Wonderstruck

I was only but a child
and to me, she was the littlest of bugs
within my tiny hands
I gave her the fragilest of hugs.

In my life I would experience
a similar range of emotions,
like gleaming at Niagara Falls
and watching my daughter do backflips in angelic motion.

But this day I do remember
as I examined my little friend
she had uneven black spots on a divided red shell
with one wing unfolded towards the left near end.

A miracle I imagined
that a lady bug would be in my hand
and that I may use my tiny fingers 
to make her whole again.

My eyes wide open
and I just wanted to show my mom
to show her what nature brought me
that was absent of all sound.

To right the wing I puffed my lips
and blew it a little kiss
and to my amazement, she corrected herself
and flew away along with my childhood bliss.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Goldsmith Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 8:21 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Have a great/blessed day.............
Agustin Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 12:03 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing what fascinates you through this fascinating muse of yours. God bless you.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 6:15 PM
I knew I had read this wonderful poem before. Congratulations on your deserving Second Place win Robert. I adored it! Blessings xxoo
Peck Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 2:25 PM
Aww, Robert, your poem is beautiful in its simplicity and heart. (But I also save bugs and birds and creatures :)
Kyser Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 1:52 PM
Robert - This was a “simple” poem, and I don’t mean that in any way negatively. It was childlike in its wonder and I connected strongly to it, much in the way my granddaughter Greta meets the world. I really loved this one. Congrats on your 2nd place in the contest and thanks so much for entering.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 7:47 PM
Your poem was heartwarming Robert. I love children and delight in their discoveries. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo
Roper Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 7:18 PM
Back with congratulations. Blessing to you
Flood Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 11:26 AM
Smashing, Robert. Funny how most of us aren’t over keen on beetles/bugs but will happily let a ladybug crawl all over them. Congrats on your win. Terry
Liguori Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 11:35 AM
Thanks Terry!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 1:59 AM
This is so sweet Robert. There are certain times when we are in awe, that no matter our age, we never forget. A beautiful inspiring example. Blessings
Liguori Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 6:47 AM
Thank you Connie!
Agustin Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 8:07 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exemplifying what your contest requires. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently judged contest. God bless you.
Liguori Avatar
January 20, 2022 at 6:47 AM
Thank you Beata!
Daniel Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 4:29 AM
An excellent poem about an encounter with lady bug, Robert:)
Liguori Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 9:15 AM
Thank you Jo!
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 9:13 PM
that is SO cool. I love those little bugs!!
Liguori Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 9:14 AM
Thank you Andrea!
Roper Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 11:49 AM
A ladybug in a small child's hand; awestruck. nicely written , Robert, great for an example for your contest.
Liguori Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 9:15 AM
Thank you Eve!
Calasibetta Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 9:31 AM
Your poem reveals innocence and compassion....lovely! Blessings, Paulette
Liguori Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 11:06 AM
Thank you Paulette!
Norton Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 9:24 AM
What a charming poem. I loved ladybugs as a kid. Thank you for sharing. I also wanted to thank you for sponsoring your poetry contests, and for my placement in your recent "Soul" contest. I'm very glad that you enjoyed my submission. Thank you, thank you. Hope you have a great day. Best wishes, Bryan
Liguori Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 11:06 AM
Thank you Bryan!
Scragg Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 8:47 AM
This is lovely. Can't beat the beauty of nature ever even in its smaller forms. I think most children love ladybirds. It's the bug that introduces bugs I think. I really enjoyed this reminder with your poem. :-D
Liguori Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 11:06 AM
Thank you Nat!
Brown Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 5:33 PM
Robert, This is sweet, it put a smile on my face. Heartfelt ~ Debbie
Liguori Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 11:05 AM
Thank you Debbie!
Poet Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 12:54 PM
Amazing. This, though, is something I appreciate. Beautiful and brimming with childlike delight and happiness, It's incredible. Blessings,
Liguori Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 10:09 AM
Thank you Lasaad!
Mcintosh Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 9:52 AM
Brilliant. I love this one. It's the best I've read of your poems, friend. Love it. God bless you. Love, Gina
Liguori Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 10:47 AM
Thank you Regina!
La France Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 8:12 AM
Robert, beautiful and full of childhood wonder and bliss, I love your poem, and what a great example for your contest~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Liguori Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 10:48 AM
Thank you Constance!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 7:03 AM
Robert, this is a gem!
Liguori Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 10:48 AM
Thank you Kim!
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