6:00:00 PM
oh no, I forgot the 'yellow submarine!' Glad you liked my poem anyway. I appreciate your visit, dear hubby....hugs, sara
Date: 3/11/2024 3:57:00 PM
Awww so beautiful and cheerful. I liked it a lot! :) Hugs-
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Date: 3/11/2024 6:01:00 PM
thank you for your visit and kind comments, Paige. Grateful you liked the cheery nature of my poem. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 3/11/2024 3:34:00 PM
'the morning of citrine' - I like that one, Sara. G.L. in the contest. ~ gw
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/11/2024 6:01:00 PM
glad you liked 'morning of citrine.' Thanks for your visit, Gershon, and for your well wishes, have a great evening, Sara
Date: 3/11/2024 2:39:00 PM
Essence of the Marigold I adored reading your poem here many blessings.
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Date: 3/11/2024 6:02:00 PM
thanks for dropping by, Yolanda! Glad you enjoyed my poem; have a blessed evening, Sara
Date: 3/11/2024 1:35:00 PM
Yellow is the egg yolk and buttery toast I eat while watching butterflies…lovely images of flowers and metaphorical honey. Hugs ~ Kim
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/11/2024 6:03:00 PM
thank you Kim for visiting and for your gracious comments. Wishing you a blessed evening, Sara
Date: 3/11/2024 1:21:00 PM
A lovely idea for this form and contest.. I think yellow is definitely a spring colour.. your poem has included so many aspects of yellow.. it flows and rhymes so well too..
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/11/2024 6:04:00 PM
thanks for your upbeat comments, Silent One. I agree...yellow is a spring color...and I guess when I wrote my poem I was enjoying a warm, sunny spring day. :-)
Date: 3/11/2024 10:57:00 AM
Hello Sara , what an absolute exquisite description and portrayal of yellow from egg yolk , buttery toast to the canary who sits upon your rooftop , every line is simply magical . Beautiful as always
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/11/2024 6:05:00 PM
thank you, Daniel, for your generous and thoughtful words. I appreciate you stopping by...have a splendid evening, Sara
Date: 3/11/2024 10:49:00 AM
Well defined gems in yellow. Nice work.
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Date: 3/11/2024 6:05:00 PM
thank you, Jay. You're kind. have a great evening, Sara
Date: 3/11/2024 9:16:00 AM
I can smell that field of marigolds especially with the heat of the yellow sunshine upon them. I like yellow light, I can wear light yellow, though the rest of the shades elude me. I like a yellow room as long as its not to bright. And yellow cars make me smile. So many wonderful things flashed in my memory reading your poem. Thanks for the uplift!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/11/2024 6:07:00 PM
thank you, Susan, for your visit and for sharing your love for yellow. We must be kindred spirits with our shared love and appreciation for yellow. I like soft yellow...it's cheery without being overpowering. I guess I like the warmth it offers. Appreciate your visit; have a great evening, Sara
Date: 3/11/2024 8:51:00 AM
Dear Sara, Your poem beautifully captures the essence of yellow, infusing each line with warmth and vibrancy. For me it's like taking a stroll through a sun-kissed garden, experiencing the myriad shades of yellow in nature's palette. From the golden sun to the fluttering butterflies, your words evoke a sense of joy and contentment. This is such delightful ode to the color yellow. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 3/11/2024 6:08:00 PM
awww, thank you, Daniel, for your encouraging words. I hope I didn't overdo the yellow...but at least you liked strolling through the sun-kissed garden. An ode to yellow this truly is :-) Thanks for visiting, have a blessed evening, Sara
Date: 3/11/2024 6:54:00 AM
Amazing writing. I just love this so. Beautifully done. Someone I worked with once told me that I was Yellow because of my bright disposition... I loved that, but not nearly so much as I love your poem. Love it and sure it will win a high placement. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 3/11/2024 6:09:00 PM
awww, thanks, Gina, for your kind words...they mean a lot to me. I can see why a co-worker would call you 'yellow' because you seem to me to have a sunny disposition that comes through in your poetry and comments. Grateful you liked my poem...have a blessed evening, Sara
Date: 3/11/2024 6:24:00 AM
You defined it brilliantly, Sara. Much enjoyed the examples of yellow that beautify your poem.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/11/2024 6:10:00 PM
thank you, Vijay, for your comments on what now appears to be an 'ode to yellow.' :-) enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 3/11/2024 5:40:00 AM
So many beautiful things are adorned in yellow, Wonderful write
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/11/2024 6:10:00 PM
thank you, Joseph, for commenting on my 'ode to yellow' :-) have a great evening, Sara

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