Wonderstruck

I was only but a child
and to me, she was the littlest of bugs
within my tiny hands
I gave her the fragilest of hugs.

In my life I would experience
a similar range of emotions,
like gleaming at Niagara Falls
and watching my daughter do backflips in angelic motion.

But this day I do remember
as I examined my little friend
she had uneven black spots on a divided red shell
with one wing unfolded towards the left near end.

A miracle I imagined
that a lady bug would be in my hand
and that I may use my tiny fingers 
to make her whole again.

My eyes wide open
and I just wanted to show my mom
to show her what nature brought me
that was absent of all sound.

To right the wing I puffed my lips
and blew it a little kiss
and to my amazement, she corrected herself
and flew away along with my childhood bliss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 6/3/2022 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Have a great/blessed day.............
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Date: 6/3/2022 12:03:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing what fascinates you through this fascinating muse of yours. God bless you.
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Date: 6/2/2022 6:15:00 PM
I knew I had read this wonderful poem before. Congratulations on your deserving Second Place win Robert. I adored it! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/2/2022 2:25:00 PM
Aww, Robert, your poem is beautiful in its simplicity and heart. (But I also save bugs and birds and creatures :)
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Date: 6/2/2022 1:52:00 PM
Robert - This was a “simple” poem, and I don’t mean that in any way negatively. It was childlike in its wonder and I connected strongly to it, much in the way my granddaughter Greta meets the world. I really loved this one. Congrats on your 2nd place in the contest and thanks so much for entering.
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Date: 1/20/2022 7:47:00 PM
Your poem was heartwarming Robert. I love children and delight in their discoveries. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/20/2022 7:18:00 PM
Back with congratulations. Blessing to you
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Date: 1/20/2022 11:26:00 AM
Smashing, Robert. Funny how most of us aren’t over keen on beetles/bugs but will happily let a ladybug crawl all over them. Congrats on your win. Terry
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 1/20/2022 11:35:00 AM
Thanks Terry!
Date: 11/23/2021 1:59:00 AM
This is so sweet Robert. There are certain times when we are in awe, that no matter our age, we never forget. A beautiful inspiring example. Blessings
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 1/20/2022 6:47:00 AM
Thank you Connie!
Date: 11/22/2021 8:07:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exemplifying what your contest requires. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently judged contest. God bless you.
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 1/20/2022 6:47:00 AM
Thank you Beata!
Date: 11/22/2021 4:29:00 AM
An excellent poem about an encounter with lady bug, Robert:)
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 11/22/2021 9:15:00 AM
Thank you Jo!
Date: 11/21/2021 9:13:00 PM
that is SO cool. I love those little bugs!!
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 11/22/2021 9:14:00 AM
Thank you Andrea!
Date: 11/21/2021 11:49:00 AM
A ladybug in a small child's hand; awestruck. nicely written , Robert, great for an example for your contest.
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 11/22/2021 9:15:00 AM
Thank you Eve!
Date: 11/21/2021 9:31:00 AM
Your poem reveals innocence and compassion....lovely! Blessings, Paulette
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 11/21/2021 11:06:00 AM
Thank you Paulette!
Date: 11/21/2021 9:24:00 AM
What a charming poem. I loved ladybugs as a kid. Thank you for sharing. I also wanted to thank you for sponsoring your poetry contests, and for my placement in your recent "Soul" contest. I'm very glad that you enjoyed my submission. Thank you, thank you. Hope you have a great day. Best wishes, Bryan
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 11/21/2021 11:06:00 AM
Thank you Bryan!
Date: 11/21/2021 8:47:00 AM
This is lovely. Can't beat the beauty of nature ever even in its smaller forms. I think most children love ladybirds. It's the bug that introduces bugs I think. I really enjoyed this reminder with your poem. :-D
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 11/21/2021 11:06:00 AM
Thank you Nat!
Date: 11/20/2021 5:33:00 PM
Robert, This is sweet, it put a smile on my face. Heartfelt ~ Debbie
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 11/21/2021 11:05:00 AM
Thank you Debbie!
Date: 11/20/2021 12:54:00 PM
Amazing. This, though, is something I appreciate. Beautiful and brimming with childlike delight and happiness, It's incredible. Blessings,
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 11/21/2021 10:09:00 AM
Thank you Lasaad!
Date: 11/20/2021 9:52:00 AM
Brilliant. I love this one. It's the best I've read of your poems, friend. Love it. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 11/20/2021 10:47:00 AM
Thank you Regina!
Date: 11/20/2021 8:12:00 AM
Robert, beautiful and full of childhood wonder and bliss, I love your poem, and what a great example for your contest~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 11/20/2021 10:48:00 AM
Thank you Constance!
Date: 11/20/2021 7:03:00 AM
Robert, this is a gem!
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Robert James Liguori
Date: 11/20/2021 10:48:00 AM
Thank you Kim!
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