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WORKSHOP POEM: GRAND TOUR TO FAIRYLAND Sprinkled-rainbow clouds reign above the skies, peeping yellow in-between wrinkled pillars shine like bulbs to crash the net of fog attached to curve hands of green Cathedrals. A carpet of bluebells and daffodils covers the earth below. Creeping slow are mosses and vines hugging the trees. Polka dots of blood rich roses stand out. Festoons of lavanders, garlands of lilacs marched a primrose path for the queen while the fruits from cherries' hush blush; to peaches supple flair winks on mellow pear. Afloat midair are high and low golden notes trembling free upon river runs and bushes land. Snaps and bounds from strums of bumblebees; signal the nightingales to sing their anthem loud; Their thumps of dulcet-sounds shake the hours. Scents pure as Spring May cocoons the fair while all around swirls the dragonflies-- the star dancers of the sun-kissed day. Rushing wind whistles a lullaby to cast a spell of never-never-land, for there live... thumb-size flying creatures of their kind. Regal in blinding white are the fays and fairies. __________________________________________________ NEW TITLE: MY TRIP TO FAIRYLAND Rainbow-sprinkled clouds marching above the skies, Sun's golden rays peek in-between curved hands of lush green Cathedrals crashing the net of fog sleeping on the ground. A carpet of bluebells plus flashing violets exhale scents on the air. Sly-like mosses and vines hug the trunk of trees. Polka dots of blood rich roses pose, standing grand. Festoons of lavanders, garland of lilacs, swelling banana blossoms, cherries hush-rush blushes with peaches winking flair on frowning pears all prod to honor the queen. High and low golden notes tremble free upon river runs to proud bushes land. From strums of bumblebees are leaps and pounds, luring nightingales'anthem on a merry-dancing groove. Thumps of dulcet-sounds shake the passing hours, Rainbow hues cocoons the fair while all around dragonflies twirl and dive- they, the star-dancers of that sun kissed day. Impressed wind whistles the lullaby spelling never-never-land, for there... there live.. thumb-size flying creatures regal in blinding white-- are the fays and fairies. ______________________________________________ POEM OF THE DAY ---April 07, 2015 ©O.E> Guillermo 9:52 pm, April 05, 2015

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Date: 8/26/2015 1:31:00 AM
Olive, Am Grand i read this, it's so enchanting so full of fantasy, am grand because this an awesome piece of work*****BLESSINGS
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Date: 6/10/2015 8:22:00 PM
WOW. Look at all that hard work! Way to go, Olive! And thank you for reaching out to your fellow participants. Your energy and enthusiasm should light up the house ;)
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Date: 7/1/2015 9:32:00 AM
thank you so much Cyndi.. =)!
Date: 6/9/2015 11:46:00 PM
I love the revised poem. both are nice
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Date: 7/1/2015 9:30:00 AM
thanks much SKat.. =)!
Date: 6/3/2015 11:39:00 PM
Olive, your revised poem is quite wonderful, you must be so proud and thanks for visiting my poem, a special gift
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Date: 6/15/2015 8:41:00 AM
thank you much Broken WIngs.. :)!
Date: 5/15/2015 8:08:00 PM
Olive the first page layout presents better stay with the longer lines Line 3 [Sun's]Line 6 maybe [curved hands of lush green cathedrals- are these trees? CRUSHing the net of fog- Light & love
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/14/2015 11:04:00 AM
thank you Debbie for your support. :D!
Date: 5/13/2015 11:58:00 AM
This is very pretty!! I really love it!! :-) :-)
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Date: 6/8/2015 2:01:00 AM
thank you so much.. =')
Date: 5/13/2015 7:50:00 AM
Hi little one - Dee sent me over. #1 what is being sprinkled? If the CLOUDS are being sprinkled with rainbows its RAINBOW-SPRINKLED clouds - IF the rainbow is being sprinkled with clouds its CLOUD sprinkled rainbows - I don't know if you have here what you want & I don't think what you have is gramatically correct. What are the [yellow streaks?] what are the wrinkled pillars?] it's unclear.
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Date: 5/15/2015 7:52:00 AM
Hi Debbie.. thank you so much for that advice.. :) again I changed, I am onto so much nowadays that I rarely am here to comment, or post something.. but I have poems though left unfinished.. thanks much... :)!hugs~olive eloisa
Date: 5/11/2015 12:15:00 PM
I'll have to come back tonight, Olive... as I'm in super crazy busy mode, right now. Lovely images and a good one to pick for the workshop. Many may think, wait a minute, this has won a contest or how could someone think of revising a poem that made poem of the day on Soup? Why? I'm glad you took up the torch and chose this one. Even poets who have had their poems published, look at their poetry in those books and think, I wish that word was... oh, if I could just change that line...lol...
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Date: 5/12/2015 8:38:00 AM
I MUST write today... but I promise to stop by tonight and see what I can see. I deleted my own poem of the day ;) It had over a thousand hits, but was definitely NOT my best work. Hugs, Cyndi
Date: 4/11/2015 11:01:00 AM
oh what a great tour in fairyland... exquisite poem .. the most brilliant one!!! can't stop myself smiling... Good job, eloi !!! :"))
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/28/2015 6:28:00 PM
thank you Aiyah.. :)! God bless :)!
Date: 4/9/2015 5:06:00 PM
Beautifully penned Olive. A very peaceful and calm picture you have painted.
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Date: 5/15/2015 7:53:00 AM
thank you so much Brenda.. :) I appreciate you coming by and dropping your comment.. :)!
Date: 4/8/2015 12:37:00 PM
Sorry I missed reading this yesterday, Olive! But congratulations on POTD for your lovely poem so full of imagery on your 'grand tour to fairyland.' Surely, a magical journey! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/26/2015 10:51:00 PM
It's okei Sandra.. :)! I appreciate you always dropping by.. :)!!!~olive eloisa
Date: 4/8/2015 2:45:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/28/2015 6:27:00 PM
thank you so much Ravi!>. :)
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Date: 4/21/2015 9:44:00 AM
thank you so much Ravi.. :)! Glad you like it.. :)!
Date: 4/8/2015 1:18:00 AM
You've painted a magnificent scene, fit for a golden frame. A word-painting for everyone to relax into.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/19/2015 9:55:00 PM
thank you so much ML/ :)! hugs!
Date: 4/7/2015 7:17:00 PM
Wow! Wow! Wow! Wow! Congratulations on this wonderful write being chosen poem of the day.
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Date: 4/19/2015 9:54:00 PM
thank much MAurice... :)~ olive eloisa :)!
Date: 4/7/2015 6:52:00 PM
I love it, it makes me think of Spring. Congrats on the poem of the Day.
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Date: 4/18/2015 8:41:00 AM
thank you so much MArilyn.. :)!
Date: 4/7/2015 6:39:00 PM
Wonderful. Grats on poem of the day!
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Date: 4/18/2015 8:23:00 AM
thank you Cassie.. :)!
Date: 4/7/2015 1:43:00 PM
So deserved being graced with POTD for this wonderfully colourful poetry, warm hugs always, //Dino James...
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Date: 4/18/2015 5:54:00 AM
thanks much JAmes.. :)! Hugs back..!
Date: 4/7/2015 12:30:00 PM
love this!! u literally poured out my fantasies ..u really did magic with your words..
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Date: 4/16/2015 11:04:00 AM
thank you so much for the visit!!.. :)! well somebody told me that i can write anyhting about it as nobody has seen a fairyland it can be on light or dark one.. I chose a happy jolly one.. :)!
Date: 4/7/2015 11:38:00 AM
Wow, you've taken us on a beautiful, magical journey, Olive! Congrats on being chosen TPOD!! Hugs Rhonda
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Date: 4/16/2015 11:02:00 AM
thank you so much Rhonda.. :)!!! I appreciate your visits.. :)! GOd bless~olive eloisa
Date: 4/7/2015 11:05:00 AM
WEEEEEEE!!! I love how you write that on your posts, Olive. SO SO YOU! This captured your free imaginative spirit so well. I don't know how you find the words...Festoons of lavender...THUMPS of dulcet sounds. You think out of the box. :) Congrats on POTD. :) Hugs
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Date: 4/10/2015 7:48:00 PM
:) weeeee I am in my jolly light moods Eileen and you are so right.. :)! thank you for your generous comments... :)! //olive eloisa hugs back!
Date: 4/7/2015 10:23:00 AM
Hey Olive, BIG congratulations on your amazing poem being chosen for POTD! A wonderful and deeply imaginative piece of art. Well deserved! Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 4/10/2015 7:35:00 PM
thank you so much Neva.. :)! I am glad you like it.. :)! Be blessed too.. :)! olive
Date: 4/7/2015 8:31:00 AM
Imagery outstanding a 7 and a fav. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Blessings dear friend eve
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Date: 4/10/2015 7:34:00 PM
thank you so much Eve.. :) making it a fave is a wow for me.. :)! hugs! blessings to you also.. :)!//olive eloisa
Date: 4/7/2015 7:47:00 AM
- BRAVO !! - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Olive !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/10/2015 7:33:00 PM
thank you Anne Lise.. :)! I appreciate you stopping by.. :)! weeee! hugs back!//olive eloisa
Date: 4/7/2015 7:13:00 AM
poem of the dayyyy woohooo congrats Olive:-) Hugs jan xxxx
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Date: 4/9/2015 7:40:00 PM
thanks much JAn.. :D! hugs back!! yey!
Date: 4/6/2015 3:10:00 PM
Awesome imagery you have put on offer, Olive_eloi! My senses are captivated. Do you have an extra ticket? Dying to visit your bewitching fairyland:) hugs // paul
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Date: 4/9/2015 3:50:00 PM
if i have tickets ill give two to you.. fr ou and Valentina :)!!!wee
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