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Like the strokes of an artist’s brush Painting a self-portrait of my life The colors are people, events, and experiences Each stroke flows into the next creating the picture A step back is needed at times To observe the full scope of life To include the essence of my being Expressing all aspects as one Without the help of the master creator I can not finish this work completely Knowing not how I will fully evolve In faith I place my brush into the Master's hand

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Date: 1/24/2024 10:39:00 PM
With experiences earned in life and exploring into the depths of our own heart, we can see what kind of a life we have been leading and draw a self portrait. But to give it the finishing touch and gloss, we need the help of the Great Artist. This abidance in Him makes your life beautiful ! A lovely poem.
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Date: 1/25/2024 9:16:00 PM
I agree, Valsa. You are a joy in my life. Thank you for supporting my poetry through your encouragement, my dear friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Date: 1/24/2024 4:30:00 AM
I enjoyed the depth of your poem, dear hubby. I especially liked the overarching Master (God) artist as you describe your life with its experiences, adventures, people, and events...such a rush of things at times. Your faith is strong, and with it and the Master's hand, you've led an extraordinary life. Well done...wish I could fave, hugs, me
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Date: 1/24/2024 6:55:00 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting on all of my poetry, Sara. You are the best, and my favorite! :-) Bill
Date: 1/24/2024 12:01:00 AM
beautiful, God can inspire and protect the artist as a muse , thanks Bill, excellent poem
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Date: 1/24/2024 6:56:00 PM
Thank you for the comment, Yann. Have a great week, my friend. Bill
Date: 1/23/2024 8:29:00 PM
That's a safe bet, I'd say. He has those 'master-strokes.' ~ gw
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Date: 1/23/2024 8:46:00 PM
Made me smile. His art is awesome. :-) bb
Date: 1/23/2024 2:56:00 PM
Nice to see you back my Texas friend.
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Date: 1/23/2024 5:19:00 PM
Thanks Jerry, I should be back up to speed in a couple of days. Have a great week, my friend. Bill
Date: 1/23/2024 1:38:00 PM
Such a lovely poem. It's true that without the help of the master creator we can't progress... Thank you for sharing your thoughts Bill!
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Date: 1/23/2024 5:16:00 PM
Thanks for a first visit, Smita. Come again soon! Have a great week! Bill
Date: 1/23/2024 10:44:00 AM
The art is complete when it is appreciated by others.
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Date: 1/23/2024 5:23:00 PM
Thanks for the comment, Jay. I appreciate your reading and commenting on my poetry, my friend. Bill
Date: 1/23/2024 10:05:00 AM
With guidance from the master you cannot go far wrong Bill. Welcome back. Tom
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Date: 1/23/2024 5:33:00 PM
Thank you, Tom. It's been too long. I hope your PT is going well and the healing is going well too. Thanks for the comments, my friend. Bill
Date: 1/23/2024 9:35:00 AM
My friend Bill its nice to see you come out of hibernation.. I love how your captures the essence of life as a work of art, skilfully using the metaphor of an artist painting a self-portrait. The imagery of colours representing people, events, and experiences, with each stroke seamlessly flowing into the next, creates a vivid picture of the interconnectedness of life's moments..
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Date: 1/23/2024 6:00:00 PM
About time, I like it in here (poetry soup) better than out there, (the world). I'll be back full speed in a day or two. It's been so long; I have to pace myself for a few days. lol Thanks for the visit and comments, Silent One, I've missed your poetry. I'll be by soon. Have a pleasant evening, my friend. Bill
Date: 1/23/2024 8:08:00 AM
Dear bill, its so good to see you back to writing and sharing your thoughts in the most poetic manner which also depicts wisdom and truth in the most profound manner. As i agree with you too that sometimes it is necessary to take a step back, reflect, and think, connect with inner self to move on and heal, from past etc. faith is the guide, when all is dark, we find light through darkness, and you’ve expressed that so well here: i am glad you found light amidst all. Pleasure reading your work
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Date: 1/23/2024 9:16:00 AM
Thank you for the visit and comments, my friend. I've missed to daily interactions with friends like you here at Poetry Soup these past few weeks. I should be back to my normal activity level in these next few days. Have a pleasant week, Ink. Hugs, Bill

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